nice track, your voice just dont fits to the beat man, nice hook, i like it, lyrics are pretty deep and i like them, immortals beat werd the beat is just really simple but really dope, quality is pretty damn good, nice track for something you wrott fast lol, just your voice, sometimes theres TOO much emotions haha you know what i meen, overall dope track mate
RTF on my beat:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...918#post2639918

LMAO....................

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Rtf Now.............

Listening...

Loving the beat...lyrics are dope...flow is good, it sorda sounds off beat in a sense...but it's straight, it sounds good. Delivery is perfect.

Hook is ill...we should do something like this for our collab.

Shit is ill...no doubt about it.

RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221083

Feed used 1/1/06 "Tides"

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First off, you're gay. Like a bag of nickels.

Now, with that said, lets get down to the feed. The beat is perfect for this song man. You ride it well, and your emotion and mic presence are amazing. Lyrical wise, this shit is deeper than a fucking giraffe's throat. Word at my dope wordplay. Word. Like I said on aim, this is one of the most meaningful/lyical songs I've heard man. I'm really feeling it, and this shit is mixtape material. We should collab sometime?

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^ hell no i already told u....im not collabing with you.....


ill return the favors later

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Can I Get A R!
Can I Get A T!
Can I Get A F!
Return The Favor!!! Yeaah

i left feed for dis on another site for ya ike but i'ma tell ya again this shit is great....9 outta 10...i haven't heard one track from ya that i didn't like...good shit man

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good beat choice...................

voice is illy..................

deleiveryz good...................

flowz dopeness............................

lyrics r nice........good message.............

hooks good.........real catchy....................

second verse is fucking dopeness.............................sikk lyrics............

overall dope track 10/10 in my opinion.......goin on my ipod
sikk shit ike...........keep doin ya thing.........
rtf on my track let it rain
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Well, you probably have enough feedback, but I didn't want you to feel left out.....lol.

This isn't that bad of a track. Some of the rhyme scheme that you used seemed pretty basic. Presence was nice though, as well as quality. Not really much I can say bad about this track.

Hit me up for a collab sometime dude.....™

RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221281

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