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Old 02-18-06, 05:04 AM   #1
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Portfolio Cover

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smoked a few blunts and came up with my new portfolio cover:
just some shit i been workin on, not finished, just letten yall see whats the basis...





lemme get some GOOOD,HONEST, CONSTRUCTIVE Crit.
or for the retards here: Lemme get some feedback
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Old 02-18-06, 12:58 PM   #2
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whats the deal? i cant get no comments?
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Old 02-18-06, 01:35 PM   #3
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the face you have cut and placed underneath that brush layer just looks soooooooooo unproffesional. The top of the head just looks sloppy and amateur. The subtext "constantly ceating chaos" cud b resized so the C doesnt touch the y falling down from the above text for clarity. Im not feelin the brick-esque type squares, can see what u wanted to do but it just seems too random, maybe balanced wid a similar image at the top of the cover or at a reduced opacity..the fact ur even using the word "portfolio" means your doing this for something of decent standard. Often portfolio covers that impress are those that are completely original or those that refelct ur style.
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Old 02-18-06, 01:59 PM   #4
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its still being worked on, im just letting yall get the idea im going for.
i just wanted to know what you thought of tht aspect, and theres no brushes on this, i dont use brushes player.
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