check that track out... its unfinished .... but its like 80% done so juss gimme some feedback on it..


my link is in my sig...

its pretty good

thanx

no no no no no no no no onoononono
I can tell your new, take your time, memorize before you spit, and put some kind of flare in your voice, wayyyy offff beat

well i am new to audio... i was off beat...?
i thought i had my flow on that one.... damn...
thanx for the feedback...

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yo, your voice isn't right, it sounds like your reading, you're off beat for a good portion of time... take mr.legends advice and memorize... but yo, what part-a TO ya from dawg... link me back... 1

hit up my isht... http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=64316

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thanx for feed

DawG,
this was....ummm...sad
i want to get the point accross to you with out like, being unconstructive....
ur flow...is scaring me...that is not flow....its like a white water rapids with a lot of water falls...its simple...and pointless....like most of rap
quality definatly could be upped....that aint my department....

DawG start there.....keep ya head up, im not tryin to be negative....

so how do i improve on my flow ?

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rhyme more words in sentences ..... and fa real peep ppl with nice flows like jay-z and shit....just make it sound nice i dunno...focus on written more and ya flow will just come to u...just keep droppin cuz practise makes perfect ya know...by the way kid do u know how ta dance???

yeah... why ...?

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