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Old 09-08-05, 12:33 AM   #1
Christianite
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Quick verse i wrote at work

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I’m lyrically troubled, words too subtle
Beginning to stumble, my world about to crumble
I don’t understand, You know the number of sand
My life is bland, but You still reach out Your hand
Your power is awesome, You make flowers blossom
Knowin’ what it would cost ‘em, You decided to dose ‘em
In Your blood, washin away all the mud
You made me a bud, even though I am a dud
Although I’m new, and one of the chosen few
Sometimes I don’t have a clue, am I gonna make it through
Show me Your wisdom, lead me to Your kingdom
Knowing I’ll only reach some, before You come
I know I ain’t perfect, Your mercy I don’t deserve it
In the end its worth it, cause I am Your servant
So as a lamb gone astray, lead me back to stay
Cause You are the Life, Truth, and Way, my Savior Son of Yahweh









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Old 09-11-05, 02:00 AM   #2
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ehhhh... ok I guess... ~> 5/10
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Old 09-14-05, 10:38 AM   #3
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its ok.. .5/10 but it went togeather good
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Old 09-14-05, 11:23 AM   #4
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yeah i agree wit tha majority on diz 1 it was ight but not good 4/10 ...but jus keep ya day job no hate
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