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08-16-05, 08:16 PM | #1 | |
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Short Diss To Don007
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SHORT DISS TO DON007
Even with a strip of land your script couldn't stand on Property you got a sink hole in your stink scrolls you’re a fan wrong Your deal is fake go talk to real estate your brain split And rotten even in plain knit cotton you couldn't be a legit Player you the type retard that need right guard your underarm Odor don't thunder a quotas of love with girls you blunder like farm People, so water the cows before slaughter your bowels And constipate your brains educate your mainframe with vowels Your lyrics are like idiots on white wine drunk and write blind So nighttime stay off the bottle, verses can’t excite minds |
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08-16-05, 11:40 PM | #2 | |||
pain is weakness leaving the body
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overall pretty good. i could catch the flow right off the bat, which is good. had some trouble understandin' some of the punches, which isn't a good sign unless they were personals. i gotta say that overall i was feelin' it. 7/10
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08-22-05, 12:29 AM | #3 | |
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Thanks For The Props On This For Real
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