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rdotgod 0 0%
Led Poetic 2 100.00%
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Old 01-01-05, 11:03 PM   #1
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03.rdotgod vs 17.Led Poetic

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Rules:

Battle opened......

Check in 48 hours after battle was opened
Drop verse 48 hours after check ing
Voting end 72 hours after verse was spit

16 Lines
No Biting
No Feeding
No Recycling
The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins

If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney!

Good Luck!

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4fil
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Originally Posted by Nostradamus
Your really dope though..

Last edited by 4fil : 01-03-05 at 07:43 PM.
 
Old 01-02-05, 12:26 PM   #2
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Old 01-02-05, 03:29 PM   #3
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Check in... Might need an extension cause this new shit is gay... and i have to drop at night cuase i work during the day on the week... shit should just be due wednesday at 12 eastrn time
If you need an exstention please PM me.... max extention is 24 hours.....

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Old 01-03-05, 08:49 PM   #4
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This kid is wack as fuck, forget how it sounds
I'll leave to a round of applause, you're left applauded w/ rounds
Going down, honestly, ya punches aint never connected
Like how I rise to the occasion and Led just stands corrected
Never respected, bills leave you evicted, my chill in banks
But yes ya shit is underground, floating in a septic tank
C'mon hardhitter... MY style, MY avy... its gotten worse
When we thought Attack of the Clones was a movie til we read ya verse
And we know its comin, Ya known for words been bitten
So I'll collect enough chips from ya teeth, to play poker with em
Fuck it kid, you cant win, regardless of what you brought
Quick to slam ya head through a TV, just to channel ya thoughts
And ya audios are wack as fuck, full of static and such
Even ya hairline must be jealous of ya skill receding so much
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I hate to be mean, but its quite ironic you see
When to win, I'll dim the lights to this LED
 
Old 01-04-05, 03:28 PM   #5
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Wow that's gay Chrit...lol...every single line you got is recycled.....want links?? who cares...either way you lose
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Stupid bitch, we know why ya here but still this dude sucks
Bit too much at Arby...
He's nationally banned from the restraunt for eatin too much
Voters just love ya dick, but honestly ya retirements overdue
I tried to send a Clue....but the fat fuck ate Parker Brothers too
Rdot's a weak bitch, RV can only think of how "great" he is
Punches so played....they only remind me of ya relationships
^Fuck that was played, but ya know it'll still be curses
Cuz if I've bit, then everyone nose a familar face in ya verses
Dont even let me go to ya desperate audios ya wack queer
C-Section said he's been tryin get with DZK for the past YEAR
He can feel the loss comin, Chrit was just trimming weight
When every Single line in ya verse was too ugly for any dates
We know he saw my punches and his face set a frown...
Fucked you up so bad, ....my dick'll never let him down
^Voters might not get it...but they can get a vision in mental
Cuz they'll secret stashed....
And I aint talkin late night comedy central...

Last edited by Led Poetic : 01-04-05 at 03:31 PM.
 
Old 01-04-05, 03:41 PM   #6
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Wow I really expected Chrit to not do that...=/....and I expected a whole lot less from Led

Quote:
Originally Posted by RdotGod
This kid is wack as fuck, forget how it sounds
I'll leave to a round of applause, you're left applauded w/ rounds
Decent....4/10
Going down, honestly, ya punches aint never connected
Like how I rise to the occasion and Led just stands corrected
Played...3/10
Never respected, bills leave you evicted, my chill in banks
But yes ya shit is underground, floating in a septic tank
Good wit and punch....6/10
C'mon hardhitter... MY style, MY avy... its gotten worse
When we thought Attack of the Clones was a movie til we read ya verse
Played....3/10
And we know its comin, Ya known for words been bitten
So I'll collect enough chips from ya teeth, to play poker with em
Recycled like woah...=(.....4/10
Fuck it kid, you cant win, regardless of what you brought
Quick to slam ya head through a TV, just to channel ya thoughts
Pliggity plizzayed.....2/10
And ya audios are wack as fuck, full of static and such
Even ya hairline must be jealous of ya skill receding so much
Played....3/10
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I hate to be mean, but its quite ironic you see
When to win, I'll dim the lights to this LED
Decent....hard to get....4/10


RdotGod's Overall Verse: 29/80
Comments:
I REALLY REALLY hope your saving some good shit for the LLL Playoffs and you just didnt have time.....I've seen you do alot better, and most of these lines were played and I really just didnt feel it because I know that you know they are...=(....you know Im being straight up



Quote:
Originally Posted by Led Poetic
Stupid bitch, we know why ya here but still this dude sucks
Bit too much at Arby...
He's nationally banned from the restraunt for eatin too much
Good wit.....kinda played....but I havent seen used like this....5/10
Voters just love ya dick, but honestly ya retirements overdue
I tried to send a Clue....but the fat fuck ate Parker Brothers too
Meh.....ok...3/10
Rdot's a weak bitch, RV can only think of how "great" he is
Punches so played....they only remind me of ya relationships
Played....3/10
^Fuck that was played, but ya know it'll still be curses
Cuz if I've bit, then everyone nose a familar face in ya verses
Good and true....this time around at least....6/10
Dont even let me go to ya desperate audios ya wack queer
C-Section said he's been tryin get with DZK for the past YEAR
Coul've been much better.....5/10
He can feel the loss comin, Chrit was just trimming weight
When every Single line in ya verse was too ugly for any dates
Nice.....7/10
We know he saw my punches and his face set a frown...
Fucked you up so bad, ....my dick'll never let him down
Good wit and punch.....6/10
^Voters might not get it...but they can get a vision in mental
Cuz they'll secret stashed....
And I aint talkin late night comedy central...
Dope nameplay and punch....8/10


Led Poetic's Overall Verse: 43/80
Comments:
After your first few lines... it got better....iono...you started off weak and you just picked it up better and better towards the end.....punch of the battle was your closer



Hate to say it, and I dont even know how it happened (dont be mad at me either Chrit) but you came played....and I have to be real with you...Led won for the last half of his verse.....this match was the exact opposite of that I thought it would be...


Vote - Led Poetic
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Old 01-04-05, 05:23 PM   #7
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rdotgod:


This kid is wack as fuck, forget how it sounds
I'll leave to a round of applause, you're left applauded w/ rounds
^^dope opener decent punch 7/10
Going down, honestly, ya punches aint never connected
Like how I rise to the occasion and Led just stands corrected
^^wack 3/10
Never respected, bills leave you evicted, my chill in banks
But yes ya shit is underground, floating in a septic tank
^^decent meta wack set up 3/10
C'mon hardhitter... MY style, MY avy... its gotten worse
When we thought Attack of the Clones was a movie til we read ya verse
^^good bar 5/10
And we know its comin, Ya known for words been bitten
So I'll collect enough chips from ya teeth, to play poker with em
^^decent punch good meta 7/10
Fuck it kid, you cant win, regardless of what you brought
Quick to slam ya head through a TV, just to channel ya thoughts
^^wow this is so played its pathetic no respect for this lame shit 0/10
And ya audios are wack as fuck, full of static and such
Even ya hairline must be jealous of ya skill receding so much
^^best bar 8/10
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I hate to be mean, but its quite ironic you see
When to win, I'll dim the lights to this LED
^^wack punch wack meta wack closer 2/10

overall : 35/80 (44%)

ok this tourney is almost over so you drop the wackest verse you have dropped so far... i thought you would be in the finals if not win but you dissapointed me this with sad excuse for a verse.. from one of RB/RV's best


led poetic:


Stupid bitch, we know why ya here but still this dude sucks
Bit too much at Arby...
He's nationally banned from the restraunt for eatin too much
^^wack 3/10
Voters just love ya dick, but honestly ya retirements overdue
I tried to send a Clue....but the fat fuck ate Parker Brothers too
^^lmao made me laugh dope bar dope meta 9/10
Rdot's a weak bitch, RV can only think of how "great" he is
Punches so played....they only remind me of ya relationships
^^decent 5/10
^Fuck that was played, but ya know it'll still be curses
Cuz if I've bit, then everyone nose a familar face in ya verses
^^dope bar 7/10
Dont even let me go to ya desperate audios ya wack queer
C-Section said he's been tryin get with DZK for the past YEAR
^^no 3/10
He can feel the loss comin, Chrit was just trimming weight
When every Single line in ya verse was too ugly for any dates
^^dope bar 7/10
We know he saw my punches and his face set a frown...
Fucked you up so bad, ....my dick'll never let him down
^^ no 4/10
^Voters might not get it...but they can get a vision in mental
Cuz they'll secret stashed....
And I aint talkin late night comedy central...
^^good meta decent closer 6/10

overall : 44/80 (55%)


nothing really amazing from you either... its sad that 2 dope people drop their worst verses so far in the tourney.. it saddens me that with all the skill you two have you dont show off something extremel;y dope... either way led youll probably win this battle come wack next week youre gonna be out come dope or dont come at all

vote: led poetic
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Old 01-04-05, 07:05 PM   #8
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Chrits best lines:
This kid is wack as fuck, forget how it sounds
I'll leave to a round of applause, you're left applauded w/ rounds

And we know its comin, Ya known for words been bitten
So I'll collect enough chips from ya teeth, to play poker with em

And ya audios are wack as fuck, full of static and such
Even ya hairline must be jealous of ya skill receding so much
^^all some nice lines....... i luv ur metas, i thought they were creative... and well written these bars not too bad, was aight, the attack of the clones bar wasn't too bad either, kinda funny but coulda been worded better..

Led Poetic:
^Fuck that was played, but ya know it'll still be curses
Cuz if I've bit, then everyone nose a familar face in ya verses

He can feel the loss comin, Chrit was just trimming weight
When every Single line in ya verse was too ugly for any dates
^nice personal........ ha omg

^Voters might not get it...but they can get a vision in mental
Cuz they'll secret stashed....
And I aint talkin late night comedy central...
best closer coulda been worded better, however..

I was feeling your word play this time, Led Poetic, both y'all verses weren't too strong.. however, the one who took this slightly happened to be Led.. u had better personals although u coulda worded it better fa real.. i wasn't feelin sum of the played lines that Rdot had.. like the tv and channeling one..
v/ Led Poetic
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Old 01-05-05, 12:11 AM   #9
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Led poetic advances to the semifinals winning by KO 3 votes to 0
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