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Distilled 3 50.00%
Symm3trik 3 50.00%
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Old 12-09-04, 04:16 PM   #1
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10. Distilled Vs. 55. Symm3trik

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Battles open Friday Night At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Verse's Due By Tuesday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Voting Ends Thursday At 12:00 Am Eastern Time

10 Lines
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The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins

If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney!

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Old 12-10-04, 10:24 PM   #2
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Old 12-11-04, 05:13 PM   #3
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Old 12-12-04, 09:36 PM   #4
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what ever.....dropping wack here...

Trifles, mince pies...damn man your stereotype needs be broaden
cause when syms surrounded by 400 distills...call him "Jail Warden"
and so only the dopest will survive...so for you death is in effect
it's not just skills wise 60 more heads dies...
...your wackness's giving em heart attacks.
you're what I expect...most of ur punches don't make half sense
I could tell your time's long over...cause "distilled"'s a past tense
jan 2005...I don't really care...I'm just gonna give you big hiding
cause I see you so problemmatic! ummm wait that's you rhyming
damn...telling us not to fuck with the family, but really what for?
the reason we don't read your rhymes......it might really be ours!
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Old 12-13-04, 03:10 PM   #5
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News Flash: Taiwan Sucks

Ayo, I hate to break it to you, but Rap Don't Quite Suit You,
It's The passage of Life, And you didnt make it a 1/6 through,
You Suck Dude, I'll put it plain and Simply for you to read,
2 bars of the same shit for you, In case its not plain to see,
It's Symettry, That means that you gon' Fold easily Fool
Taiwan aint the place to be, don't they still have slavery dude?
I'll walk the pavement with you, your beneath me, and everyone,
Your Quick and Clean way of losing a verse, Is next to none
The way Taiwan produces them, you'd think you'd toy with someone,
And Your attempts to make it as King Of RV, have been ranked at 71
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Don't tell me you don't get this,

1st Bar, this is the first of 6 rounds, Duh.
2nd Bar, Blah
3rd Bar, If its symettrically, it has a clear middle, easier to fold, blah.
4th Bar, please...
5th Bar, Taiwan is only good for toys.. theres 64 people in the Tourny, if he;s 71 then....I'm not explainin any more.

Yeh, came wack cos he did, and cos I forgot, Sorry bout the explanations yo...

EDIT

fuck The Fact that he went over the line limit yo.....
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Old 12-13-04, 07:34 PM   #6
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Ayo, I hate to break it to you, but Rap Don't Quite Suit You,
It's The passage of Life, And you didnt make it a 1/6 through,
good
You Suck Dude, I'll put it plain and Simply for you to read,
2 bars of the same shit for you, In case its not plain to see,
no
It's Symettry, That means that you gon' Fold easily Fool
Taiwan aint the place to be, don't they still have slavery dude?
pretty good
I'll walk the pavement with you, your beneath me, and everyone,
Your Quick and Clean way of losing a verse, Is next to none
no
The way Taiwan produces them, you'd think you'd toy with someone,
And Your attempts to make it as King Of RV, have been ranked at 71
decent

Trifles, mince pies...damn man your stereotype needs be broaden
cause when syms surrounded by 400 distills...call him "Jail Warden"
ehh
and so only the dopest will survive...so for you death is in effect
it's not just skills wise 60 more heads dies...
...your wackness's giving em heart attacks.
doesnt fit well...
you're what I expect...most of ur punches don't make half sense
I could tell your time's long over...cause "distilled"'s a past tense
good
jan 2005...I don't really care...I'm just gonna give you big hiding
cause I see you so problemmatic! ummm wait that's you rhyming
ehh
damn...telling us not to fuck with the family, but really what for?
the reason we don't read your rhymes......it might really be ours!
good

to close to call ill edit in my vote later
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Old 12-13-04, 08:00 PM   #7
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you're what I expect...most of ur punches don't make half sense
I could tell your time's long over...cause "distilled"'s a past tense
damn...telling us not to fuck with the family, but really what for?
the reason we don't read your rhymes......it might really be ours!

vs.

It's Symettry, That means that you gon' Fold easily Fool
Taiwan aint the place to be, don't they still have slavery dude?
The way Taiwan produces them, you'd think you'd toy with someone,
And Your attempts to make it as King Of RV, have been ranked at 71

Hmm.. 4 vs. 4..

Ill decide and vote later..

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Old 12-13-04, 08:08 PM   #8
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Trifles, mince pies...damn man your stereotype needs be broaden
cause when syms surrounded by 400 distills...call him "Jail Warden"
^^^first line....wack... second line HAHAHAHAHAHAAA lol nice
and so only the dopest will survive...so for you death is in effect
it's not just skills wise 60 more heads dies...
...your wackness's giving em heart attacks.
^^^^nothing special here..... an alright punch
you're what I expect...most of ur punches don't make half sense
I could tell your time's long over...cause "distilled"'s a past tense
^^^^LOL.... good personal here... pretty dope
jan 2005...I don't really care...I'm just gonna give you big hiding
cause I see you so problemmatic! ummm wait that's you rhyming
^^^^nah....
damn...telling us not to fuck with the family, but really what for?
the reason we don't read your rhymes......it might really be ours!
^^^haha lol.... pretty nice closer
Some good humur here from symm3trik..... good structure and flow
personals cam pretty hard.. but overall it was just funny to read


Ayo, I hate to break it to you, but Rap Don't Quite Suit You,
It's The passage of Life, And you didnt make it a 1/6 through,
^^^^Well thats pretty predictable..... no real punch here
You Suck Dude, I'll put it plain and Simply for you to read,
2 bars of the same shit for you, In case its not plain to see,
^^^^nope......
It's Symettry, That means that you gon' Fold easily Fool
Taiwan aint the place to be, don't they still have slavery dude?
^^^^ forced rhyme.. fool, Dude.... more of a statment than a punch
I'll walk the pavement with you, your beneath me, and everyone,
Your Quick and Clean way of losing a verse, Is next to none
^^^nah.... and to much self glorification here...
The way Taiwan produces them, you'd think you'd toy with someone,
And Your attempts to make it as King Of RV, have been ranked at 71
^^^^na... wasnt feeling that verse...
ive seen better from you... just not enough humur and hard hitting personals
to win this..... so my vote goes to
Vote:Symm3tirk.......
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Old 12-14-04, 03:10 PM   #9
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Damn at y'all deciding later.

knew I should have put some effort in
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Old 12-14-04, 09:39 PM   #10
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I'm suprised they're having a hard time deciding this...

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Old 12-14-04, 11:56 PM   #11
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Symm3trik won this, he came with better punches, it was close, both lacked a lot, but overall, Symm3trik got this one

A little bit more explanation would be apreciated next time... thank you

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Old 12-15-04, 12:03 AM   #12
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symm3trik:

Trifles, mince pies...damn man your stereotype needs be broaden
cause when syms surrounded by 400 distills...call him "Jail Warden"
^^wack 3/10
and so only the dopest will survive...so for you death is in effect
it's not just skills wise 60 more heads dies...
...your wackness's giving em heart attacks.
^^strecthed and wack 3/10
you're what I expect...most of ur punches don't make half sense
I could tell your time's long over...cause "distilled"'s a past tense
^^dope meta and good punch 8/10
jan 2005...I don't really care...I'm just gonna give you big hiding
cause I see you so problemmatic! ummm wait that's you rhyming
^^lmao funny kinda good 7/10
damn...telling us not to fuck with the family, but really what for?
the reason we don't read your rhymes......it might really be ours!
^^decent closer played concept 6/10

overall : 27/50 (54%)

distilled:

Ayo, I hate to break it to you, but Rap Don't Quite Suit You,
It's The passage of Life, And you didnt make it a 1/6 through,
^^dope opener 8/10
You Suck Dude, I'll put it plain and Simply for you to read,
2 bars of the same shit for you, In case its not plain to see,
^^good consistency good bar 7/10
It's Symettry, That means that you gon' Fold easily Fool
Taiwan aint the place to be, don't they still have slavery dude?
^^wack 4/10
I'll walk the pavement with you, your beneath me, and everyone,
Your Quick and Clean way of losing a verse, Is next to none
^^wack 3/10
The way Taiwan produces them, you'd think you'd toy with someone,
And Your attempts to make it as King Of RV, have been ranked at 71
^^ehh ok 6/10

overall : 28/50 (56%)

vote: distilled close battle but his opener and second bar were pretty good
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Old 12-15-04, 10:49 PM   #13
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I agree with JPoll on your voting headgames.

Thanks to everyone for voting.

and hurry up and decide Mim and Meth, So I can get my wack ass kicked out in the first round.
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Old 12-16-04, 09:40 PM   #14
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Mimesis And New Method Have To Edit Their Vote In And Then I Will Close This Battle...
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Old 12-16-04, 10:31 PM   #15
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Distilled:

Ayo, I hate to break it to you, but Rap Don't Quite Suit You,
It's The passage of Life, And you didnt make it a 1/6 through,
--Aight, Nice Concept 6/10
You Suck Dude, I'll put it plain and Simply for you to read,
2 bars of the same shit for you, In case its not plain to see,
--No Direction, Plain Filler 3/10
It's Symettry, That means that you gon' Fold easily Fool
Taiwan aint the place to be, don't they still have slavery dude?
--Hmm, Coulda Been Better 6/10
I'll walk the pavement with you, your beneath me, and everyone,
Your Quick and Clean way of losing a verse, Is next to none
--LoL How Wack 2/10
The way Taiwan produces them, you'd think you'd toy with someone,
And Your attempts to make it as King Of RV, have been ranked at 71
--Good Flip Wit Rank 7/10

Overall: 24/50

Symm3trik:

Trifles, mince pies...damn man your stereotype needs be broaden
cause when syms surrounded by 400 distills...call him "Jail Warden"
--Nice Second Line, Creative 6/10
and so only the dopest will survive...so for you death is in effect
it's not just skills wise 60 more heads dies...
...your wackness's giving em heart attacks.
--No Flow, Needed To Be Better Worded 2/10
you're what I expect...most of ur punches don't make half sense
I could tell your time's long over...cause "distilled"'s a past tense
--Pretty Nice, 7/10
jan 2005...I don't really care...I'm just gonna give you big hiding
cause I see you so problemmatic! ummm wait that's you rhyming
--Overated, Played Punch 4/10
damn...telling us not to fuck with the family, but really what for?
the reason we don't read your rhymes......it might really be ours!
--Shoulda Switched It Up, Still Nice 6/10

Overall: 25/50

Winner: Symm3trik

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