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Old 01-23-04, 02:52 PM   #1
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Old 01-23-04, 03:21 PM   #2
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Old 01-23-04, 03:57 PM   #3
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MY topic REPLY:


...Water has many depths, not depths you may think
but depths you to may also have...

Consummation since the beginning, our resource, but never natural…
Highs and low’s add to experiences that may seem gratified or diastral…
As we turn to it, we abuse facts; it has a mother that’ll help it turn on us…
As we put holes in the earth it’s obvious, at the top it’s dangerous…
Already consuming bodies as years can record, call it murderous…
Over flowing to bring ends, blowing to bring amends, a trend with time…
Acronym to death; H(umans) 2 O(ver), perfect destruction n crime…
Older, faster and stronger, we could never be liable to apprehend…
Swallowing us through it’s depths as we swallow it to a bottom of end…
But as we un-control the situation we face, it’s clearly uncontrollable…
. . . . . . .. . . . .

So is it wrong to contaminate it, kill it, as we have done already…
Steady as we watch its next moves, forecasts on stand by but never ready…
Death by what we use, inevitable, be it death or some day consumed…
Depth reaches no limits as its either life aiding or for doom…
So does it mater if we take care of it? ...
Because it’s depth is probable to take care of us…

Meaning:
Water doesn't only have depth of it's body but a depth of mind, power,time and constraint.
Water can kill us give life to us and we could do the same to it.
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Old 01-23-04, 04:03 PM   #4
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As we put holes in the earth it’s obvious, at the top it’s dangerous…
( just so no one gets this because this is sumthing that i thought of dring the moment and people probably won't think as quick. Global warming, we put holes in the atmosphere, and it's afecting the water levels to rise causing floods, at the top it's dangerous: meaning water rises and also meaning we in us have water to tay alive and what we do while alive is kill (in example earth) )
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Old 01-24-04, 03:06 PM   #5
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uppin for foreals verse

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Old 04-28-04, 01:53 PM   #6
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