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05-02-05, 06:40 AM | #16 | |||||||
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Nice shit dawg love da verse....................
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05-02-05, 11:28 AM | #17 | |||
**the council**
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IP: A236 DEBC
yea this was a nice verse.....original i'm thinking and creative, nice structure and nice flow 9/10 keep it up..........
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05-02-05, 02:03 PM | #18 | ||||
~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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LoL this shit was hot and "Tony Green tryinn to hit up Mizz Fyre" its true LoL this gets a 9/10
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05-02-05, 02:24 PM | #19 | ||||
vanquising Mc's Daily
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IP: BFB8 3241
hahahha... That was a damn Good Read.. Gotta Put that on Audio.. Funny Shit.... Dope Drop...
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05-02-05, 02:37 PM | #20 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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Lolz, is this the secretive OM you were talking about? I'm definitely feeling it, got some nice shoot-outs in there, very creative of course. Nice to read stuff like this for a change, vocab is nice as well as structure. Laughed my ass off at some stuff, you're just mad crazy hehe. But why didn't you mention that trampoline??? *sad* Haha...
Good read man
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05-03-05, 12:26 PM | #21 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 91F7 E22B
yea DQ i'm a get that trampoline out on another open mic
The Road Trip is followin this shit!!!! uppin for more feedback!!!!! |
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05-03-05, 12:36 PM | #22 | |||||
Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
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IP: 964F D870
*im neva invited to tha RV parties!*
lmao at tha whole track...wish it was on audio...perfect flow, structure, vocab, and imagery...loved dis shit man...9/10...hurry wit tha road trip (hope my name in it, even if yall kill me cuz imma newb)...lol -DB
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05-03-05, 12:45 PM | #23 | |||||
New Jack
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so i guess you can really say that lines a fill-her.? . overall, it was a decent read, hoped it wouldve been funnier throughout its entirety, but it did have its weak n strong points good shit fam, stay up.... |
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05-04-05, 12:43 AM | #24 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 91F7 E22B
still uppin for a little more feed..................
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05-04-05, 01:11 AM | #25 | ||||
leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 79B1 EDD4
Shit’s Only Just Started When The Doors Get Rushed By Hordes Of Herbz…
Durrr!! Kool Col-B Rolls Up In His Wheelchair And Everybody’s Like…”WERD!”… “O’G’z In Tha House!” Mista Falls In Blood Before He Can Get The Burger… Red Bull Mixes On Some Ja Rule And The Speakers Bump Out “Murder”… ^^MY FAVS, lol @ daz's grin n not so clean man solo this was a funnyass drop, i could see it all.. nicely packed with imagery n good content lots of names mentioned to, nice concept fam....good drop
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speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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05-04-05, 01:25 AM | #26 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: B52C 6258
nice piece right here, i was likin how u sort of made a story n included some various members of RV pretty original, some bars were a lil long tho, but you stil got the job done.
i give it an 8.5/10 |
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05-04-05, 10:27 AM | #27 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
Sex In The Kitchen, Bathrooms And Bedrooms..It’s Like One Great Orgy…
Then Troop Rolls Up To A Hoe Like “Hey” And She Like “U Can’t Afford Me”… ^lmfao...that was funny as hell CALI Comes Back In And He’s Like “Who Wants To Beat On Some Newbs?”… ^he prolly would do something like that...lmao Aye, solo dawg. This shit was cooo. Had me laughin, specially that mista rolled up eating a burger...lmao...This was coo, but on tha rhyming side, it lacked a lil and structure was off, and really no point to it, but pure dopeness because of the comedy. 8/10 oh, JDOT SMOKING A CIGAR...like he all high and mighty and shit... |
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05-04-05, 07:56 PM | #28 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: 52B6 1AD6
pretty good man,im not appart of the party lol
very creative |
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05-04-05, 08:09 PM | #29 | ||||
Sam Dope
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IP: AD23 BDD5
I wasnt invited...Thats gay...LOL...Good drop tho, had me laughin
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05-04-05, 08:26 PM | #30 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: 3B8D A3C4
ey yo man dis shit was nice but like KESSE said
ya lines was pretty long but its all good shit was still tight u no....return da fav. on my new verse its called "ill always love you"...haha shit was tight homie
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