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Check in by: 02-24-05 at 12:14 PM

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ColdSTEEL has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-20-05 07:50 PM.

callin me out...HAH!!!...Crazy this actor!!


This fool call himself Squad Up...he must be a lame!!//
A wanna be Lil Wayne...hes tha rappin Martin payne..//
Imma disgard of his frame..an leave with no description//
Hes not convincin..he just a rat that jumped ship..go ask Pro-Vision..//
Watchin EMPIRE is tha closest you ever been ta a Uzzy//
Talkin bout clips..if you seen 1..cuz it was a prreview ta movie//
ur gangster shananagins dont move me...So I keep screamin who's next?//
Im like tha bullets in a chamber... I bring heat ta his Tec's(text)//
My punches hit hard,I knocked this clone dizzy//
My spit is crack...While he tha rappin.. Tyrone Bigsbee//
Fag ur career is over soon as tha words drop..//
Imma tell everybody that dick stays on ur mind like Mary from 3rd Rock!!//
So I dont know why you even wanna battle me..//
cuz ur flows r like a misdemeanor ...mine is like Assault n Battery!!!

Aiiiight...I dropped..Next!?!

SQUAD-UP has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-21-05 04:54 PM.

SQUUUUAAAD UP!!!

chea, eh fam take it like a man, just smile and lose
ya juvenile rhymes, get beat like its child abuse
u couldnt'shine wit mop gloss,all that lip get ya top lost
and ya flow couldnt even get kick, wit hotsauce
u still get knocked off dawg
cuz my soldja guns, put a holein one nigga like golf balls
man,,.. im lettin you and these fakers get it
that im bout to put an L on ya head liike its alakers fitted
u mighta been makin moves, but u slowin up prolly
nicca think he hard, cuz he saw Grownin Up Gotti
u appeal to men hoes, wit ya still dead flows
Codesteel n them, got ill heads?... NOO!!!
when referrin ya name, i heard u was a wack herb in the game
this dumby so stupid he put the password in his name!
yo i make ya chick scream, n fuck ya sister like inbreeds
but in this league , i'll make ya lip bleed when my punches go blitzkrieg
this fool act so gay, ....whAT? u dont say
CODESTEEL like hockey this year, ...gettin no play
if u nice,... than i'll b damnded forreal
just cuz u got super man Pj's dont make u the man of STEEL
u goin down in flames, u might as well spit it n burn
cuz ya verbs lack viscosity, ya just dont stick to ya words.....eassssy

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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up

+++++++++++++++++++++++++uppin for votes,this was a reall good battle in my opinion+++++++++++++++++++

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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up

Voted For: SQUAD-UP

this was a pretty hot battle, yall both came hard especially for newer members. but ima have to go wit Squad up on this one. his punches just hit alot harder.
he had better wordplay and more creativity in his verse.
also better personals
when referrin ya name, i heard u was a wack herb in the game
this dumby so stupid he put the password in his name!
^^^^that was hot, good personal n creative
structure and flow was off at some points tho, work on keepin it flown throughout the whole verse, got me?

codesteel came pretty hard as well.
some nice punches in there, not any good personals tho.
multies were lackin too.
but i wwas feelin a couple bars in there, but not as much as i was feelin most of squads. good drops from both
but squad gets this one..........*1*

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Open Mic's

Lick Shots=Hitchcock feat Paul Cain and The Sick One
Opposite of Cold= The Cartel
Dear Others=Hitchcock
Kill That Static=Hitchcock

Voted For: SQUAD-UP

squad up took this. wit better flow and punches

This fool call himself Squad Up...he must be a lame!!//
A wanna be Lil Wayne...hes tha rappin Martin payne..//
+ehh not good for an opener, wasnt feelin it+

Imma disgard of his frame..an leave with no description//
Hes not convincin..he just a rat that jumped ship..go ask Pro-Vision..//
+this was ok nahmean, but could've hit harder+

Watchin EMPIRE is tha closest you ever been ta a Uzzy//
Talkin bout clips..if you seen 1..cuz it was a prreview ta movie//
+pretty good diss, nothin special here tho+

ur gangster shananagins dont move me...So I keep screamin who's next?//
Im like tha bullets in a chamber... I bring heat ta his Tec's(text)//
+ya best bar right there^^, that was hot+

Fag ur career is over soon as tha words drop..//
Imma tell everybody that dick stays on ur mind like Mary from 3rd Rock!!//
+another good bar, pretty hot too+

So I dont know why you even wanna battle me..//
cuz ur flows r like a misdemeanor ...mine is like Assault n Battery!!!
+closer was ok,b ut its been done before so not many points there+

ok now im gettin lazy...
squad ups opener=
chea, eh fam take it like a man, just smile and lose
ya juvenile rhymes, get beat like its child abuse
+good diss, n creativity+
squad-ups closer=
u goin down in flames, u might as well spit it n burn
cuz ya verbs lack viscosity, ya just dont stick to ya words..
squad-up's best bar=
when referrin ya name, i heard u was a wack herb in the game
this dumby so stupid he put the password in his name!
squad-ups worst bar=
u appeal to men hoes, wit ya still dead flows
Codesteel n them, got ill heads?... NOO!!!
ight so squads gettin this one, no hate pretty hot battle
holla back at me

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OM's

Voted For: ColdSTEEL

Breakdown...

Name:Cold Steel

Verse:
This fool call himself Squad Up...he must be a lame!!//
A wanna be Lil Wayne...hes tha rappin Martin payne..//
Imma disgard of his frame..an leave with no description//
Hes not convincin..he just a rat that jumped ship..go ask Pro-Vision..//
Watchin EMPIRE is tha closest you ever been ta a Uzzy//
Talkin bout clips..if you seen 1..cuz it was a prreview ta movie//
ur gangster shananagins dont move me...So I keep screamin who's next?//
Im like tha bullets in a chamber... I bring heat ta his Tec's(text)//
My punches hit hard,I knocked this clone dizzy//
My spit is crack...While he tha rappin.. Tyrone Bigsbee//
Fag ur career is over soon as tha words drop..//
Imma tell everybody that dick stays on ur mind like Mary from 3rd Rock!!//
So I dont know why you even wanna battle me..//
cuz ur flows r like a misdemeanor ...mine is like Assault n Battery!!!

Need/Don’t need to work on:wassup C....um overall you just need to work on your structure, keep droppin them you can only get better...

Stats:
Punches:610
Metaphors:4/10
Wordplay:3/10
Structure:4/10
Personals:5/10
Multies:5/10
Total:25/60

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Name:SQUAD-UP

Verse:
chea, eh fam take it like a man, just smile and lose
ya juvenile rhymes, get beat like its child abuse
u couldnt'shine wit mop gloss,all that lip get ya top lost
and ya flow couldnt even get kick, wit hotsauce
u still get knocked off dawg
cuz my soldja guns, put a holein one nigga like golf balls
man,,.. im lettin you and these fakers get it
that im bout to put an L on ya head liike its alakers fitted
u mighta been makin moves, but u slowin up prolly
nicca think he hard, cuz he saw Grownin Up Gotti
u appeal to men hoes, wit ya still dead flows
Codesteel n them, got ill heads?... NOO!!!
when referrin ya name, i heard u was a wack herb in the game
this dumby so stupid he put the password in his name!
yo i make ya chick scream, n fuck ya sister like inbreeds
but in this league , i'll make ya lip bleed when my punches go blitzkrieg
this fool act so gay, ....whAT? u dont say
CODESTEEL like hockey this year, ...gettin no play
if u nice,... than i'll b damnded forreal
just cuz u got super man Pj's dont make u the man of STEEL
u goin down in flames, u might as well spit it n burn
cuz ya verbs lack viscosity, ya just dont stick to ya words.....eassssy

Need/Don’t need to work on:wassup with you squad...anyways...you need to work on making punches connect ya feel...keep workin at it.

Stats:
Punches:4/10
Metaphors:3/10
Wordplay:4/10
Structure:5/10
Personals:4/10
Multies:2/10
Total:22/60


Close battle fam but im gonna have to say that Cold Steel takes it...just by a little...

RTF in the sig against J DOT...personally felt like i won....4 people also feel like i won...hopefully you do too...

oh and its 3-1 im up..pz..

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^^what tha fuck....mayne i aint with CodeSteel...I was coldsteel before that group was around...an squad up ...that was nice nigga....next round is on me,ya heard..i hope you can take another shot...haH!...good battle...uppin 4 votes will return tha favor homey!

Voted For: SQUAD-UP

Squad Up: To me S.U. got this win easy.. his punches appeal to me alot more than Code Steels, nice as fuck opener, and it amde me laugh and thats important, thats how you get wins...

Code steel: Well it just didn't really appela to em all that much, half your lines were really punches and there was alot of self glorification, overall it was decent but elevate

Vote: SQUAD UP

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+++++++++++++++++++++++++uppin for votes,this was a reall good battle in my opinion+++++++++++++++++++

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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up

Voted For: SQUAD-UP

this was a pretty close battle til the end but here it goes
opener: squad up
vocab: squad up
structure: sqaud
multis: sqaud
closer: sqaud
sqaud gets the win of my vote cuz 1 he came harder in the battle & 2 he hit wit more punches then coldsteel did; coldsteel it was a good drop but u need 2 work on ur wordplay sum more no hating
make sure 2 return the favor

THanx folks fah tha breakdowns an erythang .....Squad up....I can except a lost like a man...hah!!!Child abuse...smile an lose... ..lol....its over...holla at any one that wants ta battle ...set it up an Ill get back later with yah!!



NEXT!?!......even tho you think Im down...