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Spul 0 0%
hotshh 2 100.00%
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Old 01-01-05, 10:59 PM   #1
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01.SpuL vs 32. hotshh

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Rules:

Battle opened......

Check in 48 hours after battle was opened
Drop verse 48 hours after check ing
Voting end 72 hours after verse was spit

16 Lines
No Biting
No Feeding
No Recycling
The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins

If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney!

Good Luck!

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Old 01-03-05, 08:52 AM   #2
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Old 01-04-05, 12:38 PM   #3
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ok mking sre didnt get dq...cali chked in for me yesterday so wll post tonight..thank u
 
Old 01-04-05, 11:18 PM   #4
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Like ya sig ya the King of the South!.the way ya going down unconscious
CUz all SPul pack is Weak 'punches' like a High School Prom Drink!
U ' putting Mass on map? Nonsense!...Bolton get Bombed Quick
The last time you ' seen the hood '...was in front of ya Moms Whip!
..Smash your 'King' repeat chances like bats to Glass Ornaments....
So fuck 'Three days'..Your on 'Timeout' the rest of the Tournament!
'Greed blind you' like mase in Kells eyes that made the Tour Dead..*
But if its the "money on ya mind" Ill make change out ya Fore head!
Look ya wasting ya words like Petty Arguments..So Why Speak?
See they got it confused..THIS is really ya 'Bye Week' (goodbye geek)!
So "get a grip"..or 'post mittens'...More 'pussy' then most kittens..
Of Course his verse Lack "Soul"...What you expect? Its 'Ghost' Written!
But no difference..this champ is trash be..Ass cheeks if U ask Me.
....Who couldnt 'blow up' with a Light match and a Gas Leak!!
They gonna have to stitch and glue you right after i stick it to ya...
See Spul spit flames.. but 'Catch Hell' like the Devil pitching to ya!


**.rkelly mased.. best of tour dead..money the prize,,suspected of having ghostwriters..king of south TI..please no homo..
 
Old 01-05-05, 03:19 PM   #5
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They say a penny for each thought…I guess it ain’t no joke
If it’s tru I’ll have a nickel, for thinkin’ of my votes
I’ma make your ass jet, son, ain’t talkin’ bout “no show”
Cuz yo lines come more stretched, than Tyra Bank’s forehead, yo
How you made it this far, to me… it’s still a mystery
I’ll close you like my Social Studies book, you’re history
Your rhymes are never "hot", they never amount to "shit"
Yo name gets bigger and bigger, but then you forgot "it" (1)
The kid couldn’t "check in" in this thread, he knos he’s dead
It’s ok, he’s got the “Chills”, he was told to stay in bed
21-4… good record, you got the “ills”, g!!!
Nah, you don’t got it, but you do when there’s a “P” (2)
They say yo name predicts yo skill, for you, that shit is tru
…It’s right on target, after this, you WILL be blue
You never spit out hot, shit, man, don’t be silly
The only time you do, is when you’ve eaten too much chili



for the foos who don't get it

(1)- hotshh! has no "it", which would have made it "Hot Shit" duh...
(2)- his usertitle "Da Medicine man" and pills. easy to comprehend...
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Old 01-05-05, 03:48 PM   #6
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Quote:
Originally Posted by hotshh!
Like ya sig ya the King of the South!.the way ya going down unconscious
CUz all SPul pack is Weak 'punches' like a High School Prom Drink!
Weak rhyme....and played....3/10
U ' putting Mass on map? Nonsense!...Bolton get Bombed Quick
The last time you ' seen the hood '...was in front of ya Moms Whip!
Decent....4/10
..Smash your 'King' repeat chances like bats to Glass Ornaments....
So fuck 'Three days'..Your on 'Timeout' the rest of the Tournament!
....No...2/10
'Greed blind you' like mase in Kells eyes that made the Tour Dead..*
But if its the "money on ya mind" Ill make change out ya Fore head!
Nice....7/10
Look ya wasting ya words like Petty Arguments..So Why Speak?
See they got it confused..THIS is really ya 'Bye Week' (goodbye geek)!
This could've been much better....5/10
So "get a grip"..or 'post mittens'...More 'pussy' then most kittens..
Of Course his verse Lack "Soul"...What you expect? Its 'Ghost' Written!
Same as above....5/10
But no difference..this champ is trash be..Ass cheeks if U ask Me.
....Who couldnt 'blow up' with a Light match and a Gas Leak!!
Played like anus....2/10
They gonna have to stitch and glue you right after i stick it to ya...
See Spul spit flames.. but 'Catch Hell' like the Devil pitching to ya!
Same as above but not as bad....3/10


hotshh!'s OVerall Verse: 31/80
Comments:
The first half of your verse was anus....and the few last lines were too....in between you done the best....just stop with the !!!! after the end of each line...it gets....gay...



Quote:
Originally Posted by SPuL
They say a penny for each thought…I guess it ain’t no joke
If it’s tru I’ll have a nickel, for thinkin’ of my votes
Decent....4/10
I’ma make your ass jet, son, ain’t talkin’ bout “no show”
Cuz yo lines come more stretched, than Tyra Bank’s forehead, yo
No....looks familar to something else I've read....2/10
How you made it this far, to me… it’s still a mystery
I’ll close you like my Social Studies book, you’re history
Meh....ok...3/10
Your rhymes are never "hot", they never amount to "shit"
Yo name gets bigger and bigger, but then you forgot "it" (1)
Same as above....3/10
The kid couldn’t "check in" in this thread, he knos he’s dead
It’s ok, he’s got the “Chills”, he was told to stay in bed
Decent....4/10
21-4… good record, you got the “ills”, g!!!
Nah, you don’t got it, but you do when there’s a “P” (2)
Stop explaining your lines...4/10
They say yo name predicts yo skill, for you, that shit is tru
…It’s right on target, after this, you WILL be blue
Wtf?? 3/10
You never spit out hot, shit, man, don’t be silly
The only time you do, is when you’ve eaten too much chili
Played...3/10


SPuL's Overall Verse: 26/80
Comments:
You came played....and well.....I hate explanations to punches.....I have to read your line...then go down and see the gay ass explanation to get the punch...which makes it supremely weak...some of you lines didnt make sense...and you need work on wit....

Vote - hotshh!
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Old 01-05-05, 06:57 PM   #7
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hotshh!:


Like ya sig ya the King of the South!.the way ya going down unconscious
CUz all SPul pack is Weak 'punches' like a High School Prom Drink!
^^decent 5/10
U ' putting Mass on map? Nonsense!...Bolton get Bombed Quick
The last time you ' seen the hood '...was in front of ya Moms Whip!
^^lmao dope bar 9/10
..Smash your 'King' repeat chances like bats to Glass Ornaments....
So fuck 'Three days'..Your on 'Timeout' the rest of the Tournament!
^^dope personal dope bar just dope 10/10
'Greed blind you' like mase in Kells eyes that made the Tour Dead..*
But if its the "money on ya mind" Ill make change out ya Fore head!
^^decent 5/10
Look ya wasting ya words like Petty Arguments..So Why Speak?
See they got it confused..THIS is really ya 'Bye Week' (goodbye geek)!
^^lmao good bar 9/10
So "get a grip"..or 'post mittens'...More 'pussy' then most kittens..
Of Course his verse Lack "Soul"...What you expect? Its 'Ghost' Written!
^^dope 10/10
But no difference..this champ is trash be..Ass cheeks if U ask Me.
....Who couldnt 'blow up' with a Light match and a Gas Leak!!
^^played 3/10
They gonna have to stitch and glue you right after i stick it to ya...
See Spul spit flames.. but 'Catch Hell' like the Devil pitching to ya!
^^dope closer 9/10

overall : 60/80 (75%)

SPuL:


They say a penny for each thought…I guess it ain’t no joke
If it’s tru I’ll have a nickel, for thinkin’ of my votes
^^dope meta good opener 8/10
I’ma make your ass jet, son, ain’t talkin’ bout “no show”
Cuz yo lines come more stretched, than Tyra Bank’s forehead, yo
^^wack 2/10
How you made it this far, to me… it’s still a mystery
I’ll close you like my Social Studies book, you’re history
^^ehh decent 4/10
Your rhymes are never "hot", they never amount to "shit"
Yo name gets bigger and bigger, but then you forgot "it" (1)
^^lmao your best bar 9/10
The kid couldn’t "check in" in this thread, he knos he’s dead
It’s ok, he’s got the “Chills”, he was told to stay in bed
^^ehh decent 5/10
21-4… good record, you got the “ills”, g!!!
Nah, you don’t got it, but you do when there’s a “P” (2)
^^wack 4/10
They say yo name predicts yo skill, for you, that shit is tru
…It’s right on target, after this, you WILL be blue
^^wack 2/10
You never spit out hot, shit, man, don’t be silly
The only time you do, is when you’ve eaten too much chili
^^decent 5/10

overall : 39/80 (49%)


vote: hotshh!
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Old 01-06-05, 10:26 AM   #8
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4FIL MY NAME IS LADY FIYA with a "Y" lmao

SPuL---what happened, you didn't come hard and you had some played lines.. like the Social Studies/history line.. your opener wasn't a diss to him, it was more like a self-glorification to yourself, at your chance of winning, however i liked this bar:
Your rhymes are never "hot", they never amount to "shit"
Yo name gets bigger and bigger, but then you forgot "it"
^^you best bar had me lmfao... was very good. however, that was the only bar i was feeling, the chilly line for the closer wasn't a good idea.. neither was the "pills" line.. not hot..

hotshh best lines were:
U ' putting Mass on map? Nonsense!...Bolton get Bombed Quick
The last time you ' seen the hood '...was in front of ya Moms Whip
^^nice personal.. was really feeling this bar, lmao.. nice one..

i like the line with makin change outta ya forehead.. creative

and this bar was pretty good:
Look ya wasting ya words like Petty Arguments..So Why Speak?
See they got it confused..THIS is really ya 'Bye Week' (goodbye geek)!
^^rather decent, very nice one..

So "get a grip"..or 'post mittens'...More 'pussy' then most kittens..
Of Course his verse Lack "Soul"...What you expect? Its 'Ghost' Written!
^^^pretty much took the battle with this one..

best closer happened to be:
They gonna have to stitch and glue you right after i stick it to ya...
See Spul spit flames.. but 'Catch Hell' like the Devil pitching to ya!

Hotshh came harder, with less played lines.. SPuL your verse wasn't hard-hittin as usual... Hotshh takes it this time, not hate either...

v/Hotshh
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Old 01-06-05, 06:30 PM   #9
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This whole battle sucked

V/ Hotshh for having 1 decent punch

'Greed blind you' like mase in Kells eyes that made the Tour Dead..*
But if its the "money on ya mind" Ill make change out ya Fore head!
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Old 01-08-05, 12:13 AM   #10
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Juss Peepin This, Wow Hotshh Merked Him Lmao Good Verse Cus................
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