8...

U shouldnt of came BaK!!!

Blah....

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Hmm.. Already Beat You 8 Chekz

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Yea, Troop 'you 5 Minz 4rm my Chik Mouf' But im 1 away from yours
Plus a single punch will make you hit the deck.....walls and doors*
Ya think youre the best, But name one person that youre better than
My verse'll make you feel the beat and dance like youre the Jeffersons*
Dont even drop.. Just hit the sack.. Cause everyone's hoping you rest
Ill send so many hits to this bitch that you'll be groping ya chest*
Pussy You aint hot, Not even one of your lines could harm me
Just call me sargeant, I'll troop over you like i joined the Army

*= all personals fromg his sig.

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lol..2 bad i took those out my sig...b4 u dropped..so your fault

im droppin later..when i get back

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When i dropped he still had that shit in his sig, thats how i got the ideas for the punches. I havent been on in a couple days so i just keyed it up. DQ him.

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Aiight thats fine with me. Vote up

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i explained wha i had in my sig...quit your bitchin

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This Scam Artists...tryin His Hardest..But Soc said u Betta LayLo
Wheres ya Korv Money Phony..So tony..Tell me wheres ya Yayo?
^^OK....not that hot tho...4/10
1st times nice..But beat me Twice..But thats Like Ya Job.....Fake
Its no Mistake Bein ya Fathers Father only way you come out Great
^^hated that set-up...punch was ite...5/10
Yet Word on the Net..is your Vet?..Sheeeeet....Ya cant Whore Me
Ya Win Positions Fiction strictly cuz u only WIN.when tellin a Story
^^OK....nice flow..8/10
Mr Topical......winnin twice Is Impossible So stop your frontin Trick
Placeing in Marathons in a Mr Hanky Fit..Only time u was Runnin Shit
^^good...7/10

OK....personal in every line..so that was good.I liked the internals in that 2nd to last line.
I thought you started off really bad..but ended up goin good afterwards.

Yea, Troop 'you 5 Minz 4rm my Chik Mouf' But im 1 away from yours
Plus a single punch will make you hit the deck.....walls and doors*
^^well...decent....5/10
Ya think youre the best, But name one person that youre better than
My verse'll make you feel the beat and dance like youre the Jeffersons*
^^better than/Jeffersons?..even accented it's be hard to work it to
rhyme and I though the punch was executed a lil bland..5/10
Dont even drop.. Just hit the sack.. Cause everyone's hoping you rest
Ill send so many hits to this bitch that you'll be groping ya chest*
^^good...8/10
Pussy You aint hot, Not even one of your lines could harm me
Just call me sargeant, I'll troop over you like i joined the Army
^^I find Troop/military lines are unoriginal..4/10

OK..I thought you had some decent concepts and all.But some wasn't put together
well enough.Flow went to troop easily due to his internals n shit..n you had a line that
didn't rhyme(jeferrson's one).And that last bar...troop/military lines are unoriginal.
Creativity is a must in battles.

So my HONEST opinion....is that troop got it for coming more creative and shit

Vote-Troop

FI
Yea, Troop 'you 5 Minz 4rm my Chik Mouf' But im 1 away from yours
Plus a single punch will make you hit the deck.....walls and doors*
Eh, bad attempt at flipping his user title.
Ya think youre the best, But name one person that youre better than
My verse'll make you feel the beat and dance like youre the Jeffersons*
Hint of self glorification, ok punch.
Dont even drop.. Just hit the sack.. Cause everyone's hoping you rest
Ill send so many hits to this bitch that you'll be groping ya chest*
Haha, ok punch on his sig.
Pussy You aint hot, Not even one of your lines could harm me
Just call me sargeant, I'll troop over you like i joined the Army
Old wordplay, ok punch

Wasn't the best I've seen, not that creative, but some punches hit.

Troop
This Scam Artists...tryin His Hardest..But Soc said u Betta LayLo
Wheres ya Korv Money Phony..So tony..Tell me wheres ya Yayo?
Multis were ok, but punch wasn't that hard.
1st times nice..But beat me Twice..But thats Like Ya Job.....Fake
Its no Mistake Bein ya Fathers Father only way you come out Great
Ok wordplay and punch.
Yet Word on the Net..is your Vet?..Sheeeeet....Ya cant Whore Me
Ya Win Positions Fiction strictly cuz u only WIN.when tellin a Story
Haha, liked this punch.
Mr Topical......winnin twice Is Impossible So stop your frontin Trick
Placeing in Marathons in a Mr Hanky Fit..Only time u was Runnin Shit
Nice personal from his sig.

Started off slow, but got a lot better in the end. Some creativity.

Vote goes to Troop for harder hitting personals and more creativity.

v/ Troop

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2-0.................Smh

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This Scam Artists...tryin His Hardest..But Soc said u Betta LayLo
Wheres ya Korv Money Phony..So tony..Tell me wheres ya Yayo?
1st times nice..But beat me Twice..But thats Like Ya Job.....Fake
Its no Mistake Bein ya Fathers Father only way you come out Great
Yet Word on the Net..is your Vet?..Sheeeeet....Ya cant Whore Me
Ya Win Positions Fiction strictly cuz u only WIN.when tellin a Story
Mr Topical......winnin twice Is Impossible So stop your frontin Trick

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Yea, Troop 'you 5 Minz 4rm my Chik Mouf' But im 1 away from yours
Plus a single punch will make you hit the deck.....walls and doors*
Pussy You aint hot, Not even one of your lines could harm me
Just call me sargeant, I'll troop over you like i joined the Army

V/TROOP
came hard with a nce flow, good vocab, reminiscent of the old days
flow came back a lil rusty.......

You got this one.. But doesnt matter to me its not on the records. So since you won 1 and i won 1 how bout we get a little tiebreaker going.

16 lines ?

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