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Old 07-20-06, 12:28 PM   #1
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Rexless vs Mystic Chaos

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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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4-1 tko

Any 1 who leaves an honest vote, it will be returned by myself and rex.

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 07-21-06 at 12:28 PM

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Old 07-20-06, 01:15 PM   #2
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Mystic Chaos has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-20-06 01:15 PM.
 
Old 07-20-06, 01:21 PM   #3
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Ive checked out ya battle stats and im not impressed
Yeah you've beatin newb's but no catz that are actually good at text
Your ok at best, rexless 9 & 9 hardly a respectable record
you give me ''9-9'' reasons to come back for more
.........................cuz i can beat you with no effort*
How do you not get robbed wit a name like rexless
Id snap ya neck and take ya jewelery n leave you 'neck-lace'
This kid is 'fruity' his brain is smashed into 'pebbles'
..........................Thats why im eating you for 'breakfast'
You come with rhymes that are 'soft' and 'chewy'
..........................................sorta like 'chips deluxe'
middle weight rapper with no elevation ...................
....................................since day one you've sucked
I know ya style you try to act hard like ya sick wit ya shit
End the pretendin cuz seriously im just sick of ya shit
Im just 'breezin' on by but ya names 'gone with the wind'
You can rap your heart out but you aint leavin with the win
With my marchetti are you ready nothin left but ya chin
This kid don't fit in, ur better off walkin wit ya head off
You could'nt make it in 'Boston' even if you wore 'Red Sox'
After this battle you will still "NOT BE FUCKED WITH"
Cuz im exterminatin ya name that you've had no fuckin luck with


**"9-9" reasons to always come back for more= the restaurant 99's theme song.
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Old 07-20-06, 01:51 PM   #4
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Dont duck again, you accepted my battle offer now step up.
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Old 07-20-06, 10:44 PM   #5
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Old 07-20-06, 11:38 PM   #6
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you wanna post like a thug, but u a joke to me cuz, if my gun jam... ima take out the bullet and Choke u with Slugz...
Im to complex wit the text, check it, my free'll make "Ad-Vil(feel)-Pain" like an Overdose of a Drug....
im Taking you out Chill, you not spitten fire, thats just bombs Laced to ya Mouth Grill...
after i Murk mystic, his moms gonna"drag him to Safety" like NFL players heat-stroking on the Field...
This faggots droppin nothin but shit, so someone 'Flip him, The Bird!'
turn him on his stomach n smash his grill like G. Foreman kissin the curb....
am wreckin ya Best Coward, so dont be stepin to this Vet Prowler, i aint disruptin ya breathin am just Hitting Ya Cheat Louder...
Ya spit would be Less Sour if u quit doing it, ruin it? ya verse wouldnt be teasty if u Dip It in Flour....
My Spit'll Disown Fags, killing bitches an dont brag, trying to be gangsta? u wearing Britches that Dont Sag
put my Lyrics in Quote Tags, fold-this-prick, U couldnt be sick if Moses blessed u with hes own Plaues......
So keep hoping from Name to Name, u'll be the first to get murk by me in each one of u'r Accounts
Punches leave Leak's Ruin Throu ya Mouth, cuz u'r skills like "broke Tier Rod's"..... 'New Bars' u need to 'Mount'.... Mother Fucker..... EZ....
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Old 07-20-06, 11:42 PM   #7
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decent drop upp'in for votes............................................. .................
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Old 07-20-06, 11:42 PM   #8
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alright then.... goodluck.
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Old 07-21-06, 12:00 AM   #9
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upppin............................................
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Old 07-21-06, 12:17 AM   #10
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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

you wanna post like a thug, but u a joke to me cuz, if my gun jam... ima take out the bullet and Choke u with Slugz...
WAK WITH NO PERSONALS OR PUNCH JUST TOUGH TALK

Im to complex wit the text, check it, my free'll make "Ad-Vil(feel)-Pain" like an Overdose of a Drug....
im Taking you out Chill, you not spitten fire, thats just bombs Laced to ya Mouth Grill...
STARTED WITH A GOOD MULTI BUT THEN IT DIED DOWN BADLY WITH BAD WORDPLAY. BUT WAS A LIL BETTER

after i Murk mystic, his moms gonna"drag him to Safety" like NFL players heat-stroking on the Field...
This faggots droppin nothin but shit, so someone 'Flip him, The Bird!'
THIS DOESNT RHYME AT ALL MAN...WTF?

turn him on his stomach n smash his grill like G. Foreman kissin the curb....
am wreckin ya Best Coward, so dont be stepin to this Vet Prowler, i aint disruptin ya breathin am just Hitting Ya Cheat Louder...
WAK...UR LINES ARE TOOOOOO STRETCHED MAN. FIX THAT

Ya spit would be Less Sour if u quit doing it, ruin it? ya verse wouldnt be teasty if u Dip It in Flour....
My Spit'll Disown Fags, killing bitches an dont brag, trying to be gangsta? u wearing Britches that Dont Sag
REALLY WAK AND AGAIN..SUPER STRETCHED DAWG

put my Lyrics in Quote Tags, fold-this-prick, U couldnt be sick if Moses blessed u with hes own Plaues......
So keep hoping from Name to Name, u'll be the first to get murk by me in each one of u'r Accounts
NOT FEELING IT AT ALL. WORD UR SHIT BETTER AND CUT A FEW WORDS OUT MAN.

Punches leave Leak's Ruin Throu ya Mouth, cuz u'r skills like "broke Tier Rod's"..... 'New Bars' u need to 'Mount'.... Mother Fucker..... EZ....
EZ LOSS CUZ THIS WAS A REALLY BAD CLOSER WITH NO PUNCH YET AGAIN MAN.



Mystic Chaos

Ive checked out ya battle stats and im not impressed
Yeah you've beatin newb's but no catz that are actually good at text
BAD FLOW BUT AN OK START...WORK ON WORDING AND PUNCH HARDNESS MAN.

Your ok at best, rexless 9 & 9 hardly a respectable record
you give me ''9-9'' reasons to come back for more
.........................cuz i can beat you with no effort*
FILLER LINES. UR SECOND LINE WHENT ON TOO LONG AND RUINED UR FLOW.

How do you not get robbed wit a name like rexless
Id snap ya neck and take ya jewelery n leave you 'neck-lace'
PLAYED AS HELL ON EM. DONT TAKE THE EASY WAY OUT WHEN U BATTLE A NIGGA. U WANNA DESTROY HIM AND SO FAR U NOT DOING THAT DAWG.

This kid is 'fruity' his brain is smashed into 'pebbles'
..........................Thats why im eating you for 'breakfast'
You come with rhymes that are 'soft' and 'chewy'
DIDN'T RHYME AND i GAURANTEE IV SEEN THAT LINE BEFORE BUT EITHER WAY ITS STILL A PUNCH AND UR SHOWING POTENCIAL SO ITS MEHHH

..........................................sorta like 'chips deluxe'
middle weight rapper with no elevation ...................
....................................since day one you've sucked
I know ya style you try to act hard like ya sick wit ya shit
U MUST HAVE A CRAZY ASS ACCENT 'COZ THIS DONT RHYME HOW I READ IT.LOL.NO PUNCH

End the pretendin cuz seriously im just sick of ya shit
Im just 'breezin' on by but ya names 'gone with the wind'
WAK WITH NO CREATIVITIE OR FLOW

You can rap your heart out but you aint leavin with the win
With my marchetti are you ready nothin left but ya chin
WAK

This kid don't fit in, ur better off walkin wit ya head off
You could'nt make it in 'Boston' even if you wore 'Red Sox'
WAK

After this battle you will still "NOT BE FUCKED WITH"
Cuz im exterminatin ya name that you've had no fuckin luck with
SUPER WAK CLOSER


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Im gonna vote for Mystic on this battle 'coz I didn't see an attemp of a punch from rex at all...Mystic didn't use not one punch at all but he made attemps and had good set ups. u both need to work on flow and structure. Rex should have good flow by now 'coz he been whith me in the cypher for a really long time now but he just refuces to elevate man. Rex, you need to chopp ur lines up drastically cuz they are too long and multis dont make it any better when it goes at the risk of putting down the structure and flow of ur verse man. I would really like to say u elevating but it doesn't seem that way. Mystic...u had good set ups and a lil bet structure then rex but u need really get into it and try to have a lot more creative punches. tough talk is really wak and very uncreative. ur 1st line have really good flow and structure but then ur second lines always get of key and end up beeing stretched too long. just work on that and dont use the excuse that ur a text rapper 'coz this aint a text battle so and u exepted so you knew wat u were getting into. Topical and text are very diff from each other. learn that shit and you'll be str8

Punches-Mystic for attempting in a few lines
Multies-Rex
Structure-Mystic
Flow-Mystic
Personals-Mystic cuz of that first line

V/Mystic Chaos

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Old 07-21-06, 12:26 AM   #11
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How do you not get robbed wit a name like rexless
Id snap ya neck and take ya jewelery n leave you 'neck-lace'
This kid is 'fruity' his brain is smashed into 'pebbles'
..........................Thats why im eating you for 'breakfast'


all go together...so it did all rhyme words ah god..u just didnt see that im guessing

ne way thanks for the vote keep em comin.
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Old 07-21-06, 09:58 AM   #12
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1st off u broke my whole verse down WRONG!!!!
THEN U CLAIM I HAD NO PUNCHES?? I'll POINT OUT MY PUNCHES...
this is why u broke it down wrong.....

you wanna post like a thug, but u a joke to me cuz, if my gun jam... ima take out the bullet and Choke u with Slugz...
WAK WITH NO PERSONALS OR PUNCH JUST TOUGH TALK
************************************************** *******************
^^ thats just 1 line not one bar so u fucked up EARLY!!! its soppuse to look like this when u brake it down...

you wanna post like a thug, but u a joke to me cuz, if my gun jam... ima take out the bullet and Choke u with Slugz...
Im to complex wit the text, check it, my free'll make "Ad-Vil(feel)-Pain" like an Overdose of a Drug.... / 1 bar plus a punch....

THen u started to mix up my bars and say it dont rhyme of course it dont rhyme if u cant even tell where the person end'ed hes bar an u call u'r self an emcee whos DOPE???

im Taking you out Chill, you not spitten fire, thats just bombs Laced to ya Mouth Grill...
after i Murk mystic, his moms gonna"drag him to Safety" like NFL players heat-stroking on the Field... /2 another punch...

This faggots droppin nothin but shit, so someone 'Flip him, The Bird!'
turn him on his stomach n smash his grill like G. Foreman kissin the curb.... / 3
another punch..

am wreckin ya Best Coward, so dont be stepin to this Vet Prowler, i aint disruptin ya breathin am just Hitting Ya Cheat Louder...
Ya spit would be Less Sour if u quit doing it, ruin it? ya verse wouldnt be teasty if u Dip It in Flour..../4
another punch

My Spit'll Disown Fags, killing bitches an dont brag, trying to be gangsta? u wearing Britches that Dont Sag
put my Lyrics in Quote Tags, fold-this-prick, U couldnt be sick if Moses blessed u with hes own Plaues...... /
another punch

So keep hoping from Name to Name, u'll be the first to get murk by me in each one of u'r Accounts
Punches leave Leak's Ruin Throu ya Mouth, cuz u'r skills like "broke Tier Rod's"..... 'New Bars' u need to 'Mount'.... Mother Fucker..... EZ....
an the final punch

AN U CLAIM I HAVE NO PUNCHES???
WHAT THE FUCK ARE U READING???

last bar u must not know noting about cars so u wouldnt get it... first get a whip an after a few month when u start having problem u might find out what a iner tier rod is.. which is a bar that connects from u'r iner tier to u'r suspention DICK to keep it stright an stable insted of shaking when u drive or take turns....



SO IF U AINT GONNA BRAKE MY SHIT DOWN CORRECTLY DONT VOTE AT ALL....




Im gonna vote for Mystic on this battle 'coz I didn't see an attemp of a punch from rex at all
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Old 07-21-06, 10:02 AM   #13
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Yo rex, calm down...he did the same exact thing to my verse.....
so dont think you got cheated.....he mistook both our verses...but 1 still has to be better....
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Old 07-21-06, 12:06 PM   #14
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suck my muthat fucking dick. Rex...ur fucking lines are sooooo stretched that I can't even tell when one line finishes and another bars starts. fix ur shit dawg. if u would stop trying to put so much into one line and start making ur shit more clear and easy to read then u probably would actuall do good and get votes but no. you wanna keep doing the same shit then claim u elevating even though u aint even listening to the feed back your getting. I left as best feed back as i could. if I say some like no or meh or some shit its cuz Its the feedback is the same as the lines a bove.

and Myst...that line was wayyyyyy tooo long so I really couldnt tell what was going on wit it. you keep ur openning lines str8 wit a good structure but then u fall of on the 2nd line by making it too long and not adding a decent punch to it. Its battle of wits and creativitie not tough talk and just saying wat would sound good if you put it there.

now quit speaking on my vote and worry about getting more votes in this shit.
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Old 07-21-06, 12:11 PM   #15
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u should be glad I even put this much time onto this shit. I only voted on it cuz I was requested to. And rex....you could merked by a thousand times over wit the same verse and still not see wat u are doing wrong...Mimesis barely droped a verse and still destroyed you. not cuz he's Mimesis the all mighty. but cuz need to fix ur structure and flow. I always have to proof read my shit cuz I sometimes have the same problem of stretching lines out a bit. thats just something u gotta deal with and learn to fix.
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