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Old 06-06-06, 05:44 PM   #1
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happy 6/6/06 bitches.

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...703&postcount=3
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...241&postcount=4


-btw, don't let that fruit basket Q feed ya mind cancer son the personals in this are TRUE!! I got witnesses AND mad proof to prove it, so eat a dick up till you hiccup hoe cake!!
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Old 06-06-06, 06:19 PM   #2
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lol@ girls feeling at ur booty...



well i am liking the beat mix...u got a nice flow and tight voice...lyrics r tight too...its just aĆ²llgd..i liked this...u good...props
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Old 06-06-06, 06:21 PM   #3
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1-2 good lines

80% of them were fake personals...

i.e., "Never went to college" = fake

"in his 30s" = FAKE


"buyin purses"... = corny...never in my life

"sendin me wack beats"...LIE...never sent you a beat and you know it.

Flow got boring 1/2 way through

My mind wandered


"fuck u from da back" ??? You're talkin bout more gay shit than I am...What does that tell you?

decent...but the fake personals, generic punches, and borin flow makes this less than stellar...

I will reply though, only cuz I can't stand your bitch ass.
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Old 06-06-06, 06:23 PM   #4
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ahahah DOLLAZ DOLLAZ
WhAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!!!

I can't believe you used this beat
your voice is real nice but your style is wack
that's a shame everybody with the voice can't rap
and people who can rap don't have the voice

ahhhhh lol the end got kinda ill...iight multies yeah there ya go
Change of beat nice nice, wooooah i'm liking this part
we'd go real nice on a collab i'm liking your quality get at me
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Old 06-06-06, 08:22 PM   #5
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lmfao... to blow up you need a tall man
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Old 06-06-06, 09:17 PM   #6
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okay....it got better throughout, ive got respect for both of you....had it since i first got here, but the first half of it i mean listen to yourself, your dull.....it turned me off to the song, being the artist i am i got over that quickly, it started to look up, till you said the raps mike jackson line....i believe that was recently played out in mainstream, it got like old apexx when the beats started changing up, only really sick shit about this was the dead wrong flip cuz we all know q likes biggie...but if what q says that these personals are fake....then this wasnt too special....your voice was a tad loud on it the whole time thats really the only production problem....but i dunno, this song made me lose a lil respect for you, simply cuz the begining was boring....you saved yourself with a killer end, and to sum it all up, this is some high class heated "net beef" that i dont see stopping soon, so i guess i can expect to hear more.....so till then good shit, stay up
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Old 06-06-06, 09:42 PM   #7
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well here we go....yo!!

the beat is kinda corny......not really feeling it.....doesn't sound really battle worthy...but its straight i guess
see you comin in.....lyrics straight...punches are cool i reckon
the only thing that stands out here really is the delivery and quality

descent drop...
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Old 06-06-06, 10:36 PM   #8
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ewww @ beat choice...flows nice..delevery is real good here....couple good punches here...lol @ love song line....2nd beats nice...Tash rite ??......idk...I think Q took this to be honest tho..
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Old 06-06-06, 11:04 PM   #9
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i thoguth this was real solid im not sayin this one won or that one won but i def was feelin this............. shit was cool
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i guess this was the 1st diss than q did the comeback..

some personals here...and there flow was good..overall solid track didnt like the beat u used..
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Old 06-07-06, 01:22 AM   #11
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damn I haven't peeped u a serious minute....but alrighty lets see what the focus is about...ok opened wit gay punches "very expected" a diarhea flip? c'mon...ok "1st rapper shelfed himself!lol"<--theres a shot, "mixtape wasn't even released" good shot...tall man was decent...loose nuts was ehhhhhhh...old flip u coulda done so much more wit..hairline ehhh c'mon....purse matching shoes? eh, age flip coulda been way more...ok "won 1st battle" line was koo..."do track wit u" was personal but coulda been wayyyyyyyyy harder....at home wit moms expected...freezer was pretty decent flip...altimers medicine generic as hell right there...touching youth alil funny...lmao--->blad spot match off center fade..I laughed at that 1...bodyboy eh...dad molestation was a ouch! lol...awww u coulda really explored his sis being a dyke more an hit him harder...feel da heat like the pistons?c'mon man...Honestly I don't think u was going all out...you prolly got a bunch of punches u aint wanna give away til u face him in a battle where it means something...cuz literally I was expecting alot more...flow was alil shaky early on but settled in koo..u shined on the biggie beat flow wise the rest was jus ah'ight..delivery same as flow opened kinda eh, ended strong...also u coulda sold ya punches better...fluctuated ya voice more...had timely pauses to emphasize a certain punchline or flip to make it standout more, hit harder...the lack of cadence in ya voice is what made it somewhat blan...I dont wanna say they were saving you but ya dubs & addlibs was def very helpful in the delivery department...the opening Ja beat was decent...jay & big beat I enjoyed more an worked tons better wit ya voice.

Ok on to see what Q came at ya wit....1
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Old 06-07-06, 03:50 AM   #12
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lmao, 3/4ths of the feedback if from OYD members.

word man this is far from a battle, like I said, the battle option is still open.


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Old 06-07-06, 04:17 AM   #13
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fuckkkkk this is nice man, i was impressed by this actually, havent heard alot of ya stuff lol. ya flow is killer, and devliery is hot, beat choice i actually liked aswell lol. good shit man

btw, what was the 3rd beat in it???????
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Old 06-07-06, 04:52 AM   #14
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1-2 good lines

80% of them were fake personals... <---that statement is 80% fake

i.e., "Never went to college" = fake <--everyboy asked you for proof, you ran from the scene. aka - YOU LIED!!

"in his 30s" = FAKE <--you're 29, you said it your self. stop frontin!!


"buyin purses"... = corny...never in my life <--lmao, who would put it past you???

"sendin me wack beats"...LIE...never sent you a beat and you know it. <---dog you sent me three beats for this "collab" you were so desperate to get going that never got nowhere!!! corny ass muhfucka.


lemme seperate the truth from the lies.

so name me ONE fake personal you hoe.



and JD, word up man thanks.
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Old 06-07-06, 02:18 PM   #15
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Listening...

I actually liked the beat.

The lyrics are hitting hard. Flow was nice, it rode the beat was very nice.

Lyrics actually had me laughing...

Nice shit. I liked the first half of the track honestly.

Good shit.
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