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03-09-06, 06:57 PM | #1 | ||
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word bumpin yo
first verse pretty nice lyrically thing i aint like was dudes emotion, wasnt really there honestly kinda affects his delivery too but his flow str8 your verse was hot though ya delivery nice i thought it fit the track nicely ya flow coo on this, ive always liked ya flow though lyrically its good overall solid verse 3rd verse was basically same as 1st, i think it was same guy hook was OK, i thought it couldve been better it was jus kinda...boring? i think it couldve used maybe a lil more emotion or suttin, since the beat sound a bit harder word overall its solid man keep it up peep that new MAS joint
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