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Old 09-29-04, 07:31 PM   #1
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~The Cross~

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The Cross


Hook 2x

I Carry The Cross The Virgin Mary Had An Abortion Born From Sick Organs Had To Through Hell As An Orphan Had To Bring It Back Underground I'm Happy That The Shit's Underground For The Council I'm Holdin
It Down


Eye Of The Storm Cynical Like Children Of
Corn The Day I Was Born A Metal Nucules Was
Formed Chromosmes Imuntites,
Congruently Aligned With My Spine Combined
With A Mind Through Images Invisioning Rhymes
Perception Of Time Is Infinite
Destructions Imminent
Delivery Is Like An Aids Patient Was Spittin It
Sicker Than Infected Dics In Anal Passages
Rappers Are Faggots Wit Extacy Habits They
Talk Tuff But Softer Than Rabbits
Bastard Pillow Bitters Ruff As A Rider But Azz
Got More Muddy Traction Than A Used Tire
I Smell Something Fishy Fuk That I Smell
Something Shitty The Game Is Too Pretty
What Happen To The Rugged And Gritty
Now Everybody Milking That Pop Shit Just Like A
Titty But I'm Here To Tell You The Teething Done
I'm Smackin Teeths Outta Gums The Final
Destination Cause The Reaper Has Come
I Punch Em At Best Slay Em To Rest And Snatch
50 Organs Outta One Chest Through Bullet Proof
Vests Ya Kids Is A Mess
Couldn't Be Considered Flawsy Wit Dental String
Ya On Ya Chest
Wit More Jedi Mind Tricks Than Yoda Using
The Force Abstrakt..i Carry The Cross..

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Abstrakt I Spit Pain And Swallow Misery Shit Attrocidies In Toilets Of Clamidies Sanity Wipping My Azz Wit Humanty
So Basically Who's The Shit?
Ya Movements Are Constipated Straining To
Duplicate It Like Gentic Codes Chromosomes I Was Cloned From The Bone Marrows Of Jesus And Mary Feeble Moans
Born On The 27th Moon The Month After June From A
Lioness Womb In A Sarcafagus Tomb
Abstrakt Writen On Fabric Cloths Gathering Moth Deciphering Codes From Languages That Hasn't Been Talked
Use To Drop Jewels But That's The Move
Of A Clumsy Prophet Now
I Take Aim At Brains Launching Rockets Outta
Heavens Cockpit
Lodge Spits From Hells Esophagus Torch A
Metropolis Speakin Verses Of Firey
Gauntlets Kick So Much Shit I Got Knees For Toilets
Enuff Punchlines To Spar With Indenting
Margins In Looseleaf
Punches So Hard Brushin Ya Hair Is Fukin
Brushin Ya Teeth
Ab's Is A Beast Sniping Mcees An Stealing
Cadavers For Feasts So
Either Way You Taken A Loss Heaven Or
Hell Abstrakt.. I Carry The Cross
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Old 09-29-04, 07:41 PM   #2
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Dope!! you got lyrcial skill . Change the way's it formatted. What i mean is there's word's from the next line in the previous line...........................................
Eye Of The Storm Cynical Like Children Of Corn
The Day I Was Born A Metal Nucules Was Formed
Chromosmes Imuntites,
Congruently Aligned With My Spine Combined
With A Mind Through Images Invisioning Rhymes
Perception Of Time Is Infinite ,Destructions Imminent
Delivery Is Like An Aids Patient Was Spittin It
Sicker Than Infected Dics In Anal Passages
Rappers Are Faggots Wit Extacy Habits
They Talk Tuff .....But Softer Than Rabbits ..

>>see what I mean ? Not sure if that's a typo or what. But if you fixed that the whole way thru . this will be dope...
keep this shit coming....pz
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Old 09-29-04, 07:53 PM   #3
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AIght Thanks For The Feedback Homie

Ill Work On That Thanks For The Advice

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Old 09-29-04, 08:41 PM   #4
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dope shit see thats why i got you as soon as i saw your open mic fix the structure like @ said and youll be a monster you got hella talent and madd vocab dope shit council is repping here PEACE
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Old 09-29-04, 09:13 PM   #5
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Hell Yea Council Reppin Ta The Fulles Fam

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aNY mORE fEED
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Old 09-29-04, 10:15 PM   #6
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Can I Get Some MOre Feed Please
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Old 09-30-04, 06:50 AM   #7
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Quote:
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Can I Get Some MOre Feed Please


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Old 09-30-04, 10:03 AM   #8
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hell yea that was hot u used good words n ur good at usin em too aight lata playa
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