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09-30-04, 10:14 PM | #1 | ||||||
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The MadMan
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The MadMan
by: BigPappa76 Look deep into my eyes to see the mind of a madman in disquise see the hurt of the years and the tears of the lies look in to find the hatred and desire the burning of lust that is red hot like fire these eyes have seen it all in the days of my life theyve seen happiness, hatred and ultimate strife so many people tell me my eyes look tired and bleak look into them and see them as nothing but meak the eyes hold the key to your thoughts, a window to the soul feed them with vission like the embers of the hotest coal tell me what you see when you look into my mind i pitty you because hell is what you will find go ahead and look deep into the soul of a man defined but beware of the mad man that lurks deep inside my outer self is less revealing than my inner stare into my eyes and see the true thoughts of this sinner bring me to life by vision and sight feed my thoughts and give me life and might! no one is truley what they seem like at first glance look into there eyes and begin to get lost in the trance if you figure out the eyes, you have won the key the key to the soul, the key for the right to see to see all of what is true and deep inside inside the man with the mad mind. BIGPAPPA76
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09-30-04, 10:32 PM | #2 | ||||||
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solid drop!! You came with a tight flow nice rhyme's and a good structure.A couple of line's are a bit stretched but it doesnt efect the flow to much.. good drop .. keep them coming....pz
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09-30-04, 10:38 PM | #3 | ||||||
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ayo thanks for the feedback man! uppin!
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09-30-04, 10:48 PM | #4 | ||||||
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thanks a lot hommie. uppin da feedback!!!!
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09-30-04, 11:14 PM | #5 | ||||||
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lets see some more feedback
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09-30-04, 11:34 PM | #6 | |||||
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ay ya'll this guys in my crew!!!! lol naw man that was hott man i'm very impressed, you'll go far with those rhymes man!! good drop
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10-01-04, 12:35 AM | #7 | ||||||
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thanks for the honest feedback hommei! im uppin this shit for some more feedback yall!
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10-01-04, 01:23 AM | #8 | |||||||
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Yo Dawg Dat Verse Was Down, I Like It, Its A Nice Subject To Write About, And U Definetly Got Skillz U Should Go To A Studio And Make It Big. Props To You.
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10-01-04, 10:37 AM | #9 | ||||||
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thanks for the feedback hommie, uppin this shit
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10-01-04, 10:49 AM | #10 | |||||||
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waddup good flow n yea its true u can tell anything by a persons eyes
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waddup gangsta!?!?! R.I.P. Isaiah Ryder 7/11/82 - 2/26/04 tell all my people i'm a Ridah nobody cries when we die we outlaws let me ride until I get free I live my life in tha fast lane got police chasen me-Tupac |
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10-01-04, 01:00 PM | #11 | ||||||
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ay, thanks for that feedback! uppin
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10-01-04, 04:42 PM | #12 | ||||||
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uppin............................
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10-01-04, 11:05 PM | #13 | ||||||
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ayo uppin this for some more feedback, ive been here a while and this is my first open mic so let me hear ya!
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10-02-04, 01:47 AM | #14 | ||||||
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uppin this for feedback people.............
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10-03-04, 01:03 AM | #15 | ||||||
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feedback... uppin.................
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