The MadMan
by: BigPappa76


Look deep into my eyes to see the mind of a madman in disquise
see the hurt of the years and the tears of the lies
look in to find the hatred and desire
the burning of lust that is red hot like fire
these eyes have seen it all in the days of my life
theyve seen happiness, hatred and ultimate strife
so many people tell me my eyes look tired and bleak
look into them and see them as nothing but meak

the eyes hold the key to your thoughts, a window to the soul
feed them with vission like the embers of the hotest coal
tell me what you see when you look into my mind
i pitty you because hell is what you will find
go ahead and look deep into the soul of a man defined
but beware of the mad man that lurks deep inside
my outer self is less revealing than my inner
stare into my eyes and see the true thoughts of this sinner
bring me to life by vision and sight
feed my thoughts and give me life and might!

no one is truley what they seem like at first glance
look into there eyes and begin to get lost in the trance
if you figure out the eyes, you have won the key
the key to the soul, the key for the right to see
to see all of what is true and deep inside
inside the man with the mad mind.

BIGPAPPA76

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solid drop!! You came with a tight flow nice rhyme's and a good structure.A couple of line's are a bit stretched but it doesnt efect the flow to much.. good drop .. keep them coming....pz

ayo thanks for the feedback man! uppin!

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16 KOs 19 WINS

thanks a lot hommie. uppin da feedback!!!!

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lets see some more feedback

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ay ya'll this guys in my crew!!!! lol naw man that was hott man i'm very impressed, you'll go far with those rhymes man!! good drop

thanks for the honest feedback hommei! im uppin this shit for some more feedback yall!

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16 KOs 19 WINS

Yo Dawg Dat Verse Was Down, I Like It, Its A Nice Subject To Write About, And U Definetly Got Skillz U Should Go To A Studio And Make It Big. Props To You.

thanks for the feedback hommie, uppin this shit

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16 KOs 19 WINS

waddup good flow n yea its true u can tell anything by a persons eyes

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ay, thanks for that feedback! uppin

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uppin............................

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ayo uppin this for some more feedback, ive been here a while and this is my first open mic so let me hear ya!

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uppin this for feedback people.............

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