yall want a vote well here's one....

!!!WORK ON STRUCTURE BOTH OF YOU!!!

ok da run down

opener: Se7en... both was ok, but se7en's flowed better.. and a lil easier to read

closer: Beats... Seems like se7en fell off twords da end

punches: both.. both had some real good punches.. and some real lame ones.... bothe kinda fell off at parts.

structure: Se7en... much easier to read than beats..

Overall it wasn't too bad.. just try to keep da intensity goin through da whole verse.. both...


Vote: Se7en
for better punches and structure

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