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01-17-07, 01:36 AM | #1 | ||||||
why so serious!!??
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love???
IP: 2020 96DE
she just wants ta be goofy i wanna be serious
she did sumthin to me cuz now im curious she says shes cautious but is she interested already feeling nauseous might as well finish it this shit'll cost us so dont be beginning it claims shes falling for me but aint hard ta realize that she does adore me along with 50 other guys how can this even be me and nikki never met she'll leave me be ta flirt wit fifty other men April third she'd be only fifteen then fucking with my feelings if she gives me head still wont be enough cuz i feel us bonding these times are rough cuz i feel forgotten i know she's too young but i cant help it maybe im too dumb but still i'ma tell it she's away from home her cellphones smashed its eating at my soul and my bones just snapped my hearts turned cold im so bent in half in the end i know that i'ma just laugh and learn ta let go as soon as i attach my links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238687 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234192 MUHAHAHA i re-opened it myself
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01-18-07, 06:12 PM | #2 | ||||||
why so serious!!??
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IP: 2020 96DE
uppin for feedback or i'll close all ur threads muhahahhaha
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01-18-07, 06:19 PM | #3 | |||||||
Herb
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IP: 41C9 93E3
it was aight i guess...nothing to special... u got some tallent but u still need to elevate... keep it up man never fold from pressure.. just do yo thing an fuck all the bitches an haters if u like writin this type a shit then dont let no one tell u different.. i give it a 6/10
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01-18-07, 06:26 PM | #4 | ||||||
why so serious!!??
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IP: 2020 96DE
thanx for the feed...i just put what was troubling me in ink (before i typed it up on rv) so to me i think it was good cuz it got out most of what i wanted ta say but appreciate it that u dropped an outside opinion i'll RTF when i get the chance
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