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Word...listen to the track and see for yourself.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219956
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219890

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hate to be a jerk, but same issues with EQ levels here...when u get ur new set up, it's gonna take ur audio to another level bro


neway

I like the heaviness of the beat


love the hook...though it could stand to be amp'ed a notch


ur flow is nice here...with the story telling vibe...delivery matched the flow


Life after death, only Eazy E knows?...how is that when at least 10 rappers have died?



^^other than that glaring mistake...lyrics were good for the most part


good track



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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

yeah listning..............

nice beat...................hard banger......

flows sikk................

delieverys nice.................................

but like q said about eq levelz..............

lyrics r nice hook is illy too.............

nice drop man one of yer best definitly.............9/10 sikk drop fam

rtf on my new joint............................

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Feed used 1/20/06 "2 Kingz(feat Trifty)"

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Intros Koo.

I Like your flow

deliverys nice

lovin these lyrics they deep

emotions koo

your voice is dope



presence is dope

i like the hook,should be upped a lil on volume i think

2nd verse

likin the lryics more

flow seems the same,still dope


3rds koo.....................
yeah


feelin it

Downloadin

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OYD MAFIA

Thanks for the feed...

Wow at all the sleepers though...

Uppin this bitch.

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shiiitty quality prob the worst on rv lol
damn at the multis ok lyrics kind of played topic also this beat is kind of boring and plain
chorus sounds wierd
i really am not feeling thsi track because of the beat
6.5/10

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okay...u def need a de-esser an a compressor...especially on hook.....the quality took a big chuck outta this song.......flow was good but lacked variations u need to change it up sum..not too much but jus enuff to keep it fresh.....delivery is angry but inconsistent...u go in & out of monotoness......which seems to be breathe control, related...damn man....barring quality this coulda been SOOOOOOOO much iller....but anyways stay up....keep dropping.......1

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I love the idea of the of the song fam definitely.. flow is good but like Tripple N said you need variation to add flavor to your verses. THe hook is the strong point of the song but the quality takes away from that. You just need to learn how to use the de-esser and the compressor to keep your levels about even. Cause it bounces a bit. The 3rd verses was lower than the other two verses. But the emotion is there everything you need is there you just have to construct it properly and you have a great song on your hands. WHen you're recording at home rapping is only half of the battle. i learned that first hand. You can have a dope song but the quality makes it average. Mixing is a very big part of recording at home so you have to master that as well.. good shit overall though just a couple minor set backs...

Young!