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04-14-06, 01:05 PM
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...The Truth...
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Breathe(Exclusive Shit!!!)
IP: 2DC6 C243
Verse 1 Its the prodigal son back on the block witta passion These cats wanna know my style, I wanna know whos ask'n I dont aprove of you dudes try'n to rape my music Cuz I'll catch u wit the heat and you wont even use it Its a real bad look, I'm get'n sick of these wack niggas I aint goin out like ya'll, I'm not a regular rap nigga Catch slugs to ya body if you run'n ya lips Rob ya bitch 'n' have my whole crew run in her lips I''m really back nigga, i spit that crack nigga Get a fuck'n clue, unless you wanna get clapped nigga Listen to ya boy, I'm one of the last real Emcee's Lyrically, if I was Talib Kweli, I'd be smoke'n them tree's Kick'n it wit Mos Def on the set, I'm mos def gone wreck Every track I breathe on, spit a couple 16's 'n' I'm back on Listen as I define ya defintion and get right back on
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04-14-06, 04:13 PM
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...The Truth...
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IP: 2DC6 C243
uppin dis right here
drop sum feedback
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04-14-06, 07:55 PM
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IP: 5B30 0354
Drop two links or this will be closed
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04-14-06, 09:20 PM
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...The Truth...
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IP: 0099 D95A
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226386
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225494 there u go uppin dis man, stop sleep'n
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04-14-06, 10:46 PM
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...The Truth...
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IP: 6963 08EA
Uppin
stop sleep'n ppl
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04-15-06, 03:22 AM
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...The Truth...
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IP: 2029 97B3
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Drop Sum Feedback
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04-15-06, 02:52 PM
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...The Truth...
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IP: 2029 97B3
UPPINNNNNNNNNNNNNN
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04-15-06, 09:46 PM
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IP: A5DB C937
its coo man for a few lines it went up and down thru-out but it wasnt wack it shoulda been longer or somethin
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04-16-06, 03:07 PM
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IP: 2029 97B3
thnx man, i appreciate da feedback
uppin dis joint right here
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04-18-06, 06:34 PM
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Man how u gon' mention Mos def and Talib, and u spittin commercial..... the flow was strayt... u got potential, keep 'em coming and step ya game up
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05-01-06, 05:36 PM
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IP: 99B6 F4D9
It Was Cool But It Should've Been Longer
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05-09-06, 11:46 PM
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IP: F79E D621
this was ok. i've seen thousands of verses like this. so this is nothing but your own words. rhymin' was str8. content was played out like soccer. this was an average piece. not real ill, not garbage. simply, anyone could've said this....stay up...
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05-19-06, 08:36 PM
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IP: 6377 1993
dude you gotta stop rhyming the same words over and over again, thats not good. always a no no it makes ya verse come off mad newbish
and yeaaa I seen alot of breathe verses this wasnt too bad "Its a real bad look, I'm get'n sick of these wack niggas I aint goin out like ya'll, I'm not a regular rap nigga Catch slugs to ya body if you run'n ya lips Rob ya bitch 'n' have my whole crew run in her lips I''m really back nigga, i spit that crack nigga Get a fuck'n clue, unless you wanna get clapped nigga" ^best lines. But I hate that you rhymed nigga and lips so much
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