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11-15-04, 08:48 AM
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Heavyweight Championship: Sdizzle .vs. Stephen Elwood
IP: AEBA 9CCC
 ^4 votes...remember to vote clearly^
Rules. Read & Good Luck Check Ins Are Due Tuesday By 12 Midnight Eastern Verses Are Due Fridays By 12 Midnight Eastern Voting Ends Sunday At 12 Midnight Eastern
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11-15-04, 04:00 PM
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GONE... I QUIT
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IP: 64E3 6603
lol wow.......gl...
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11-16-04, 12:51 AM
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GONE... I QUIT
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IP: 64E3 6603
when its time to show his skills, stephens never owned it
fuck, the only reason your in this match is cuz i didn't have an opponent kids heads gassed beyond belief, his face is bout to burst he cant win on rapbattles... why do you think hes on rapverse? kids not liked by anyone, so what he talkin bout his rep hes got a 8-step plan for victory.. ............................... but im just gonna skip past step and i dont even understan dhis lines, to me its all ramble then when opportunity knocks steph breaks the door handle just take ur loss like a man & quit ur bitching ima leave wood in a termite-able condition
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11-16-04, 01:35 AM
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IP: 9FA1 B27A
we'll get this early.. im abit busy.. ill drop tomorrow..
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11-18-04, 03:07 AM
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IP: 9FA1 B27A
Your finished..
Delete your account of RB, Or maybe just quit rappin son, Cause you shot up on RV... other boards hes been dead for months, Fat shit, Im above, you cant get higher than me, You put shadows on the sun........ .....And hes never heard of Brother Ali, Wannabe rapper, This bitch will never get full grown, The crowds like rip sdizzle!..... Then puts it on his tombstone, My punches hit hard, Plus idiot.. Man its stickin to you, Asked him to make sense.. He pulled out the scissors and glue, Case man you try to be funny, But really just a pain in the ass, So i throw you in the garbage bin... ....Is when ur a barrel of laughs.. uh. ok.
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11-18-04, 08:22 PM
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As Seen On T.V.
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IP: 5867 FD83
sdizzle:
when its time to show his skills, stephens never owned it fuck, the only reason your in this match is cuz i didn't have an opponent lol. good opener. kids heads gassed beyond belief, his face is bout to burst he cant win on rapbattles... why do you think hes on rapverse? another good one. kids not liked by anyone, so what he talkin bout his rep hes got a 8-step plan for victory.. ............................... but im just gonna skip past step okay, nice. wording was sketchy. and i dont even understan dhis lines, to me its all ramble then when opportunity knocks steph breaks the door handle structure off, punch hit thought. good. just take ur loss like a man & quit ur bitching ima leave wood in a termite-able condition again, last line a lil short on flow. but nice punch. ya have great punches, some personals connected. structure was weak on some ends but the wordplay was good, could have squeezed a multi somewhere in there. overall good. 7.8/10 stephen eldwood: Delete your account of RB, Or maybe just quit rappin son, Cause you shot up on RV... other boards hes been dead for months, bad wording, word j-j-jumbly.[b] Fat shit, Im above, you cant get higher than me, You put shadows on the sun........ .....And hes never heard of Brother Ali, [b]um no. Wannabe rapper, This bitch will never get full grown, The crowds like rip sdizzle!..... Then puts it on his tombstone, eh. ill give ya effort points. My punches hit hard, Plus idiot.. Man its stickin to you, Asked him to make sense.. He pulled out the scissors and glue, ironically, this line didnt make sense. Case man you try to be funny, But really just a pain in the ass, So i throw you in the garbage bin... ....Is when ur a barrel of laughs.. got the punch, not bad. needed wordplay. ya punches werent connecting, the analogy must have been from alabama, and the similies/ metaphors from texas. idk. lol. but ya didnt win, nice try though. vote: sdizzle congrats. return the favor sometime.
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11-19-04, 01:56 PM
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IP: 28D6 AD76
damn, it was an okay battle...but still close...
both of yall had relatively decent structures.....Dizzle focused mainly on personals while Elwood focused mainly on punches......and i think Dizzle got this one...he was more consistent in his verse, even though i dont think that he had anythin that was truly outstandin...Elwood, it jus seemed like a lot of the punches were too abstract to hit hard enough...close one tho... V/ sdizzle... |
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11-19-04, 05:25 PM
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RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
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first of all i cant believe this was for the heavyweight championship, somethings wrong here. elwood your punches were weak, and poorly worded, not hard hitting at all. sdizzle had a decent opener and an okay closer, only real punches of the battle
v- sdizzle
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11-19-04, 05:31 PM
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IP: 38E0 678A
elwood punches>sdizzle punches
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11-19-04, 06:26 PM
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Straight From Da Lab!
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voted for sdizzle
his punches were hitting wayyyy harder than elwood's punches, both of ya, I was disapointed in the structure and flows by both of ya, they were one short one long, which is hard to read, both could work on that, elwood had punches that don't make sense as well, so he lost on that. Sdizzle had personals, elwood didn't. so overall I vote for dizzle for a overall better verse...these RB cats have fucked up structures as far as I know, no hate.
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11-19-04, 08:03 PM
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IP: 0EB9 CEB7
Shit was wack.
Vote: dizzle
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Lyrics One Man Crew Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud |
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11-19-04, 08:04 PM
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IP: 0EB9 CEB7
I mean, vote Steph. Whoops.
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Lyrics One Man Crew Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud |
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11-20-04, 07:02 PM
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IP: 9FA1 B27A
4-2..
lmfao.......
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11-22-04, 03:39 PM
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howdy
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IP: AEBA 9CCC
Closed. Dizzle wins 4-2. Both of you on voting probation...no votes next week and youre banned.
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