ite dogg,

10 lines,
both spit in 20 mins(if not you will get dq'd),
no crew hate or d/r votes,
no freepsoting,
no feeding,


.good luck...pz

checking in................................................ .................................................. .................................................. ...............pz

fucking bitch afraid of me to spit...comin explitic...what you Delors Tucker?,
K's vacuming your wins like a fucking dyson....but wait your mena be the sucker,
im THUG mother fucker......and im not talking about Tony Hawk,
this bitch was an ok bottle of wine...ill officialy leave him corked,
listen x-man....like playing basketball with fire....im hot to handle,
Zarbon bringing heat?......fuck man i got more shit of a candle,
Zarbon 3-0 down......sounding like sum1 out of the x-files,
you've got problems with your shit....and im not talking about piles,
cause like Stevie Wonder buying pubs..im not seeing your bars,
not a real life knockout....but ill still leave you seeing stars(.:K:.).


....ite worked on sum things.................................pz

cmon man............................................... .................................................. .................................................. ....pz

alright im spitting now


my comp is being slow

It's bad you suck,please don't let your big name gas you up
You the only one on the net to get popular for bein wack as fuck
Skinny bitch, its 2004 homie now your lacking appeal
but how can I eat you toothpicks usually come after the meal
I'm twice as cold, you might just fold with this knife I hold
This a grain of salt to me, to you it's enough to melt icy roads
Puberty is at a standstill, looks like your face is damn filled
With enough acne to give looney tunes a lifetime supply of anvils
My guns so rare, squeeze tha trigger till ya lungs show bare
I'll put a clip in ya stomach big enough to put up Repunzle's hair

iight...

Zarbon... far too basic... not much complexity in ur shit...

K... u had some nice wordplay... feelin the flow... some nice witty lines aswell...

vote - K

THX man^...............................uppin(1)....... .................................................. ...............................pz

aiight this line still has me laughin

cause like Stevie Wonder buying pubs..im not seeing your bars,
not a real life knockout....but ill still leave you seeing stars(.:K:.).

NICE!!! LMAO, the closer finished the battle

both ya'll came nice but i feel K hit his punches a lil harder, and had nice wordplay

Vote- K

if yall could drop an honest vote on my slept on battle id appreciate it thnx

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105641

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my rhymes heatin up the track got u meltin like an icicle
this kid aint even old enuf to drive, whats he doin thuggin on his bicycle?!

Merked: NyZ GrIncH(5-1), dUrAsTiK(5-1), mcsnypa03(5-0 DQ)

Flow: K
Punch: K
Structure: Tie
Meta: K
Enjoy: K

vote: K

zarbon was to basic

work on your punchs

hey......every one wants a vote back....whats new(bitches)

honest vote
punches- Z(he had some harder to the point punches)
flo- Z(compact and tight...k was stretched and choppy)
meti4's- K(he had alot of content....it was inevitable he took this)
multi's- Z(more quality multi's....they connected better)
Overall- Z(it's clear these other voters wanted dik ride votes because theres no way K gets votes in here other wise.....the only thing he had was a longer verse....no hate....its the truth)

^wtf how can u be streched and chopy............................................. .................................................. ...........................................

man everyone knows who took this and he made his shit wit humor and style

Punches:Z
Style:Tie
Structure:K
Wordplay:Z
Multis:Z
Flow:Z

Overal:Z

So to conclude this battle Zarbon Merked K and no hard feelings to K, he juss didn't win this battle, good try but Zarbon Spit some top game at him and it hit him hard so my VOTE=Zarbon(Everyone not saying u dick ride voted but u gotta make fair votes, sometimes, not saying n e names)

Personals

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<a href="http://http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1194274">Se7eN v.s Long Beach Finest</a>

I'll poll the vote when I can because it won't let me vote right now my fucking comp but I will, pz out Se7eN

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<a href="http://http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1194274">Se7eN v.s Long Beach Finest</a>

do u see all those pauses?^^^thats choppy.....
your words were so drasticly different u had to pause makin it choppy
for example:
but wait your mena be the sucker/
Ima thug mother fucker......................that doesnt flow, its choppy