Battle b/w lman_1528 and Murderin the Inc


lman_1528's Verse:

10 lines max so i will have 2 beat u fast//
ur giving away this victory quicker than a porche with NAS//
i will bust caps at ur face like its a target range//
i will send u back 2 ur broken home wit nothing left in yea but bullet holes//
ur just mad cuz the rap game is mine//
and at the end of this u ain't the 1 that will shine//
u now those ryhmes at yours but i ain't one 2 tattle but just make sure u keep that in mind next time u try 2 rap battle//
i am only doing 8 lines 2 give u a better chance dan an ape on weed da color of da ripiest grapes//

Murderin the Inc's Verse:

since you steped up to me u were about to fall
ur so weak its ya motha u always call
Im ready and willing to do my thing
whats this you aint got no bling
oh no wait there it is so small
reasons for this is ya on the dole
before youve even had ya chance.
Look man no-ones taking a glance,
C'mon Bitch i cant hear ya,
Im a strong mutha fucker do not fear ya

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Weaaaaaaaak ass battle.... Well anyways

No punches hard enough that i could recognize. Murderin your lines were too short, and no real punches at all. Vocab bad for both. But hte One punch that i think lman had was better then murderin's none.. And some things i didnt understand with your verse murder...

Vote Lman


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I agree with you Liquor, Weaak!

Lman_1528's Verse:
Ummmm...."u now those ryhmes at yours but i ain't one 2 tattle but just make sure u keep that in mind next time u try 2 rap battle//
i am only doing 8 lines 2 give u a better chance dan an ape on weed da color of da ripiest grapes//". I don't understand! I dont know if its your style I'm not feeling or your vocab I'm not seeing. But for some reason I think both. You started off OK, but fell off tha edge of tha cliff, and killed yourself, at tha end.

Murderin Tha Inc:
Ummmm..Ok..What was that? You didn't follow tha rules, you had no punches, nor any style. If your planning on 'Murderin Tha Inc.', I advise you to use a gun cos' ya raps won't work.

Overall:
Both were lackin style, meta, vocab, punches, name it.
I felt Lman_1528's Verses took this battle more serious than Murderin Tha Umm...

My Vote: Lman_1528's Verses

Tips:
Work on ya vocabs. Make sure they're wrote in a way for viewers could read and understand your style.
For example;
//This is one of tha worsest battle/ I've ever seen/
Since ya'll both are wack/ Ya better off "Workin" as a team/

HaHa! Just thought I say that!
Ok, I'm Back!

Do You. It's better to find your own style than trying to come with none at all.
Keep on seeking more battles to elevate ya'll skill.

I'm Dat Nigga, Hiest! Holla!

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ThaDayWalkaz

Ya'll Niggaz Screamin Battle~But You Don't Want War

lman_1528 da winner better flow!
Vote lman_1528..................pz out

i felt your ryhmes iman you got my vote yall both lack but you did better to me

iman got this battle both verses were weak but imans wa a little better.yall vote on datboyjay vs. furoshis

OMG dis was da weakest battle ever it was like vinilla ice vs mike trson battling |
Vote lman_1528 he came better

i'm with everyone on here this was the weakest battle i've ever read

lman_1528's Verse:

10 lines max so i will have 2 beat u fast//
ur giving away this victory quicker than a porche with NAS//
i will bust caps at ur face like its a target range//
i will send u back 2 ur broken home wit nothing left in yea but bullet holes//
ur just mad cuz the rap game is mine//
and at the end of this u ain't the 1 that will shine//
u now those ryhmes at yours but i ain't one 2 tattle but just make sure u keep that in mind next time u try 2 rap battle//
i am only doing 8 lines 2 give u a better chance dan an ape on weed da color of da ripiest grapes//

Murderin the Inc's Verse:

since you steped up to me u were about to fall
ur so weak its ya motha u always call
Im ready and willing to do my thing
whats this you aint got no bling
oh no wait there it is so small
reasons for this is ya on the dole
before youve even had ya chance.
Look man no-ones taking a glance,
C'mon Bitch i cant hear ya,
Im a strong mutha fucker do not fear ya


but my vote also goes to Iman for tryn betta on his verse
He had weak but ok pounches and didn't spend time jus blah nonesence

vote on my battle in sig

peace

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