KEEP YA MOUTHS SHUT

(Intro)
Niggaz around here open their mouths just ta beef wit a nigga
whaz hapnin', betta keep ya mouths shut

(Flomore)
Think before you speak, fuck it! who does?
I put a blunt in my mouth and catch a new buzz
So I start talking shit just to get attention
I done fucked around got my ass some henchmen
So I rap up a verse instead of throwin up news
Don't make me run around and say "Fuck You!"
That's how I feel and I know I can do it
And I know I can lose it, some call me stupid
I ain't down with that, so I might shit gats
And wipe my ass with some bullets and get bats
I'm swinging for an homerun, the bases are loaded
Or else the ball hits your mouth, it's been voted
Should I be strapped sitting down to a electric chair?
Or how about me laying down with tetris spares?
I would like to see someone put me in silence
I have to fight this, you should fucking be quiet!

(Hook Ax)x2
Believe me....... Don't say our names
Ya'll must know we ain't playin no games
We don't go and threat ppl in vain
Keep ya mouths shut and continue playin'

(Ax)
Sometimes beef makes you leave homies back
and somettimes mothafuckaz make crews for wacks
think we will but I don't consider it like that,
wack or not I can make a lyrical attack,
I ain't a perfectionist, and neither a perfidious man
but I seem peripatetic lookin for a serious band
I don't want to cause beef, shit that's why I left em
if niggaz is disrespecting me, ama disrespect em
votin against me in all battles SABOTAGING my record
but not gon' make it cuz ama SABOTAGE you in a second
and look at that nigga AX postin givin propz to crews
n' nuttin but disrespect back, yo pen put that on the RV news
I've left niggaz frazzled so they use otha niggaz rhymes 4 a diss
I'm the real DAWG and I write my own shit, u ain't lookin 4 peace?
And I ain't lookin for beef in this muthafucka, just talent
3-1, take it muthafucka, who's jealous now?, u fallin'
The game hurt ya'll, this a torture, nah, this an emulate
cuz you aint' compared to me. my rap left u stimulated
Ma nigga Flomore, that's a real nigga, Loyal no matter what
I owe you.. where's da muthafuckin hook??... Bring it Back!

(Hook Ax)x2
Believe me....... Don't say our names
Ya'll must know we ain't playin no games
We don't go and threat ppl in vain
Keep ya mouths shut and continue playin'

(Outro)
Jus keep ya mouths shut n nuttin will go wrong
do your thing.. Don't hate on a nigga
Ax Dogg niggaz!... Flomore niggaz!....
W.A.R. Still family!..... PEACE!

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If you retarded PM me and I'll explain you shit

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there ya go... uppin....

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Bizzacckkk

..............uppin.....................

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Bizzacckkk

the flow is really basic homie and nobody gives a fuck about your intros and outros and u better find someone to start doin your hooks not tryin to hate just tryin to help

$hine Dope

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"and i dont wanna see none of my people hurt or murdered it aint worth it i cant think of a better way to word it then to just say that i love yall to much to reach the verdict so ima walkaway before it goes any further and no dont get it twisted its not a plea that im coppin im just willin to be the bigger man if yall could quit poppin off at the jaws wit the knockin cuz frankly im sick of talkin and im not gonna let someone elses coffin rest on my conscious"

Eminem

^^^^ what he said!

......uppin this shit...........

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Bizzacckkk

Yo this was aiiite...I liked the intro and outro...hooke _NO...I Didnt like it too much

Flo - your verse was aiite........6/10
Ax Dogg - Verse was better.....7/10

overall 6.5/10

RTF Link in sig to my "Let Loose Summer 2005 Remix"

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maybe you should pm someone to work with ya. someone knowen. wouldnt be bad to get a big named guy up in here.
maybe ppl dont like the intro's and it turns them away. I like it.. you have to catch the eye of the reader man..
Nice to see you too in here.

Sweft

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Thanx Ya'll.

UPPIN

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