Efecx wattup?
Verbal Shoota wattup??
Black queen wattup???
B Wattup????
Blackmage wattup?????
Stanza wattup?

RAW IN DIZ, HERE WE GO NAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!

Da Hook:
I know ya see uz little homeyz...WE RUN RV
I know u cant see me, 'cuz......WE RUN RV!
Even doh yall mad, we both now dat...WE RUN RV!
U wannabe me, wannabe G But.......WE RUN RV!!!
[ha ha haaaa}

Verse:
i see alotta ppl talking, so call it a sixth sense cuz ima see dead people
wordz so electrifiying they say dat lightnin touches steeples when i'm writing
da flowz frightenin, alot ov deez krews hate, plot & debate, lifez great
gettin mad @ font, smoke a blunt, sit back & watch U.E Stunt
dumb cunts, pretending ya all hot, but RAW Kno its juz a front
so we hit'cha frum da back, leave u wid bullet holes in a hospital bed
sheets color red, write da rhymez wita pencil
..................so 4 talkin da gun shyt, guezz yuh do ''catch sum led''
i kno u see wat da fuck i be jottin down, nuthin u can do bout it
u niggaz betta keep it on ''hush'' lyke aftermathz latest hit!*
nostradamus talkin hard, got a beat down frum da nigga Stanza! [WE RUN RV]
Chaos talkin dat hard shyt, but i swear 4 biting strobe shuldda banned-ya
i';ll hand-ya a loss, watch u fagz have da salad on toss lyke a ''head chef''
ha ha ha..RAW DIED?..............Shyt go tell dat 2 stanza, bq, me or Teph
we hit u from da Left.......... cuz u kno RRAW IS RIGHT, WAR Is tight!
sabotage got less ''efecx'' than a parapelgiec trynna punchline fight!
R-Rated dont got shyt on me....unless u can count a few dick-jumpers
u associate wid da gay types, while i hang wit long nossel shotgun pumpers
pump action, we blastin, im 14, but dont get me confuzed
i'm slicka than ''greese'' & U.E Be cruishing 2 catch a BRUISE
U LOSE..............Diz gamez over b4 da ref even blew his whistle
i got soul rebel BULLshittin cuz ov da RED Target aiming frum da missile
diz a keystyle, off da dome & u bitchez be shittin bricks
claiming ur ''syck''...i juz say ur catchin FLU SHOTZ So i call 'em pricks
gay tricks, ridin dicks wid no bitch, it dont make sense
paying ppl 2 join ur krew, dont believe me?...juz ask IMMENSE
Diz situationz a lil tense, beat down diz topical writer, we kno whoz tighter
NOT U....
krew hopper culdnt ''spark shit'' if he tried 2 ignite hiz ''waste'' widda lighter
i'ma ''cryhme'' fighter, call me ''Po-Po'' have u scatterin screamin ''OH NO''
got u scared ''legless'' lyke wheelchair patients having a 'P.O'**
no-flow-hoes, deez vets got less skill than E.C Holding a mic
DAUBS A BITCH!...Trunna eat da ass ov a MALE DYKE! [Tweety]
i swear ALL U KREW r lyke....half man, who dont seem 2 be ''Amazin''
u can call me ''6 Feet'' cuz i grasp da 'CALI-co' & hm YOUNG n BLAZin
which krew thinkz they phazin?...RAW n WAR Iz here 2 stay
WE RUN DIZ SHYT!...Da verbal predator, amerikkaz most...
.......Raps cold as ICE CUBES, But we all kno its a GOOD-DAY!

Da Hook:
I know ya see uz little homeyz...WE RUN RV
I know u cant see me, 'cuz......WE RUN RV!
Even doh yall mad, we both now dat...WE RUN RV!
U wannabe me, wannabe G But.......WE RUN RV!!!
[ha ha haaaa}

Yo diz iz sum keystyle shyt, FALL BACK NIGGAZ! California, 2 da dirty dirty, out 2 da europeans...ITZ ALL RAW BABY!...e run diz, who want wat? NONE OV Y'ALL!


WE RUN RV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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umm that was cool...

...not the best..but it was a good diss..but i do have 1 question..why didnt u jus make a diss to UE?..i mean u tried to diss us throughout the whole thing..

u had some nice punches and stuff in there...i would give it a 7...........

I wuz dissing u & ur krew & anybody else who haz doubted da krew RAW RUNZ RV Diz wuz a keystyle but thanx fo da feedback yo

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wassup fam.
yeh i thought this was a decent piece. the flow was good, structure can't be faulted and the vocab was above average in this one. the punches were pretty good for real. considerin this was a keystyle i thought it was real good.

yo can you RTF on my OM piece:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199478

~peace~

hey yo thanx 4 da feeback, i returnd da favor 4 u, uppin diz drop

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RAW aint runnin shit but their mouths........

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Okay Decent Shits Man, Came Pretty Good Here, VOcab Was Basic Shits Though But no DOubt This Piece Was Nice Structure A Bit Iffy But Keep It Up Man

This was an okay peice, I can see it audio.. but I wasnt to fond of structure and your vocab's nice for a 14 year old.
Work on your word play and structure and always, always keep uppin your vocab.

good drop,

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thanx 4 da feedback yall & havoc da link wuz posted by souljah i left feed on dat peice if datz aight, uppin

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uh, not bad eh....definately dont run RV though......some lines were pretty boring, but keep up for sure, alot of fake shit, and stanza re-used that parapalegic shit for an OM

anyways, peace out

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