12 lines
no hate votes
etc..
dregun to spit first

this is my sign in...

Checkn in
Prolly an easy win fo you!

I dont take shit from anybody, so Im gonna give 4885 his fuckn verse back/
Now jump on my sack like Diggem, and take this right hand full of smack/
Sounds whack to you, but nothing seems able to top your shitty spits/
so when I gets this win, dont be surprised if you see 85 throw'n toddler fits/
I hate when dicks get drips, but I guess that means your pussy in the clearing/
cuz the only time I see your tearing is when a freak givin you your nightly rearing/
I got you fearing the outcome, theirs no way you gonna be able to claim this victory/
But if you wanna see this W up close, just get on your knees and blow me fairy/
Its scary this little bitch got in, who he fuck to get in a damn crew/
That was until I view'd my PM's, and Sniper told me Dynasty gonna drop you/

When your at the beach you’ve got muscles, but not on ya abbs
So when ya havein sex on the beach, your bitch is catchin crabs. (lol)
I’ve got a permit to slit your throat to make ya choke on ya quick wit
Coz this battle is all over you, like you were covered in my spit.
That bitch might be a sniper but I’m comin out shooting in my tank-top
so you check your pm’s & my last battle again coz sniper’s already bn dropped
I’t be better if ya flow was good, and your spit at least made sense
Coz at the start you sed 4885 prolly win, but in the forth line you say, The win you’ll get.
I’m gonna knock this bitch up Plant the lyrical sperm to start fertility
You got as much credibility as a bitch wiv H.I.V Your diseased with inability
If you woz married to rap, I’m pretty sure it would want a divorce
When I battle, I don’t come marchin wiv my army, I get inside you like a Trojan horse.

if ya dont understand the wordplay please dont vote

^^ nice shit 4885, newbie style from dregun
dregun came real basic, not much of anything
and wat he did have was weak
4885 had sum personals, weak 1's though
4885 had sum witty ass punchlines ex. trojan horse, etc.
structure was both off and flow was kinda-- eeefff..
but 4885 gets this for punchlines

vote 4885- yo 4885 drop a tryou for voice of tha streetz, forget dynasty !

uppin for votes........................................

Nice shit 4885. That was an easy one. Good shit dawg..

I’m gonna knock this bitch up Plant the lyrical sperm to start fertility
You got as much credibility as a bitch wiv H.I.V Your diseased with inability

thats pretty coo shit right there. peace ill hit you up sometime.

thanks for that.....uppin............................

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yo 4885 had this shit easily...
betta wordplay
had some personals but dey was lackin the illnes
punchlines though...shit was krazy...

but yo 4885 hit me up tomarrow on this name...ill battle yah...
and my ol sn used tah be sikwidit record was 53-5 so i will eitha be on this one or--------> sikwitit vrson2

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