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Old 04-19-07, 01:46 PM   #1
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19. Civilized Gangsta (2-3) vs. 20. Prycele$$ (3-4)

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Yo Momma Battles

We've all heard yo momma jokes. Can you actually write them? Diss your opponent's mom and be vicious. Be creative, a lot of stuff has been played on this topic so you will need to come original. Good Luck.

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Old 04-19-07, 07:16 PM   #2
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Old 04-19-07, 07:29 PM   #3
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Old 04-19-07, 07:38 PM   #4
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Yep. Lets drop early. 14, by tomorrow night.
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Old 04-22-07, 08:24 PM   #5
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Ya mom is so stupid, no one even knows that gay heffor.
Funny how she can play dumb, n still not pull a A for effort
Thats pussy's so loose, hit it? shiit, she's not even worth it
I'd auction her off...but the pryce value would be worthless
She's got so many problems, I'm not sure if a Psyche would cut it dude
Obviously ya not losin weight on the pill, maybe u should try somethin new
The date was s'posed to of been big money, thas all spent on food
When she said we were goin to a drive up..
.....................I didn't know she meant the dollar menu
Yeah that fast shit got her a lil overweight, theres no cuttin back now
Seriously....Is she fuckin standin up, or is she sitting back down
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Old 04-23-07, 08:34 PM   #6
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eh 10, sounds good..

ya mom was gainin weight so i said lose or leave ho..
well.. i gave her props for tryin...
..but the weight loss pills kept gettin lost in her cheek bones
slut and whore, birth control is a no, u can take her and fuck her..
so his mom got more fuckin babies then chinese dumpsters..
dirty girl she need to lift her shirt up just a bit 'n i wont stress
cause seein her cleavage is like lookin down the valley of death
ive seen ya mom fat flap game and its gettin kinda old...
but wit all them bad hands that been on her.. i was expectin more folds..
ya mom hates sleepin at ur sisters cuz she has a bunk..
but everyday must be a great day..
cuz if she wakes up on the wrong side of the bed she gets stuck

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Old 04-23-07, 10:42 PM   #7
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Dope job man. Prolly one of the best verses i've seen from you.

uppin this. should be a good battle.
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Old 04-23-07, 11:11 PM   #8
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Ya mom is so stupid, no one even knows that gay heffor.
Funny how she can play dumb, n still not pull a A for effort
coo
Thats pussy's so loose, hit it? shiit, she's not even worth it
I'd auction her off...but the pryce value would be worthless
nahh
She's got so many problems, I'm not sure if a Psyche would cut it dude
Obviously ya not losin weight on the pill, maybe u should try somethin new
wording
The date was s'posed to of been big money, thas all spent on food
When she said we were goin to a drive up..
.....................I didn't know she meant the dollar menu
coo.. cud be worded harder
Yeah that fast shit got her a lil overweight, theres no cuttin back now
Seriously....Is she fuckin standin up, or is she sitting back down
ok
seems like you got some cool cliches in there, you just should work on the connection to the cliche and the punch, its there just not clear enough and could be if you thought harsher.

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ya mom was gainin weight so i said lose or leave ho..
well.. i gave her props for tryin...
..but the weight loss pills kept gettin lost in her cheek bones
wording
slut and whore, birth control is a no, u can take her and fuck her..
so his mom got more fuckin babies then chinese dumpsters..
nah
dirty girl she need to lift her shirt up just a bit 'n i wont stress
cause seein her cleavage is like lookin down the valley of death
iight
ive seen ya mom fat flap game and its gettin kinda old...
but wit all them bad hands that been on her.. i was expectin more folds..
ok
ya mom hates sleepin at ur sisters cuz she has a bunk..
but everyday must be a great day..
cuz if she wakes up on the wrong side of the bed she gets stuck
nah
some cool concepts, but then some concepts were kind of bland. the vally of death line probably hit the hardest but i didnt see much harshness from you either...

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Old 04-24-07, 05:52 PM   #9
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Old 04-24-07, 09:17 PM   #10
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The date was s'posed to of been big money, thas all spent on food
When she said we were goin to a drive up..
.....................I didn't know she meant the dollar menu


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slut and whore, birth control is a no, u can take her and fuck her..
so his mom got more fuckin babies then chinese dumpsters..
dirty girl she need to lift her shirt up just a bit 'n i wont stress
cause seein her cleavage is like lookin down the valley of death



ROFL, okay okay okay...Stubbs had more creativity in his shit, but lacked wording...and then Prycele$$ just made me laugh like fuck at those 2 punches lol...if only you worded them a bit better. Both were inconsistant though, but like I said the relevance behind both of Prycele$$' punches is better than Stubbs so I gotta give it to him.


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Old 04-25-07, 02:55 PM   #11
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i dont really fuck wit any of your bars this time around. seems like you tried hard to come with good concepts just none of them were really affective. wording played a big part and some just werent good. no hate tho mah dood

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i could quote your whole verse as lines that were "ok". nothing to special but nothing really weak.

pryce takes this one because his whole verse was pretty decent

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Old 04-25-07, 03:21 PM   #12
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Ya mom is so stupid, no one even knows that gay heffor.
Funny how she can play dumb, n still not pull a A for effort
ok
Thats pussy's so loose, hit it? shiit, she's not even worth it
I'd auction her off...but the pryce value would be worthless
no
She's got so many problems, I'm not sure if a Psyche would cut it dude
Obviously ya not losin weight on the pill, maybe u should try somethin new
bland
The date was s'posed to of been big money, thas all spent on food
When she said we were goin to a drive up..
.....................I didn't know she meant the dollar menu
Ok.
Yeah that fast shit got her a lil overweight, theres no cuttin back now
Seriously....Is she fuckin standin up, or is she sitting back down
cool


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ya mom was gainin weight so i said lose or leave ho..
well.. i gave her props for tryin...
..but the weight loss pills kept gettin lost in her cheek bones
nope
slut and whore, birth control is a no, u can take her and fuck her..
so his mom got more fuckin babies then chinese dumpsters..
weak
dirty girl she need to lift her shirt up just a bit 'n i wont stress
cause seein her cleavage is like lookin down the valley of death
lol, for some reason
ive seen ya mom fat flap game and its gettin kinda old...
but wit all them bad hands that been on her.. i was expectin more folds..
ok
ya mom hates sleepin at ur sisters cuz she has a bunk..
but everyday must be a great day..
cuz if she wakes up on the wrong side of the bed she gets stuck
nah man, weak wording...had no effect


ok battle here...


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Old 04-25-07, 04:08 PM   #13
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wow, 2-2. FOUR different angles of voting.
Close shit. uppin this.
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Old 04-25-07, 07:50 PM   #14
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yeh..
2 - 2 lets keep it goin..
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Old 04-25-07, 10:23 PM   #15
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Ya mom is so stupid, no one even knows that gay heffor.
Funny how she can play dumb, n still not pull a A for effort
Ehhh... nah, almost though. 0.5/2
Thats pussy's so loose, hit it? shiit, she's not even worth it
I'd auction her off...but the pryce value would be worthless
Points for the nameplay, the diss was iffy. 1/2
She's got so many problems, I'm not sure if a Psyche would cut it dude
Obviously ya not losin weight on the pill, maybe u should try somethin new
The 2nd line wasn't close to being worded harshly. 0.5/2
The date was s'posed to of been big money, thas all spent on food
When she said we were goin to a drive up..
.....................I didn't know she meant the dollar menu
The fuck is a drive up? This was ok. 1/2
Yeah that fast shit got her a lil overweight, theres no cuttin back now
Seriously....Is she fuckin standin up, or is she sitting back down
Huh? Nah... I get it, but nah. Wording is poor. 0.5/2

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ya mom was gainin weight so i said lose or leave ho..
well.. i gave her props for tryin...
..but the weight loss pills kept gettin lost in her cheek bones
Didn't he just use this concept? Anyways, this was better than his. 1/2
slut and whore, birth control is a no, u can take her and fuck her..
so his mom got more fuckin babies then chinese dumpsters..
Pssshh... nah, not feelin this. 0.5/2
dirty girl she need to lift her shirt up just a bit 'n i wont stress
cause seein her cleavage is like lookin down the valley of death
Ok... and? This wasn't harsh. 0.5/2
ive seen ya mom fat flap game and its gettin kinda old...
but wit all them bad hands that been on her.. i was expectin more folds..
If you were expecting more, that means she doesn't have a lot. Anyways, this was barely decent. 1/2
ya mom hates sleepin at ur sisters cuz she has a bunk..
but everyday must be a great day..
cuz if she wakes up on the wrong side of the bed she gets stuck
Lol, ok. POTB. 1.5/2

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