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Born2spitt | 5 | 100.00% | |
sun jian | 0 | 0% | |
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04-30-04, 10:39 PM | #1 | |
Flyweight
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sun jian vs. born2spitt
IP: 9928 846B
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no d/r crew hate votes you go first against the WU general |
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04-30-04, 10:49 PM | #2 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 7165 B811
Ight... ill spit first... so u can bite.. haha
You don't got to worry, I don't pose a threat// Cause I can't end your career....it ain't even started yet// You wanna reply? Lemme get my dick out your mouth first// Only time you spit fire's when you swallow grenades and out burst// Probably laugh my way to the semitary if you tried to kill me/ / Frontin' like you don't feel me, but sun jian versus Da Illy// that's like takin' a knife to a gunfight...litterally// Come at me with half a brain instead of half a plan// It's like I've cut you into two...you're not even half a man// Leave the beef forked, this kid's a butterknife// Drown you in the sewer to show you the gutter life// Verbally i Spit Lyrics That Cut Like Swords Of Speech// Spit Tha Breath That Removes Stains Like My Vocal Chords Was Bleech// Jian Could Never Beat Me, MY Best Advice Is, This Man Retire// Cuz Im Hot Like A "Denzel" Movie, I'll Leave This "MAn On Fire"// |
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04-30-04, 11:12 PM | #3 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 9928 846B
check it
you was born to spitt what tobacco into a bucket. we can tell you rep the south yu carry around a musket. my rhymes like food leave you heavy and bloated. they waitin in line to vote and my verse havent even loaded. yo rhymes were whack i was like what the fuck. yo too fat get the gun so ican give you a free tummy tuck. yo you aint blazin ima put this text on fire. and leave yuu like the great depression whack rhymes for hire. i can defeat you easily just give the word. cause i can win this with three lines just like larry bird. not my best but ok |
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04-30-04, 11:16 PM | #4 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 7165 B811
if thats not ur best then wut is.. man i gotta give it to u.. that shit is pure.......... WACK!!!!
now lets get these votes in people |
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04-30-04, 11:25 PM | #5 | |
Light Weight
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IP: CE13 565F
good battle 2 both
the winner is born 2 spit b/c his verse was much more complex the punches were clever and set up well, the flow was constant throughout and he used multies, and personals to seal the deal. the only criticizm from me is maybe use more advanced vocab+ and san juan just keep it up, elevate and u are on yur way peace
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04-30-04, 11:28 PM | #6 | |
bingo!
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IP: AAF4 20CB
born2spit
punches: 2spit flow2spit rhymes sunjian structere tie wackness sunjian(lol naw just playin lol) my favorite line in battle:Jian Could Never Beat Me, MY Best Advice Is, This Man Retire// Cuz Im Hot Like A "Denzel" Movie, I'll Leave This "MAn On Fire"//\nice battle but easily tooken by born2spit
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04-30-04, 11:31 PM | #7 | |
you gotta hear me again
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IP: 3240 794D
ok the break down: Sun jian was ok but!!!!!!!!! the opeaning sucked then the last 5 lines were ok and it was a shitty flow.
Born2spiit all i got to say is keep killin' um. best line: Jian Could Never Beat Me, MY Best Advice Is, This Man Retire// Cuz Im Hot Like A "Denzel" Movie, I'll Leave This "MAn On Fire"//
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04-30-04, 11:37 PM | #8 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 7165 B811
Ight thx for the votes guys... we just need a few more and im straihgt
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05-01-04, 12:11 AM | #9 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 4289 77F4
Both of there flows were aight
Sanjian your shit was just to elemntary horrible vocab nice flow Born you had a nice flow and vocab nice structure vote born |
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05-01-04, 12:14 AM | #10 |
Suspended: Biting
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IP: 24A5 12D6
Both Of Yall R Good But Only One Is Better
And Born Was Better In That Match His Flow And Punches And Vocab Was Way Better Than Sun So Vote =born2spitt |
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