::ELEMENT::

...::A masterful lyricist in disguise::...
But you can always find the true rapper if you see the flame in his eyes//
There merciful, full of rage, you can see words, cruves and maybe even phrase//
A true rapper shows his true color, when he discifers one after another//
A true rapper raps from the soul, even if what he has 2 say could neva be controlled//
A true rappers mind is like a mental institution, your flows keep comin and comin till you have a perfect solution//
Its like there mic is there progenitor, its in there heart, in there flows, it starts from the core//
A true rapper, can capture, timing//
Timing is everything expecially with rhyming//
Style is another ELEMENT of a true rapper//
You hold your own you'll have your own chapter//
Only a true rapper understands a true lyrik, your not true if you dont feel it and hear it//
A true rapper goes into a outrageous fit, when nothing he says is just quite it//
But if your not a true rapper dont force the flame that has never been lit...

~> still gotta up the vocab<~

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....da flow was aight.....i guess...it was really forced in places, and not forced at all in places..even it all out, you'll only get betta, peace...