Spike Sanders

aight yo, are ya sure you can handle this//
carefull now you aint fuckin with a rookie bitch//
so if you pull it, ya best cock back an unload//
cause when i see the nine flash i let the teck flow//
(on "flow", voice fades away)
yo,yo,check it, yall cats realy no nothin bout me but peep this//
i'll buck shots at ya body in sequence, spangled bloody like sequins//
meat popsicles get melted with firepower like corban dallas//
totin malice//
in the form of metal ejected when i cock the mallet//
so quit runnin ya mouths an do sumthin bitchs, cause talk is cheap//
shit i'll run up on you with them thangs that cause eternal sleep//
and blast yall, till ya bodys leak//
thats right i'll toast ya, pull the teck out the holsta//
call me rollacoaster, the way ya heart beats faster as i come closer//
an na man the kid aint a joker//
i'll flex on dudes like "LEX", an blow the "LUGAR"//
leave ya ass in a stupor//
after i blow ya chest out. NEXT?//
wont step, i'll come after you the//
and put the "4-5" on your chest like old school Jordan//
now its over, so just give up and lay ya guns down//
cause this is "King of The Hill" bitchs, and i just took the "Crown"//
me and RULE, came ta rule you clowns-

The Nine Talks Blood I Talk Run
When I Step To the Movement
Your Death Is Soon To Come

(Rule)

Process of the street influencing negitivity to begin to preach
Catching danger in my eyes so i close my lids an turn my cheek
Praying that god doesnt make my enemys become obsilite
Craven to make you taste the gravel that creates stable concrete
You can't touch the UnToUcHAbLe im blessed wit talented elite
Me voice capable to desieve clowns an pump chumps off da street
Fuck it, hell wit the critical palace i'm spitten above average
Due to the savage pain an rule bond a devilish marrage
Wit tears bein pulled by horses from an eye carrage
My thoughts on'a cd to buy cost more then'a billion carrats
Valuabled tobe the greatest, a diamond spitter classed rarist
Evaperating haters to forfil my destiny to achieve respect
Killing herbs wit words until there's no rhymes left to test
Flame shooter tongue creating rap stage fires ofyeah its rare
But when you think about an emcce dont kill wut u cant compare
I flow on stage an you stare cuz im like'a hurrican nun dispaired
Sure it aint fare, do i care?. no you wonna talk some wack shit
Runnen me down but the only HIT you spit was your skit
Damn you use ta be all over the scene wasnt a place u didnt visite
Now lemme tell u the next thing your ass gunna persure is'a clinic

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

in the bar before the 4-5/old school jordan one the last word 'the'
is suposed to be then.

uppin for some feedback, dont sleep on this piece.

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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW

Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S.

uppen for some comments thanks

__________________
Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

uppen for some critiques

__________________
Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

shit i forgot the 3 things....

1)King of thievez - Lifestyles of...
2)Masta C - I Need you
3)Pillboy - lil piece off the top of my head

__________________
Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

yo i was feelin both verses,
spike, wtf was with the intro thing, after that though ur ryhme, pattern, flow an everythin else jus got better. u cant really put the into a text piece. but nice drop.


rule, nice drops everythin was on point, u showed nice vocab. not much bad too say bout it.



overall: 7/10 good drop
keep it up