Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Explain all your votes...

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Win by forfeit

.Barz Of Steel. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-05 11:40 PM.

~Sonofisis~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-05 11:45 PM.

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My bad for posting the shit twice........

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Battlin u, I couldn't Be Hurt, He's a Bitch, Look In His Purse!
Recyclin Trash, don't u know that ain't Good For The Earth?
And, Somebody's Hand stays up your ass like "Gay Puppets"
He ain't showin his battle record coz he's Ashamed Of It
Barz Of Steel? plz, u never Went To Jail
dude, ya "Barz" is rusty, like Alcatraz' old Prison Cells
Plus I keep Heaters to Squeeze
Or my left hook'll put u to "sleep", so u can Beat Me In ya Dreams!

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"I Must Be The Greatest"!!!!

It's coo, good luck.. and explaining your punchlines is kinda cheap in my opinion. but i guess that's how ya'll get down on here, peace..

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"I Must Be The Greatest"!!!!

checkin ishh......................................

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uppin............................................. .

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"I Must Be The Greatest"!!!!

Ashamed of my battle rec???

Right...

Straight battle though...

uppin for some votes............

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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

Battlin u, I couldn't Be Hurt, He's a Bitch, Look In His Purse!
Recyclin Trash, don't u know that ain't Good For The Earth?
lol liked opener 3/5
And, Somebody's Hand stays up your ass like "Gay Puppets"
He ain't showin his battle record coz he's Ashamed Of It
aight its ok but played 2/5
Barz Of Steel? plz, u never Went To Jail
dude, ya "Barz" is rusty, like Alcatraz' old Prison Cells
nah dont work dont connect well
Plus I keep Heaters to Squeeze
Or my left hook'll put u to "sleep", so u can Beat Me In ya Dreams!
erm ...aight closer

work on ya punches an shit you aint got good punches
seemed to try on personals but didnt work so elevate work on ya vocab shit woz basic.....

Kiddo's a lame, how do I put this into your brain?
That I'll "Smash Sonic" Like "Breaking Old Video Games" *
lol nice opener
And I dont give a fuck if this faggot said he the best....
17-1?? Ok, let's talk about how you had your record reset! **
lol nice personal connected well
I'll open your face like surgeons do, herb its true...
That the only thing "Sonic Is Good For Now a days"
.................................................. .Is "Serving Food"
didnt feel but ok punch didnt connect that hard
He thinks he's the shit, like he "Must Be The Greatest" There is
But let's be serious........................................... ...
His accomplishments are about as blank as his sig!! ***
rofl nice closer

barz jus had a all out battle verse nice personals good punches got you this rtf here
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=205375

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OYD MAFIA

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

~Sonofisis~ breakdown!

Battlin u, I couldn't Be Hurt, He's a Bitch, Look In His Purse!
Recyclin Trash, don't u know that ain't Good For The Earth?
Tha opener was aiight,but recyclin trash is good for tha earth!,so that line didnt have any kind of effect...3/10

And, Somebody's Hand stays up your ass like "Gay Puppets"
He ain't showin his battle record coz he's Ashamed Of It
aiight punch,nice personal..but sorta played at tha begining..heard it before..
5/10

Barz Of Steel? plz, u never Went To Jail
dude, ya "Barz" is rusty, like Alcatraz' old Prison Cells
Play on tha name?..Couldve been better but still hit,Hah!..5/10

Plus I keep Heaters to Squeeze
Or my left hook'll put u to "sleep", so u can Beat Me In ya Dreams!
Closer was weak an played as fuck...3/10

Bars of steel breakdown!

Kiddo's a lame, how do I put this into your brain?
That I'll "Smash Sonic" Like "Breaking Old Video Games" *
Nice punch,original an nice play on tha name...8/10

And I dont give a fuck if this faggot said he the best....
17-1?? Ok, let's talk about how you had your record reset! **
Personal hit hard,I like ths bar cuz it was personal...but couldve been used better..7/10

I'll open your face like surgeons do, herb its true...
That the only thing "Sonic Is Good For Now a days"
.................................................. .Is "Serving Food"
knock his ass out with this line here....NICE! 10/10

He thinks he's the shit, like he "Must Be The Greatest" There is
But let's be serious........................................... ...
His accomplishments are about as blank as his sig!! ***
I almost didnt catch this cuz tha structure was a lil off but tha closer was nice too...good personal!7/10

Bars got this hands down...~Sonofisis~ you need ta work on ur punches,no hate juss elevate,str8 up an down,WORD!

Return favor tha links are in my sig! Thanx

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