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05-05-07, 01:51 PM | #1 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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"Inspecter" Ft Irion OYD P.A shit
IP: 6541 D513
yeah man.....sample of the new mix tape "Half man Half Alcoholic" ...proly gona put this one on the net.....new dude im spittin w ...Orion on the 2nd verse
it's Ebircs-1st orion-2nd scratch interlude ebircs-3rd http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5309028 links_____________________________________ http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3164838 spull http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3164839 kid york
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05-05-07, 06:50 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 5E4D 5AFF
1st cat, your adlibs dont line up alot, sounds kinda rushed and weak, takes away from the verse. Not really into the content, but the flow is decent throughout.
2nd cat, is smooth and sounds more polished. His presence and swagger is more apparent to me, reminds me of some old wu-tang type shit really. 3rd guy, sounds corny, and doesn't really mesh with the rest of the track so far, and verse is really short....... |
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05-06-07, 11:43 AM | #3 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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IP: D477 A779
to each their own...............................
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05-06-07, 01:15 PM | #4 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: B4EB 5C31
solid track
bircs sounded a lil like enygma on here and the 2nd guy has a nice flow...but needs more inflection in the delivery to hold interest more...esp. with that repetitive like rhyme scheme good drop 1 |
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05-07-07, 01:37 AM | #5 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: 3011 7E9C
ebrics sounds low on the beat...your adlibs ARE off, or maybe just too loud...nice erry thing else tho...2nd guy is smooth...solid verse...pretty nice hope to hear more from him.....like the rhyme scheme on the 3rd buddy, adlibs still off....track overall needs better mixing....otherwise not bad...pretty dope
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05-07-07, 09:57 PM | #6 | |||||||
El Padrino
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IP: 90A6 BE8B
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DAMN BIRCS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Theres an awful lot of Taelnt in the PA AREA!!!!! shit.... ORION remind me of the CHEF!!!!!! this track is Beastial!!!!!!! prolly one of my favs coming out the PA camp for reals 8/10 KEEP DROPPIN THAT FIYA WOrld PEace -DOn Tito Bronsky
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05-09-07, 02:34 PM | #7 | |||||||
10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: E979 6945
ya, the flow sound like u off beat or sumin. not diggin it. weird beat. decent sample for the chorus and scratchin.
second- def came better, fuck ya self like hermaphidites.. haha. decent drop his dubs seem a lil off as well. 3rd- wouldn't wanna listen to dudes voice. ends lame as well.
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