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Old 12-01-03, 10:19 PM   #1
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"Rejuvination"

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yo tell me how u think my track is... give me some feed, so i can work on my game... not good equipment, usin crappy shit...

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Old 12-02-03, 01:22 PM   #2
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ok ima listen to hate me now..... i know that beat.... u spittin pretty fast..... lotta vocab in them lyrics, flow is ight, but its like u readin the lines too much, if u give more attention to how u flow it will sound more like a 'complete' thing.... anyway, its ok. Pretty short tho.... keep droppin....
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Old 12-03-03, 11:06 AM   #3
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the lyrics, are aiight, the flow is aiight.
the beat is sick, you sound aiight on the beat. emotive voice sound nice.
theres a thousand cats that sound like you on the web.

nice drop

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Old 12-03-03, 05:55 PM   #4
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thanks man.... there is a lot of cats that sound like me though....lol...
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Old 12-03-03, 08:59 PM   #5
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aight u listened to my shit,so im returning the favor....thats how i do...

aight loading...still on 56k..lol

listening to "hate me now"

beat-its ok,not really feeling it,i mean im on a laptop right now,so its not bumpin well..

flow-flow is there,but u need to shorten ur bars,sounded like u was rushin to hit the snare,but ur emotion is there son so thats good,presence is good,ur voice remind me of AZ...for some reason..lol

1 advice,throw away that computer mic,and get a new soundcard,then youll be straight

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Old 12-04-03, 12:25 AM   #6
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its not a comp mic... its a gay ass unheard of dynamic mic...lol... n i need to put my old soundcard from my old comp to my new one.... n it'll be better... but thanks for the feed homie....
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