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Old 12-16-07, 07:35 PM   #1
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who knows?? - maybe I !!!

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B4 I START I JUS WONNA SAY IM TOTALLY PISSED AS MY 1ST COPY OF THIS WAS THE TITS,BUT 4 SUM REASON UNKNOWN WHEN I FINISHED WOT CAME 2 ME AT THE TIME I WENT TO THE BOG AND BACK AND THE WHOLE PIECE VANISHED FROM MY FUCKING SCREEN!AND BECAUSE WOT I WROTE CAME TO ME SO FREE'LY I CUD'NT REMEMBER FOR SHIT WOT I HAD.MAN IM PISSED!!!!!!!! I DUNO MAYBE I UNCOVERED SUM TRUTH,IT WAS THAT WEIRD!!



You can compare danger with the devil,
as danger is loud+bright,like winning a medal.
Danger aint never bin clever,
we know it's the devil that makes us feel under the weather.
The devil makes us believe results of danger is a accident,or should i say thats how he makes us percieve it,
but why the fuck does god let us mugs sit back and believe it???
It's weird how no matter wot happens in life good(god) or bad (devil),
with no questions asked we believe god brings happiness and the devil brings nothing but feeling sad.
it's like there a team to control wot and how we think and our PLANET,
if u really think bout wot im saying its rather funny INIT!!??!!
So when something does happen good or bad,we instantly think of the positives+negatives,
if you ask me thats jus 1 of there many sedatives!!!
(of us thinking for ourselves,see the control??)
Together they control everything we think to our emotions,
so continue to think while im working out there notions.
This subject catching my interest more then no other then all my ex lovers,
i mean iv heard sum sick shit b4,but imagine that if they were brothers!!!
I'v got so much energy flowing in me rite now,iv never thought this deep b4,
got this feeling iv uncovered sumthing,fuck knows if so no doubt the devil+god will be knocking at my door!!!

So dont worry im not begining a passage of insanity,
I've just cracked humanity!




ALSO AFTER IT HAPPENED I RANG A FRIEND TO TELL HIM WOT HAPPENED,AND WHILST I EXPLAINED THE PHONE CUT OFF TWICE,AND THERE WAS STRANGE NOISES INTERUPTING OUR CONVERSATION.FUCKING WEIRD!!!
MORE THEN A COINSIDENCE I RECKON,WOT U THINK?????

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Old 12-17-07, 10:38 AM   #2
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Old 12-21-07, 08:32 PM   #3
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Old 12-26-07, 07:57 PM   #4
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The devil makes us believe results of danger is a accident,or should i say thats how he makes us percieve it,
but why the fuck does god let us mugs sit back and believe it???

lmao.. funny but true

shit was good. i think u rather should hav switch subjects tho ryte in the middle of the verse to sumthin talkin about.. "thats why i do this rap" or sumthin or SUM shit

overall good tho.. keep it
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