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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=244999

walking down that path on a sunday morning,
i felt so happy, so relaxed i could taste all the air i breathed in.
such a glow on my face,so much time 2 waste,
livin 3 for once,looked at me woman an saw a taste for haste.
i said nothin at first but thought y is this??
sparked a skunk spliff, + said "hay hun wots up ya wonna hit this"???
the reply was sudden,"no thankyou"!!!
"well wots up hun?? is it sumthing iv done"??
"no not u,but im leaving u and im takeing our son"!!!!
"shit where did that come from"???
"im not happy,so ur not gonna b either,jus a lonely young chappie".
"well how is this?? got money,got our son,got our own home",
"wot ya say is true,but i think its best if i live alone".
"fuck y?? i love everything about u,and u loved me"!!!
"yeah but the whole time i was lying,i didnt love u,surely that u must c"!!!
"no i fuckin dont,why the fuck would u do this"??
"well 2 main reasons,im a woman + the only thing we love is 2 take the piss"!!
"well wot the fuck happens now"??
"just a couple of things im want the house+ the baby but i dont want a rowl"
"so let me c you want everything apart from a next of kin",
(i start pointing)
"or is it alittle sex off him,him or him"??
"ur dirty fuckin bitch,so u playin around again wiv that michael"??
"i thought that shit ended,u make me wonna go psycho"........
"yeah it did but he gets paid more,plz quit it my heads sore
besides you aint no angel,i know bout that hore".
"bitch plz,thats different its not as if i'l catch a disease"!!!!
"hell no it aint, im doing the same as u but yet again im the 1 to blame",
"yeah well thats real nice,we both do the same but the man pays twice"........
"hay u may be the 1 who worked,but i looked after our baby,that shit was like slave'ry",
"thats a real nice way 2 look at things bitch,take wot u wont,our whole time together u drove crazy, no wonder this shit dont even amaze me"..........

This wasnt bad! I would say more of a poetry u no wat im sayin! Good think though keep it up! It had good lines! It was long and it wasnt borin but it wasnt the most interestin! u no wat im sayin! 1 luv dawg!
Yo show sum love on sum of my battles i got 2 open ready to be closed i will appreciate it if u showed a vote and in future batttles i will vote and help get them closed quicker look for me vs. sin-scere and money staxxx thanx dawg good drop!

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cheers for the feed man,erm aint ever voted on a battle b4, wot u av 2 do???
do u leave feed on both pieces??? and how do u like vote outa 10??? as in how do you vote on which piece is best??? peace