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04-22-06, 01:55 PM
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IP: 8DBC EB1A
Kontroverzy, you had some nice lines...some were decent but not really dope...
But I kinda missed the humor here and the real hard punches....I think you could've done better... Precize, a nice verse...some lines did make me laugh and you dropped more consistent... But I think a verse should do without hints or footnotes...so next time leave them out of your verse... Precize had humor in his lines and was more consistent Vote=Precize |
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04-22-06, 02:31 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: D3BA 4499
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04-22-06, 03:23 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: 4621 23D8
Precize "how dare you try text you foo, fuck ya crew ill have um die next to u.. ...pre Lives By the sword, only thing kontro Lives Bi is sexual..." Your verse was inconsitent with what was provided in it, but some of the things you did provide were pretty well thought up concepts. I think if you become more consitent you'll have a chance at becoming a decent vet. K.ontroveryz.Y "if you even brag about beatin me, then your definetely a goof.. cuz like the doctors in the d12 situation, you couldn't "bring back" proof.." You force too much. Though I thought the line above was the best out of your verse, you forced the last line. I mean nothing in your verse was really that hard hitting, because most of it was just false shit that you had to fill in to make something happen. You had some nice concepts but you need to tie them together with nicer more consistent verse. Vote - Precize ~R~ |
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04-22-06, 04:03 PM
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IP: 329A 17E6
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how dare you try text you foo, fuck ya crew ill have um die next to u.. ...pre Lives By the sword, only thing kontro Lives Bi is sexual... v/precise. his whole verse was better than the other guys. the bi punch i thought was pretty funny. although both verses where stretched.
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04-23-06, 12:04 AM
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#20
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~Lyrical Nirvana~
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IP: 27E9 2A04
..Put the slugs to your lips, and leave you with a shell mouth..
ya moms a slut, when she went into labour, you prolly fell out.. VS. treat kon as a Know it all corpse, and have him Right n the dirt.. ...i set up shop, only thing he set up is...all night, typin a verse.. how dare you try text you foo, fuck ya crew ill have um die next to u.. ...pre Lives By the sword, only thing kontro Lives Bi is sexual... precize came doper with more and better quotables...... vote precize
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04-23-06, 02:56 AM
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IP: 6EB9 28C9
..Put the slugs to your lips, and leave you with a shell mouth..
ya moms a slut, when she went into labour, you prolly fell out.. vs. tear out ya adams apple, dip it in caramel..and beat it in ya throat.. ...i get rough, but closest he got to Mean was Median and Mode.. how dare you try text you foo, fuck ya crew ill have um die next to u.. ...pre Lives By the sword, only thing kontro Lives Bi is sexual... I got Precize taking this. . |
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04-23-06, 08:39 AM
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The Saviour
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IP: DADA 2333
Precize wins 7-1.
Precize wins (1-1) K.ontroverz.Y loses (0-2) |
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