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Old 10-10-05, 06:25 PM   #1
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50-50(French And English)

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50-50(French and English)
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=2955381&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=2955381&q=hi

really really short
i left feed on inter's song angry 16's and tha q's club banga
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Old 10-10-05, 06:34 PM   #2
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i really like all the beats that you used. really good choice. im feelin the one with the asian vibe to it. even though you aint spit on it.

flow was choppy. not consistent. it was on and off.

lyrically i thought it was kinda cool that you did that seeing as though we have the emergance of reggaetone.

overall this was ok. not good. but ok
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Old 10-10-05, 06:36 PM   #3
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lol thx man
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Old 10-10-05, 07:45 PM   #4
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Old 10-11-05, 07:29 PM   #5
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up dammit up...
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Old 10-11-05, 08:59 PM   #6
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yo i liked this beat and also this piece!i was trippin onda name of it tho but yo i really liked it kin folk! keep this up and keep RV onda come Up ~1~
LMAO and yo do we still got BEEF if we do PLEAZ let me know so we can just str8 battle and dropit ~1~
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Old 10-11-05, 10:08 PM   #7
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lol i never had beef with u, your the one who droped a diss track
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Old 10-11-05, 10:12 PM   #8
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*waits at B MAC to get in this thread and saying that my song was wack*
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Old 10-11-05, 11:51 PM   #9
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I like how you switch up the beats a lot, Your vocals are a lil low though maybe up em a lil. your flow is alright quality aint bad could be better. your emotion is alright. i can't really say anything bout the french parts cuz i aint know how to speak it haha, but damn this is a cool lil track man, i like your last one better though but overall this is cool.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...266#post2484266

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Old 10-12-05, 07:34 AM   #10
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Old 10-12-05, 10:38 AM   #11
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Rapping in French is difficult so props for that, I used to do it in Dutch and French just for fun but shit is hard for real. Flow was overall good, again it's hard to combine French and English AND keep a good flow to it. You makin it hard on yaself but you manage to hold it down quite well in fact. Vocals may have been little more clear though but nice lil thing you got right here.
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Old 10-12-05, 05:48 PM   #12
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well it aint that hard when ur borned in french lol its hard to me to speak in english and im seriously lol
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Old 10-12-05, 06:55 PM   #13
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Old 10-12-05, 08:53 PM   #14
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alright peepin now

the beats pretty damn hot..ya qualities alright....thats tight as hell u can switch up ya languages like that......pretty cool the way the beat changes when u change it too...sounds like a real deep beat too......lol theres a beat change up and then it stops..?? WTF..but i can def. tell that u've gotten hella better since u been on the site keep it up playboy

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Old 10-13-05, 12:35 PM   #15
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Quote:
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well it aint that hard when ur borned in french lol its hard to me to speak in english and im seriously lol


It's the other way around with me: was raised speaking Dutch, had French at school since I was 10, had English at school since I was 14 and had German at school since I was 14

So my accent is a mix of all these together lmao...

German is worst though, I didn't even try rapping in German lmao. Advantage you got with French is that the language itself already has a certain rhythm to it don't you think...

But props anyway...I mean the combination of both is the hard part, not the seperate languages I guess
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