hot shit, i get bread, honest yes// i am but,
modest? not yet, not if i said that i was the best//
^would i b?| _ |shit could i b?^.. wat if this. i kno i am//
wait no, i knew i was!, keyz, wit the newst plug//
was, on the block, now sittin on the coolest dub dueces wat// plus i stay wit the shotty like eulmer fudd, n keep that white girl, ellen, degeneras//
i spray like im aimin fa pests wit hugs frum teks n such//-
no vendetta cuz, clips i 'switch' quik like 'will smith'//
money cars clothes hoes thats wat a deal a get//
42 keyz got the leanience of a millyin vets//
but come at my neck n imma stomp you into a beur skin rug//-
i dont play bout it, they wilin.. who?, my dudes//
a fye dudes up, lye u, but then shave ya foheads' like kiyu's//
'bramah bull', i ca fly a dude 'wit one swing of the nose'//
'long shotty n lift em clean off his toes'//
or chop him at the ankles n cleave him clean frum his toes//
im clean frum my head to my T, to my shoes//
back up to my sweet fresh//
linen n the time i a b fake'll be the day snitches was made out to b threats//
my heat lirics a b embeded inta each speaker indented in every fuckin trunk in america//
'dont trip', EXPECIALLY cuz the boi is 'ahead of ya'//
level up like pokemon, imma bomb like mew now that im out the metal cuffs//
fa real

yall like the shit i said?
'n 4 feedback!!

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ahh a little better than last time i give it a 6/10....still think this piece needed a little more work but it gots potential...gotta get more creative with the punches...but i did like that will smith shit lol...the rest were played...u got alot of spelling errors to that need to be worked on....it was hard to read your words at times cause of that....im not feelin the content either....its played... try something different to write about other than just the same mainstream shit.....keep it up ...~1~

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B.E.S.T.....HAHA

thx for the feed.. i b spellin stuff certain ways so that ppl know how to read it so it rhymes.. lol.. but yea big ups to u tho.. and man i might.. wanna, go main.. stream one day.. naw but g imma take that advice.. up'n 4 more feed please

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