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Old 01-27-07, 07:16 PM   #16
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fuck it ill just spark it off
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Old 02-15-07, 12:38 PM   #17
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ROFLZ at a 51/2 outta from Gen-O-Tonik rating scale.

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Old 02-23-07, 01:08 PM   #18
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Originally Posted by efgeesus
What’s beyond those stars?
Is there someone like me droppin’ bars?
Wonderin’ that same somethin, deep beyond Mars?
What’s the chance?Would their intelligence be as strong as ours?
Maybe they exist but messages take eons to pass
By the time Everest is grains of dirt
They catch the A-team interspersed with adverts
Products of our endangered earth
Or perhaps existence lurks and they’ve yet to search
Their form is at the beginnin
Simple organisms who’s form is hidden
Who can guess the storms they’ve ridden
Maybe the weather system has 7 suns that are always risen?
And a blue moon occurs often as earth sends people to prison
Are the inhabitants cohesive or is there division?
Do they see every single colour of a prism?
Have x-ray vision, or even have eyes?
Is there good and evil amongst the people where they reside?
Did stars radiation mutate them into horrors to despise?
Am I before the times?
Parallel universes?In light years do I wipe tears
When my bodies are in hearses seein my own demise?
Gravity is reversed and rain rises from the skies
Oceans are so strong they move the moon, it not the tides
Or, blackholes swallowed them whole?A vacuum satan
Maybe UFO’s rose blastin other civilisations, into simile raisins
They visited here killed the roar of dinosaurs then abandoned nation
Or made pyramids, founded villages livin on secretly as Masons
We’re all aliens and this is just one of many stations
Religion was invented to stop the population questioning creations
But fossils made it possible to see the ancients
The last of a dying breed, dodo of the galaxy
Any survival rests in Kyoto to save life and humanity
Maybe it’s a sick joke and freedoms a fallacy
That’s why you make millions and sniff coke, it’s virtual reality
While some children stitch clothes in a sweatshop to question morality
I’m nothin but a Sim in a moment of clarity
A magnets turned off and we fall from grace in zero gravity
Gallant space cadets played like cassettes in a tape deck
Drifting forever as small as atoms in spaces cavity
We’re morons, they have more on in terms of brain capacity
Part of a giant celestial body?
Just a skin cell tattooed from an inkwell, could we understand this?
The suns the heart, I’m simply a part of larger planets
Russian doll syndrome, in grown, so minuscule as good as vanished
Or a billion billionth to one jackpot on cosmic bandits
Gods spare change hittin paydirt and he made earth
Now you’re reading these words from a pen I brandished
Millions of years of evolution direct to your bandwidth
Shoulda told you to begin with you need food for thought
So go grab a sandwich
Reducin thinking to whys, what on earths and how can this…?
Deceptive opticals?Killing cats with curiosity trying to imagine how this is possible
The probabilities are astronomical
Maybe life resided widely and each one of us is an oracle
Nothing is rhetorical, we answer questions within lessons
With every passing second we intensify focus
We’re osmosis in a cosmos
Don’t know if, that’s a stab in the dark or a prognosis
Homo sapien, would a planet of the apes be the closest, to hearin from apes like men??
But whatever we discover in humans endeavour I hope we never taste the end
I sit back and marvel at every single particle and wonder how long the race will spend
Waging war on each other, but until then
I am a ripple on a water molecule, hopin my pen is laced with Zen
Living, breathing, never leaving, maybe I’m just a human being
Sight seeing
Interacting in Darwin’s living museum


We’re all aliens and this is just one of many stations
Religion was invented to stop the population questioning creations
But fossils made it possible to see the ancients
The last of a dying breed, dodo of the galaxy
Any survival rests in Kyoto to save life and humanity
Maybe it’s a sick joke and freedoms a fallacy

**** This was a decent verse, yes u had a few spelling mistakes
but who cares.

Flowed well, decent vocab, something different in Open Mic!

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Old 02-24-07, 01:36 PM   #19
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COOL PIeCE

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this piice is really deep and meeningfull i really enjoyed reading it...its consist of rhymthm and flow i liked it keep it up...
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Old 02-26-07, 11:16 AM   #20
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holy shit doode..you worked it.. good shit
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Old 03-06-07, 10:58 PM   #21
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Now That Shit Was Hot Dog. U Put It Down With That,keep It Up Fam,good Luck, P.a. Y.c.
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