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Old 09-27-04, 01:30 AM   #1
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If any of you ever had a relationship that you broke off mutually...

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...you gon understand this one. Ya I know the hooks gay - but it was for my ex gf and it made her cry cause it's how we both feel. If you ever broke up with a girl you still love - you gon feel this...

Phenom - I'm writing

It's at the bottom of the page.

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LYRICS:

HOOK
I'm writin (Just jottin this down)
to tell you (listen to the words I wrote)
baby (I'm thinking about you)
I'm thinkin - bout you

and I can't (I can't move on without you)
move on (girl pay attention)
So I (yea) Thought I'd (yea)
write you (yea) baby

(1st verse)

You were the most amazing girl that I ever known/
You got me in the zone, and had me writin poems/
You were so angelic, but it was me who'd fly/
Spoke one word, and this cat could touch the sky/
Its the way I can picture you in such detail/
The only time I got distracted by a female/
Yo I gave you my time, and I loved you calling me/
saying "I need U2 girl - just like the Joshua tree"/
4 years of love, and 4 years of fightin/
Most amazing girl ever, and that's the reason that I'm writin/
Your presense, the ying and the yang of relationships/
In love with the only girl who could actually make me sick/
I wish conversations with You - had all been typed in Word/
cause I'd edit my mistakes, renouncing every word/
Couldn't let go, but yet we couldn't hang on/
Now I'm torn in two as I try and write this song.../ you know I'm....

HOOK

(2nd verse)

So much hurt can come from what a girl can do to you/
but even more pain can come yo if its mutual/
Cause I sit here wonderin if I made the right decision/
Glad that I'm no longer getting hurt but still - here I am missin/
I try and figure a way to heal, my own hypothesis/
all to now avail - cause lets face it - i'm no psychologist/
So I sit alone - concouring my own small abyss/
trying to figure out where God is - in all of this/
Days and nights I think of nothing else but you/
Wondering if you're with a man, or somewhere thinking bout me too/
I pick up the phone, I just don't know what to do/
Finally decide to hang up cause we decided that we're through/
Met the girl of my dreams, and I gave up to you my life/
tested the waters, to see if you could be my wife/
made it through more than tough times, and plenty of strife/
even still, i sit alone while i write this tonight/...still I'm...

HOOK

(3rd verse)

You know who you are, and you have a heart of gold/
and truth be told - I wanted You until I grew old/
never before had I known all about that real love/
besides my parents, my brother, and the Lord up above/
even so..... this was like none of those/
the love between a man and wife is different, or so i'm told/
now all I have is this broken heart and so it goes/
Didn't even end in hate, there was two options - so I chose.../
The mutual break off, hardest thing that i ever known/
Worse then a relationship ending in yelling tones/
Cause I love You, yeah I can feel it in my bones/
Was just that close to buying You that special stone/
My words of credability - usually end up killing me/
The gift of sensablility - has yet to be instilled in me/
I lie to myself, sayin theres another girl for me/
Even still I just pray now, that you'll never forget me/

HOOK x 2
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Old 09-27-04, 01:40 AM   #2
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i'd like to have lyrics to read along, but i like it...i know exactly how you feel...don't want to get into it though...but yeah tight track...throw the lyrics down if you wanna

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Old 09-27-04, 02:26 AM   #3
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damn that was crazy...becuz me and my girl are goin thrue the same thing right now..........damn i want to break up with her but then i dont.....she got me writing her poems too...man this shit is wierd...........we are probably gonna break up tommorow its gonna be a mutual break up also..... good shit though
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Old 09-27-04, 04:24 AM   #4
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This was basically "Tell it Like It Is track..lol" i see u going tru some shit Ven but yea u expressin yoself on this song Emotions were felt and nice shit fam
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Old 09-29-04, 12:26 AM   #5
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i got the mp3 for this track .. holla at a nigga 10,000 in RV cash for who ever wants a copy!!.. na just kidding lol...

this was some nice shit... good job... even tho i heard it hellas ago .. i feel special..aight. fam stay up
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Old 09-29-04, 01:34 AM   #6
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^ you know I always get the ok from you before I post stuff... c'mon now. lol
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