i don't kno if i'm not allowed 2 do this but yeah like tha title sayz.....i got my 1st audio a few headz heard it already said it wuz pretty good xcept tha quality....which i knew wuz bad in tha 1st place but wuteva man.... www.soundclick.com/hoodzprophet thatz it go listen 2 it tell me wut u think i 4get who did tha beat.....i jus gave tha beat 2 CALI 4 sum diss track he doin so u might hear it again on his soundclick he said sum1 else used it b4 2 but i 4get who it wuz.....i also 4got where i got it from but anyway yeah tell me wut u think bout my audio cuz i'm jus tryna establish myself as more then jus a dope sig maker cuz i actually wunna be takin seriously now.... an i do got anutha audio comin out wit my nigga Tizzle so i'ma be elevatin more an more as i do more audioz so tryan gimme feed so i can elevate even quicker an tell me if u think i've elevated from my old text shit based on tha lyricz or wuteva

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Gunn Play: RV's Original Duo

You Know Your Good Nice Lyrics And Flow Better Vocab Will Come With Age Youll Be Dope As Fuck One Day

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^thankz fa actually leavin feed....an yeah thatz wut i wuz goin 4 wit tha dipset shit wen people 1st hear it tha 1st thing they say iz "u sound like one of them dudes in dipset" or sum shit like that but i developed a dipset style cuz that my favorite group along wit The Game so i got a Harlem/Philly/Compton rap style i guess even tho i've only been in Pistolvania which givez me a mixed style which i think iz dope.....anyway bumpin this shit for more feed since y'all niggaz don't wunna gimme feed on my 1st audio
This isn't Lyricist Lounge- occasional upping is fine- /\/\ these will be deleted

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Gunn Play: RV's Original Duo

quality is way off- peep the audio assistance forum and peep the sticky threads for how to make it better... no hate, but i thought the lyrics were freestyle quality at best- flow was so so- i dunno, i used this beat before, so i like that- but i think u coulda done alot more w/ it... potential is there as far as emotion- but i think flow and content need some elevation... 1

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Listening..

Beat is pretty good..
Quality is garbage..

Your voice is pretty cool..
Flow falls off in parts of the track..

Your overall lyrics werent that impressive..
I think you should have used some more emotion..

Overall, for a first track this was pretty good..

Keep elevating and shit.. You got potential..

the flow was skechy but it wasnt that bad....maybe try using a different type of beat but other den that ti was good, good lryics n all...im surprised this was pretty good...but try using a different beat other times ight..pz

I must be retarded.
I always check feedback before i post.....

And I must say. I disagree.
I say this is below average at best....

Everything was Rome....Home....Phone.....
Got annoyin as shit.....
The flow was off. And u sounded like u had a cold.

3.2/10

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ya i kinda agree wif carson a lil
quaility was bad..but what can u do
lyrics were very basic, like 7 said, freestyle at best
flow was ok, delevery was ok... nothing special
beat was good, but anyone can use a beat lol

no hate, just saying
elevation is needed.. alot

4/10

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i cant really understand watcha saying....honestly i think it was Ehhh.....it wasn't my type song......no beef.....so work on ya quality....lyrics are good......flow fell off somtimes.....

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Quality was very bad... flow was aight, but got irritating cuz u never switched it up, and u fell off a couple times which is aight.. you need to up ya lyrics tho.. emotion was really good however.. and ya voice sounds good.. not bad for a first but you need to learn a few things about quality in the audio assistance forum then you'd be coo and don't run outta breath tryna spit sum lines, adjust them for your beat as well as your pronounciation purposes.. once u elevate i c u doin' big thingz.. so i say props, work on ya errors and you'll be str8.. holla

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Pretty Good Feedback Ignore Carson Hes Madd Cuz Hes Fucking Garabage He Needs To Be Banned All This Kid Does Is Leave Negative Feed In Peoples Threads When His Songs Suck Then He Goes And D.rs In His Buddys Threads This Kid Needs To Be Banned From This Forum For Real Dont Let The Haters Get You This Is Good Dip Nice Shit Overall Fuck A Quality

Keep shit like this up, and New Song Threads you create will magically dissapear

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uppin'.......i think i'm allowed to up it now?


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Gunn Play: RV's Original Duo

ehh i thought it was pretty good....
definetly need to work on that quality though, but i guess thats not somethign you can fix up a whole lot...
flow you did fall off just a few times, and i thought yo lyrics were fine....
i say pretty good for a first audio, you'll get lots better as time comes im sure...
lookin forward to gettin dat one out soon....

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