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Old 01-30-04, 07:59 AM   #1
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Collab:Kwizikz and Gaz Nik - Smoke Signalz

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Smoke Signals

Chorus
My memories lost in the mist…Alcohol cloudin’ my sight
Vision Blurry, Speech turns slurry, Darkness kills the light
Communicating with smoke signals ...Nature Telekinetic
Alcoholic…drink eases pain…life & times pathetic

Kwizikz Verse
My time is over…Thinkin of my nature in the modern society
….Lifes like comedy and Parody’s ensue in my liability….
Like in Attack of the clones…I’m bein attacked by own my mental
Life ain’t complemental…but still darkly monumental
….My heads stompin like a Bull, ready for attack….
…Need some protection so I’m lookin out, watchin my back…
Darkness rides in on a black horse…Still rugged and torturous pleasure
Then Foreign Mind scapes of forbidden hidden treasure
A Brain Scan…Deposition Results threw in a trash can
Hidin’ the Truth of the blips Clouding my brain like a Spain Tan

Chorus
My memories lost in the mist…Alcohol cloudin’ my sight
Vision Blurry, Speech turns slurry, Darkness kills the light
Communicating with smoke signals ...Nature Telekinetic
Alcoholic…drink eases pain…life & times pathetic

Gaz’s Verse
Smokin this blunt with a forty and my vision’s goin blurry
Its makin Lisa Riley have a body like Liz Hurley
Is this the existence which I should be livin’
Keep hearin people say that I’m a waste of a bein’
But these are the only things which help me withstand
This fucked up life that has been dealt to my hand
It helps when I’m rhyming n makin singles
But the only way I communicate is with blunt smoke signals
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Old 01-30-04, 09:03 AM   #2
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nice guys...

this is my type of drop...

the chorus was good...
deep verses and nice vocab and complexity...
the only thing that wasnt likin in this was the short verses...
i felt they could have been longer...

but still a nice drop...
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Old 01-31-04, 01:26 PM   #3
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Yes, We Just Dropped Them Between Lessons At College.

Just Of The Hook. We Randomly Selected A Thread And Seen What The Title Was And Dropped A Verse About It.

Yo, Can We Get A Lil' Mur Feedabck On This 1
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Old 01-31-04, 01:33 PM   #4
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weak..flow was average..vocab was weak..played out topic..this was weak...
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