Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Good luck man...

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-30-04 at 07:48 PM

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The Black Plague has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 05:51 PM.

Datruth29 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 05:52 PM.

Structure switch up...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=134665
^^^^^ Datruths Pic ^^^^

Those 20+ wins you got is nice, but your rhymes wont get you respected...
You only beat me because i came half assed...
....And you were just less wack than i expected
You can see i'm immortal, 8 straight wins, yet u still try to kill this...
But man you dont have the right to talk shit...
....when you look like the obese version of will smith
Me and you know the only reason u won our last battle was cuz of his d/r fag votes..
But when his little d/r boys aint around...
.....He's like W. Brady from chapelle show, this little "bitch" just "chokes"
Imma put this kid up in "Smoke", send signals to him and his whole crew...
That even when you suck the mods dicks...
....They still aint gonna change the polls for you*
Kid was too much of a pussy, so he thought he'd join the army to make him tough...
"Be all you can be" is what they say....
....But they told him he just wasn't enough
Already got over 1000 posts? Kid your verse show that you still a rookie...
Just look at his lines and bars...
....More stretched than his own moms pussy

the * i had was because he has been complaining to the mods about his battles, and the polls are getting changed around, he was 22-4, now he's like 26-2... see what im sayin?

And my struc might be off but i was tryin somethin new...

I've Heard it Before, So I'mma leave this Jerk On the Floor
Caught em Bitchin in Bitch Slapped Coz I Merked Him Before
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137974
I put that 1 on his record, You're just a Sorry Bitch
In rap, you're more like your mom, coz you Hardley Spit
I'll make this kid stop rappin, make em Sing Songs, Ya'll
I'll "Back Hand" him across the table, like a Ping Pong Ball
I'm way more Furocious, yo crew is like weed, I'm the Dopest
Giving "Commadments", if you're The Black Plague, I'm Moses
In the first battle, I koed you with more Manuvers
Threw Punches to Swelled u, no wonder you're a "Sore" Loser
I accepted the battle yesterday, u prolly went home to write
Or maybe he got some rhymes from a Canibus Web Site
Either way, you'll get ran like Red Lights, Ok Wise Guy
It's like he went shopping for watches, Bitch tryna "Buy Time"
But with this Bright Shine, I Blind Eyes, So Take That
U got a bermuda triangle flow, yo talent left and never Came Back... Bitch

And no, I don't complain to administraters.. Only if people d/r, and when real people vote, then usually if i'm better, i get the vote.. but the link I gave explains some personals, I Ko i gave him... and the hardley spit punch, meant that his mom swallows (hardley spits), and he hardley spits flows.. a play on wrods, ya know..


uppin this bitch....

Man you know you only beat me because it was one of my 1st battles, i was just a noob then... You tried to take advantage of a noob, wat a bitch

whatever... let the people vote on this one.. i really don't care who wins, as long as the votes are honest.. now stop bitchin about how i merked you the last time..

Voted For: Datruth29

Da Truth- Punches Were Good And Personals Decent, Flow Was On Point And Were Play Was Ok..

The Black Plague- Punches Were Ok Here And There, Had A Personal In There, Wasnt Feelin Your Structure... And Flow Was Decent

Punches- Da Truth
Personals- Tie
Flow- The Black Plague
Wordplay- Da Truth
Metaphor- The Black Plague
Originality- The Black Plague
Multis - Da Truth
Structure- Da Truth

Final Vote--- Da Truth

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Voted For: Datruth29

this battle was close but ima have to give this to sonic the punches were alot better n more original
The black plague's flow was good too but his flow got kinda weak at the end
return the favor
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137874
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136408
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136612

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