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Check in by: 08-06-07 at 03:46 PM

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Fly-E has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-07 03:46 PM.

Red Bull has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-07 12:50 PM.

Buryin' Emcees? Shit kid, I think you're having trouble.
Fly's verses so weak don't even think they could lift the shovel.
Here's what'll I'll do, give you some pointers in your behalf,
Let's start with your structure... what the fucks with the paragraph?
You're fuckin' whack kid, I think you're in the wrong PLACE,
Fly's rhymes don't get noticed... so he types them out in UPPER CASE.
Kid's a fake, but he'll get votes that we don't understand...
Wait a sec, isn't that how your "Clova" alias got banned?
Fuck Bull, I'm The Red Baron for this fight,
'Cause I'm taking out this Fly-er before he even starts his flight.

imma go {WILD-IN-DIS-PLACE} u whole {RHYMES-A-DISCRACE} i "trust my lines" and wen i "bust da nine" it will wipe dat {SMILE-OF-YA-FACE!!} // me i {GLADY-SPIT} dis de end of {DADDY-SMITH} "grab de "MACk 10" n den we will see wats "happenin" wen he drops quicker dan {SAGGY-TITS} // i leave {VETS-EXPOSED} like gettin caught havin {SEX-WIT-HOES} u dont think dis is a "defeat??" wen i come off so "unique" how u claim u got a good record wen u even "cheat" in {X's-N-O's!!} // i {REAK-HAVOK} on {GEEK-FAGGOTS} ure bout to go "missin" ure verse is "slippin" like {CHEAP-MAGNETS!!} i take a look at ure battles and {PEEP-WACKNESS} he calls himself a "gangsta" we he curled up on de couch watchin {PEAK-PRACTISE!!} // see i {AIM-FOR-GOLD} admit ure {GAME-IS-SOLD} plus ure {FAMES-UNKNOWN} how u suppose to be a "thug" wen ya real {NAME-IS-HOE} //

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Fuck Im Not Fuckin Clova U Pussy Ass Bitch Mutha Fucker If I See U On The Streets I Swear To God Imma Beat Ur Fuckin Ass!
Not To Mention Ur Fuckin Alias"s High Knucks And Bull Shut The Fuck Up!
Ur A Pussy!
Talk Hard On The Fuckin Internet Bitch!

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I'm not High Knucks, that's Drakel dude. I'm Red Bull or Bull, you... you're whack.

Voted For: Red Bull

v/ Red Bull... no hate Fly, i even ignored ur obvious structure problems, it's just obvious this was bitten... Fly you had NO PERSONALS and red's whole verse was full of personals with bars you can read... srry, Red Bull gets this easy...

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
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Okay chip listen it wasnt bitten i swear can we jus stop wit all this beef and get bak to wat we all love doin?
Thats all i want?
And good vote thanx for the feed!
Ur up Red Bull good job

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Voted For: Red Bull

imma go {WILD-IN-DIS-PLACE} u whole {RHYMES-A-DISCRACE} i "trust my lines" and wen i "bust da nine" it will wipe dat {SMILE-OF-YA-FACE!!} //
frist of CLOVA THIS AINT YOUR RHYMES....
THIS AINT EVEN HOW YOU TYPE FAGGET... IMMA FIND WHERE U BIT THESE RHYMES FROM....

me i {GLADY-SPIT} dis de end of {DADDY-SMITH} "grab de "MACk 10" n den we will see wats "happenin" wen he drops quicker dan {SAGGY-TITS} // i leave {VETS-EXPOSED} like gettin caught havin {SEX-WIT-HOES} u dont think dis is a "defeat??" wen i come off so "unique" how u claim u got a good record wen u even "cheat" in {X's-N-O's!!} // i {REAK-HAVOK} on {GEEK-FAGGOTS} ure bout to go "missin" ure verse is "slippin" like {CHEAP-MAGNETS!!} i take a look at ure battles and {PEEP-WACKNESS} he calls himself a "gangsta" we he curled up on de couch watchin {PEAK-PRACTISE!!} // see i {AIM-FOR-GOLD} admit ure {GAME-IS-SOLD} plus ure {FAMES-UNKNOWN} how u suppose to be a "thug" wen ya real {NAME-IS-HOE} //

^^^ yo i cant even brake ya shit down the structure is WAY FUCKING OFF... YA STYLE IS WAY DIFFERENT WHICH MEANS U BIT YA VERSE...
if you really came upw ith these lines ya punches would be decent... but u still have streched lines and ya structure is ALL FUCKED UP.....


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Buryin' Emcees? Shit kid, I think you're having trouble.
Fly's verses so weak don't even think they could lift the shovel.
smooth flow... structure perfect and readable... and dont look noobish with the gay ass //

Here's what'll I'll do, give you some pointers in your behalf,
Let's start with your structure... what the fucks with the paragraph?
HA GOOD PERSONAL...

You're fuckin' whack kid, I think you're in the wrong PLACE,
Fly's rhymes don't get noticed... so he types them out in UPPER CASE.
HA ANOTHER GOOD PERSONAL...

Kid's a fake, but he'll get votes that we don't understand...
Wait a sec, isn't that how your "Clova" alias got banned?
HAHA U'r DONE WITH THAT PERSONAL/ PUNCH RIGHT THERE...

Fuck Bull, I'm The Red Baron for this fight,
'Cause I'm taking out this Fly-er before he even starts his flight.
good ending...

what more can i say but MURDA....


he won hands down with personals....
structure was good...
and he's verse was ORIGINAL...
NOT BITTEN LIKE FLY-E

Wow This Is Great U Must Love This Nigga Cuz Ur A Fuckin Dick Rider Fuck U Ransum And Its Not Bitin This Aint Clova This Is My Style Sry U Cant Understand It!
Notice Evryone Who Voted Im Beefin Wit And They All Rode Bulls Dick Sounds Fruity Nigga Well I No Who Really Won Fuck U Ran!

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Uppin for honest votes no dick ridin pleeze good luck Red Bull!

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