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Old 06-18-07, 09:45 PM   #1
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HOLY SHIT! Week 1 Mag.

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Intro.


Hey, i want to welcome ALL of you to a miraculous Week 1 Mag.
First and foremost, i want to thank those participants that
showed. It always represents as a good league, when
members are showing. However, Week 1 was NOT satisfactory.
We had more no shows then battles that were actually eligible for
votes. That TBL is not exceptable. We as a team, must commit
ourselves to what we are doing as a whole in this league.
There's a LOT of potential here, don't ruin your chances
to win a big hand. Every individual needs to play your cards
right. This league (ONLY if we maintain 20+ members until finals)
WILL pay out FOUR cash prizes. Don't fold your hand, if there
is EASY money involved. Everyone here, has a chance. Stay Focused!
Also, something that i really want to sink in is VOTING. People,
come on...this is a MUST. If you are involved enough to drop in
every one of your battles. Then you are commanded to vote in other
match ups. That is NOT an option. You will recieve a loss for every
link not provided. (only 4 needed).




Week 1 Battle Reviews


Lay Fear .vs Tebo

Both opponents wound up dropping late. So the battle was played
out. Lay Fear you dropped ok. I started seeing improvement from
you the past two weeks. But here i feel you failed on wording your
lines to the highest potential. I also seen a bit of played lines,
old concepts. Your one to think fresh. COME fresh. Tebo on rb i've
been seeing you drop pretty descent. Here i wasn't that impressed
you as well dropped ok. I think you had 1 or 2 more quoteables
but other then that. Nothing stood out



Ransum .vs Ancel

This battle, as predicted wound up being one sided. Ransum
has potential. But in my opinion his punctuation errors kills
most of the harshness in his punches. With better wording, a
little more creativity. I see improvement. Ancel i've seen
alot of verses from you. And honestly you surprised me. I didn't
think you'd try hard here. Whether or not you did, i still
think you came good. A few good lines. Make me chuckle. Ancel
walks with the win here


vafinest .vs 2v

vafinest catches a once in a life time no show win against
2v. I don't know what happened pen. This could have been a good
match up.



Jonny Hustle .vs Bayou

Jonny starts off with a no show win. Potentially a good
match. However Bayou failed to drop.


+Sir.Vise+ .vs khakipants

*Sir wound up dropping a verse, and caught a no show
win against Khaki


Ramcees .vs Antonio Banderas

Antonio wound up dropping an eh verse. Ram failed
to drop. Antonio Runs with the no show win here.


Skill .vs don cardyac

cardyac showed. however, skill didn't make it. don
takes the win here


Titan .vs REMIS

FUCKIN AYE. Titan catches the easy win =>

Mav. .vs Mystic

Probably one of the better battles of last week
Unfortunately Mystic couldn't make it. And Mav.
catches the no show win here


Utopia .vs Suburbz

Suburbs signed in at the right time, and caught a battle
for the first week. However, Utopia failed to show.
And sub gets the win


Intense it E .vs FlowIntelligent

I don't know whats been up with either of these two for the
past week. Both fail to show here and both recieve the loss


K.Stubbs .vs Apartheid

I wound up catching a seat in a 360 man tournament down
in Jacksonville, Florida. I apologize for not making it.
Apartheid wound up dropping descent. And walked with the win
here





Week 2 Predictions


vafinest 1-0 .vs Antonio Banderas 1-0
Lay Fear 0-1 .vs Skill 0-1
Gimmick Match: Jonny Hustle 1-0 .vs K.Stubbs 0-1
Zelph 0-0 .vs Phil Benjamin 0-0
Tebo 1-0 .vs *Sir.Vise* 1-0
Apartheid 1-0 .vs Mav. 1-0
Ancel 1-0 .vs Titan 1-0
2v 0-1 .vs RAMCEES 0-1
Bayou 0-1 .vs khakipants 0-1
don cardyac 1-0 .vs Suburbz 1-0
Mystic. .vs Flowintelligent 0-1
Ransum .vs Intense It E 0-1



Top 5 Punches



Number 1
[i]Apartheid .vs K.Stubbs


Quote:
so calm ya barkin, bitch ill cripple ya words
Apart finna blow out ya fuckin cav's....like i was a member of the Spurs


I seriously thought this was dope. It followed along with current
events. You worded it nicely, overall descent concept. Good punch.


Number 2
Ancel .vs Ransum

Quote:
They been downtalkin' your ass, you weak and bound to get bent
So take a break from the league...i'll even provide you the splint


I think this concept was good. The total harshness wasn't as strong
as i think it could have been. I feel you could have worded this better. Ok punch


Number 3
Mav. .vs Mystic

Quote:
Your ass aint royalty,fuck mystic you belong in a cage
And if your verse is workin......it must be minimum wage


Seemed somewhat fresh. a little twist on an old concept. Could
have been worded better. Still ok.


Number 4
Antonio Banderas .vs Ramcees

Quote:
the onslaughts vicious, too much for you to fight off
The only way Ramcee victory, is if the Colts took the night off


Definately GOOD wordplay. Could have had better punctuation. But
overall a good punch.


Number 5
Apartheid .vs K.Stubbs

Quote:
i see you handin out cash? ROFL, i'd like to differ about how you sell shares
cuz how the fuck the Pay Stubbs got gonna add up?
......................When all of his verses are well...fair...


Loved the concept. pay stubbs and the way you worded your set
up. This definately could have been dope. Last line fucked it up though, bad wording




Potential Ranking High-Low


1. Titan
2. Ancel
3. 2v
4. Apartheid
5. K.Stubbs
6. Tebo
7. Mystic.
8. Zelph
9. Lay Fear
10. Antonio Banderas
11. FlowIntelligent
12. Jonny Hustle
13. Bayou
14. Mav.
15. vafinest
16. Ransum
17. don cardyac
18. *Sir.Vise*
19 skill
20. ramcees
21. remis
22. khakipants
23. Suburbz
24. Utopia




Outro

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Old 06-18-07, 09:51 PM   #2
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lol @ ancel. being rated high...he's a rb buddy im guessing
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Old 06-18-07, 09:52 PM   #3
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nice mag Stubbs.

12th huh? OK...

1-2-1 mag going up too?
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Old 06-18-07, 09:53 PM   #4
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good mag though...not much u can say with all no -shows...sry ill show this week stubbs, had college registartaion and baseball camp all week.
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Old 06-18-07, 10:01 PM   #5
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word @ number 1 and 5 punch HOLLA
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Old 06-18-07, 10:05 PM   #6
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Work, s'all good.

Jonny i really want to do 1-2-1's as well. but i don't think anyone realizes
how long it actually takes to do mags lol. I been workin on this one for
at least an hour and a half lol. Mys, you know. I'll try to post it tonight
But if i don't make it. Definately will tomorrow.
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Old 06-18-07, 10:15 PM   #7
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I know how long it takes. I do them for WYR.
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Old 06-18-07, 10:18 PM   #8
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ok then. I'll have it up as soon as i can.
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Old 06-18-07, 10:23 PM   #9
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good enough for me
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Old 06-19-07, 01:36 PM   #10
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good mag sonz.............
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Old 06-19-07, 02:07 PM   #11
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Your ass aint royalty,fuck mystic you belong in a cage
And if your verse is workin......it must be minimum wage

THAT NIGGA BIT THAT LINE FROM MYSTERY~MURDERA
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Old 06-19-07, 06:04 PM   #12
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Apartheid.
word @ number 1 and 5 punch HOLLA



yeah, that was a pretty good sports punch...

it had more depth than mine...
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Old 06-19-07, 08:37 PM   #13
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def a nice mag.....

i just gotta come harder i see thats all...

well good luck in this week battle all....
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Old 06-20-07, 12:29 AM   #14
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lol @ ancel. being rated high...he's a rb buddy im guessing

Why wouldn't he be rated high you retard? He's one of the only people to participate in an actual battle in week one.
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Old 06-20-07, 12:30 AM   #15
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Your ass aint royalty,fuck mystic you belong in a cage
And if your verse is workin......it must be minimum wage

THAT NIGGA BIT THAT LINE FROM MYSTERY~MURDERA

yeah, he sure did. pretty sad. rofl..
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