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Blazinhot | 0 | 0% | |
H.D. | 3 | 100.00% | |
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04-14-06, 04:08 AM | #1 | |
~Lyrical Nirvana~
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Blazinhot Vs. H.D.
IP: 5651 7A36
~Rules~ Topic: "Quest for Truth" Line limit: 20-50(negotiate in checkin) Check in by: Monday 11:59pm Drop by: Wednesday 11:59pm Votes due by: Friday 11:59pm Werd!
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04-14-06, 06:01 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 5F3B 6A14
yeah I'm here..l. so Blazin' here we go again eh?
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04-15-06, 03:20 AM | #3 |
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IP: 127E 43A1
lol yea, mabye we can get some votes this time
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04-17-06, 03:54 AM | #4 |
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IP: 127E 43A1
didn't have much time, keystyle, goodluck H.D. Life started out innecent with adam and eve in a holy garden but they ran and decieved God, tricked by the snake, the evil one adam ate the apple, n our upheaval begun the lord kicked them out of the exotic land then da devil brought forth his chaotic plan da couple had three children, two strong men and a pretty girl, but Satin was among them da older brotha wit hate killed his own kin his lil bro so he could have the throne, win his sister, evil and sin was introduced to us so now to today to cuss, is nothing to us so like a bacteria, one of us was infected and thus the next ones got it n was neglected to truth, holyness, and everything selected for us to be in God's eyes, but was rejected by us in suprise, so he got tired n reflected he decided to start over,but only the selected the great flood occured, but God was diconnected agian from us and in no way was earth perfected and as you look at the human race these days from around the globe, communist chinese ways to the ghetto, where the bullets dont stop n bodies full wit clips drop, that pop pop to Russia and Ukraine, where the mafia reign where if you dont agree, you get to see ya brains or anywhere in the world, doesn't matter where but man never is a large blood splatter rare murder, suicide, because of hate or jelousy cuz of anything,n that'll bring em to hell n be wit Satin, but dont try not to let him get you this all cuz of that 1st sin, when adam forgot to listen to what God said, n now look where we are thousands of people either dead or behind the bars |
04-17-06, 11:57 AM | #5 | |
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IP: 215F 8CED
You can get degrees in philosophy and philology yet logically
Yet never see through the hypocrisy, that if you lack sympathy No matter how much empathy you have, you can never got grab Clamp, take hold of, or grasp or begin to comprehend real plight You’ll never truly understand another’s struggle or fight You could be coldly logical, and miss every iatrical part That sets part the tangible, from moral illusions You see morals are like fingerprints no matter how ignorant Everyone has some, and they’re all different, yet insignificant Never need em to determine one indistinguishable individual From the next, hell you don’t even need origin, race, or sex Beliefs, lie beneath every surface, their your blockade Your reason to raid, the reason you want to get paid Reason you want to get laid, reason for nearly anything you do It’s true, and most beliefs are conjured up with one goal in mind To find happiness, to define happiness, is simple A state of bliss, but what brings happiness? It’s different for each person, but knowledge is always the key You see it’s either do to lack of, the thirst for more, or being sure Those with knowledge generally horde it for themselves They want to be Santa and keep the ignorant working elves The not completely oblivious set goals, search for answers to the untold They know better than to simply accept, almost too well The paranoid plain in which they dwell, has intangible walls Though they’re fake they can not break, even with the truth in their face You see they’ve been blinded; they search for the truth but will never find it And the very few that do, either become corrupt or try to share it Forgetting the meek sheep they left behind can not bare it So they become social lunatics, misguided missiles, criminals Of the state, no make that humanity, yet sadly it’s just reality The search for truth is a fallacy that logically can only end in misery Present day and historically, religiously if your catholic you have to believe Total knowledge is not meant for mankind as discussed in Adam & Eve
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04-17-06, 02:42 PM | #6 |
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IP: 127E 43A1
aight lets get some votes up in this bitch
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04-17-06, 09:29 PM | #7 | |
Just searching.
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IP: 8262 49AE
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What Bible are you reading? |
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04-17-06, 10:49 PM | #8 | |
Light Weight
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IP: 7439 4AD0
^ lol hades
O.k here we goo... Blazin, your verse was alright. the flow was the best part though. everything else seemed kinda boring, i mean just the way you worded everything was dull... there was little imagery and it almost seemed like you were using a rhyme dictionary for the verse and majority of your lines were filler. You needed more complexity, should tried adding metaphors/ similies or philosophy into it.. Just work on metas and your writing will improve... My vote goes to H.D based on imagery and the read it provided, had good philsophy and established a good beat in my head. Let me say one thing though H... You're lucky you had internals because your flow was absolutely terrible in some places. v/ H.d for an overall better read. pzzz
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04-20-06, 01:34 PM | #9 | |
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IP: 27E9 2A04
ok this battle was another just aiight battle....nothin amazing...but cool....imagery has to go to H.D. .....and Flow .....Blazinhot gits that......Concept.....H.D. cuz blazin just took an adam and eve story......vocab definetly H.D. .....both verse I felt needed more depht to them.....and better concepts...but in the end.....my vot goes to....
V/H.D.
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04-20-06, 03:07 PM | #10 |
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IP: 127E 43A1
thanks for the votes, n i did come shitty here
good job H.D 0-2 uppin votes |
04-20-06, 05:38 PM | #11 |
WhoAreYou?
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IP: A181 D033
Blazinhot had a clearer flow to his piece but i think that in terms of everything else, HD took this. his piece seemed to have more deph to it than blazin's piece, in addition to a wider vocabulary, and HD's imagery also put him ahead of blazin in this battle. this was an average battle but i think that overall HD took this one. blazin' you need to flip the script more when approaching these topics, and come from an unexpected angle when you dropped.
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04-22-06, 10:22 PM | #12 | |
~Lyrical Nirvana~
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IP: 27E9 2A04
H.D. wins by KO.......
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