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Blazinhot 0 0%
H.D. 3 100.00%
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Old 04-14-06, 04:08 AM   #1
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Blazinhot Vs. H.D.

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Topic: "Quest for Truth"

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Old 04-14-06, 06:01 PM   #2
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yeah I'm here..l. so Blazin' here we go again eh?
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Old 04-15-06, 03:20 AM   #3
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lol yea, mabye we can get some votes this time

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Old 04-17-06, 03:54 AM   #4
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didn't have much time, keystyle,
goodluck H.D.

Life started out innecent with adam and eve
in a holy garden but they ran and decieved
God, tricked by the snake, the evil one
adam ate the apple, n our upheaval begun
the lord kicked them out of the exotic land
then da devil brought forth his chaotic plan
da couple had three children, two strong men
and a pretty girl, but Satin was among them
da older brotha wit hate killed his own kin
his lil bro so he could have the throne, win
his sister, evil and sin was introduced to us
so now to today to cuss, is nothing to us
so like a bacteria, one of us was infected
and thus the next ones got it n was neglected
to truth, holyness, and everything selected
for us to be in God's eyes, but was rejected
by us in suprise, so he got tired n reflected
he decided to start over,but only the selected
the great flood occured, but God was diconnected
agian from us and in no way was earth perfected
and as you look at the human race these days
from around the globe, communist chinese ways
to the ghetto, where the bullets dont stop
n bodies full wit clips drop, that pop pop
to Russia and Ukraine, where the mafia reign
where if you dont agree, you get to see ya brains
or anywhere in the world, doesn't matter where
but man never is a large blood splatter rare
murder, suicide, because of hate or jelousy
cuz of anything,n that'll bring em to hell n be
wit Satin, but dont try not to let him get you
this all cuz of that 1st sin, when adam forgot to
listen to what God said, n now look where we are
thousands of people either dead or behind the bars
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Old 04-17-06, 11:57 AM   #5
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You can get degrees in philosophy and philology yet logically
Yet never see through the hypocrisy, that if you lack sympathy
No matter how much empathy you have, you can never got grab
Clamp, take hold of, or grasp or begin to comprehend real plight
You’ll never truly understand another’s struggle or fight
You could be coldly logical, and miss every iatrical part
That sets part the tangible, from moral illusions
You see morals are like fingerprints no matter how ignorant
Everyone has some, and they’re all different, yet insignificant
Never need em to determine one indistinguishable individual
From the next, hell you don’t even need origin, race, or sex
Beliefs, lie beneath every surface, their your blockade
Your reason to raid, the reason you want to get paid
Reason you want to get laid, reason for nearly anything you do
It’s true, and most beliefs are conjured up with one goal in mind
To find happiness, to define happiness, is simple
A state of bliss, but what brings happiness?

It’s different for each person, but knowledge is always the key
You see it’s either do to lack of, the thirst for more, or being sure
Those with knowledge generally horde it for themselves
They want to be Santa and keep the ignorant working elves
The not completely oblivious set goals, search for answers to the untold
They know better than to simply accept, almost too well
The paranoid plain in which they dwell, has intangible walls
Though they’re fake they can not break, even with the truth in their face
You see they’ve been blinded; they search for the truth but will never find it
And the very few that do, either become corrupt or try to share it
Forgetting the meek sheep they left behind can not bare it
So they become social lunatics, misguided missiles, criminals
Of the state, no make that humanity, yet sadly it’s just reality
The search for truth is a fallacy that logically can only end in misery
Present day and historically, religiously if your catholic you have to believe
Total knowledge is not meant for mankind as discussed in Adam & Eve
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Old 04-17-06, 02:42 PM   #6
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aight lets get some votes up in this bitch
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Old 04-17-06, 09:29 PM   #7
Crazy Hades
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Quote:
adam ate the apple, n our upheaval begun


What Bible are you reading?
 
Old 04-17-06, 10:49 PM   #8
I Am Unreal.
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^ lol hades

O.k here we goo...

Blazin, your verse was alright. the flow was the best part though. everything else seemed kinda boring, i mean just the way you worded everything was dull... there was little imagery and it almost seemed like you were using a rhyme dictionary for the verse and majority of your lines were filler. You needed more complexity, should tried adding metaphors/ similies or philosophy into it.. Just work on metas and your writing will improve...

My vote goes to H.D based on imagery and the read it provided, had good philsophy and established a good beat in my head. Let me say one thing though H... You're lucky you had internals because your flow was absolutely terrible in some places.

v/ H.d for an overall better read. pzzz
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Old 04-20-06, 01:34 PM   #9
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ok this battle was another just aiight battle....nothin amazing...but cool....imagery has to go to H.D. .....and Flow .....Blazinhot gits that......Concept.....H.D. cuz blazin just took an adam and eve story......vocab definetly H.D. .....both verse I felt needed more depht to them.....and better concepts...but in the end.....my vot goes to....


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Old 04-20-06, 03:07 PM   #10
BlAzInHoT
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thanks for the votes, n i did come shitty here
good job H.D
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Old 04-20-06, 05:38 PM   #11
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Blazinhot had a clearer flow to his piece but i think that in terms of everything else, HD took this. his piece seemed to have more deph to it than blazin's piece, in addition to a wider vocabulary, and HD's imagery also put him ahead of blazin in this battle. this was an average battle but i think that overall HD took this one. blazin' you need to flip the script more when approaching these topics, and come from an unexpected angle when you dropped.

v/ HD
 
Old 04-22-06, 10:22 PM   #12
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H.D. wins by KO.......
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