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Old 04-29-06, 08:32 AM   #1
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Odi et Amo
 
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Çhö-каhй Miшaйg vs. Jay 286

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Old 04-29-06, 08:13 PM   #2
Jay Rose
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yep yep...im checkin
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


 
Old 05-03-06, 06:32 PM   #3
Jay Rose
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im doin black pearl.....oh and another one of my crazy twists
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


 
Old 05-03-06, 07:30 PM   #4
Ebircs
The Alien Toung
 
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From: Harrisburg P.A
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yea........i'm doing translucent conspiracies...
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"when i rap they say im radical...but if rappin dont do it...ima clap u in the clavicle to classical music"

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Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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Old 05-03-06, 09:36 PM   #5
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The Alien Toung
 
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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

Quote:
Originally Posted by Apathy
"when i rap they say im radical...but if rappin dont do it...ima clap u in the clavicle to classical music"

Quote:
Originally Posted by Chris Stylez
Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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Old 05-04-06, 12:01 AM   #6
Jay Rose
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yea so topic was black pearl....song is called "DO" check it out....... im so creative

DO - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3883340
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


 
Old 05-04-06, 12:02 AM   #7
Jay Rose
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IP: 9C2B 06EC

the post says 12:01 but my fuckin comp says 11:49 so i made it on time
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


 
Old 05-04-06, 01:54 AM   #8
Ebircs
The Alien Toung
 
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From: Harrisburg P.A
IP: 7996 9D6E

^^ she should let you slide bro....

if you get DQ'd for 2 mins I'd be pissed anyway...
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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

Quote:
Originally Posted by Apathy
"when i rap they say im radical...but if rappin dont do it...ima clap u in the clavicle to classical music"

Quote:
Originally Posted by Chris Stylez
Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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Old 05-04-06, 08:11 AM   #9
Jay Rose
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yea at 8 i checked my pm's n realized this shit was due tongiht....then my girl came over, i had a windown from 8-8:30 to write one verse, n i had to freestyle half of it, n put it all together from 11-12.....then it was back to the girl....so i mean i didnt put much effort into another week....maybeeeeeeeeeeeee if we had better topics...haha, but check it out its still a funny one
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


 
Old 05-04-06, 12:32 PM   #10
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Come on guys, you should know I'm not THAT strict...

Just happy you dropped and if you want better topics Jay, suggest some
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Old 05-04-06, 02:13 PM   #11
Ebircs
The Alien Toung
 
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no doubt,
DQ's pritty chill for a "drama queen" !!!

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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

Quote:
Originally Posted by Apathy
"when i rap they say im radical...but if rappin dont do it...ima clap u in the clavicle to classical music"

Quote:
Originally Posted by Chris Stylez
Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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Old 05-05-06, 12:06 PM   #12
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
 
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From: Philly
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Cho - You flowed pretty well on this one. Message came across pretty good too. You and Tito must not like hooks....lol. Anyway, this was a pretty good track, but it was a little hard to follow you and your story on the first listen.

Jay - Hook coulda got a little annoying, but it wasn't to me.....hmmm. Anyway, this song was tight in my opinion. Your flow was nice on this shit. Story was nice too.....lol. I think you had a really enjoyable track. Only thing I didn't like is during the bridge near the end you were just silent, then you came back in like 4 bars later.

Vote - Jay.....only slightly though. This was a toughie, but I thought his was a little more enjoyable.
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Old 05-05-06, 12:14 PM   #13
Jay Rose
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im sayin shit in the backround during that silence...if you listen really really carefully....its sublimial...haha
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


 
Old 05-05-06, 06:01 PM   #14
Willa
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jay beat not feelign it at all
intro is ok kind of annoying
lyrics were pretty cool felling the hook
presence delivery is pretty good
flow was overall good didnt hear it go off until you freed the last part lol
then it turned bad you shouldnt have done that last little part idk


cho beat is pretty cool different
lyrics were goood i got a few messages from thsi track btu honestly i dont think most will get it
flow was good no complaints
presence was cool nothing special

im gonna go with cho jsut by a little bit but both my oyd heads did hteir thing props to both of you
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Old 05-06-06, 06:44 AM   #15
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Cho:

The flow was on point throughout the entire track so nice going on that, may put some more emphasis on certain words or phrases but overall, you had it down. The lyrics itself were good, I like how you built it up towards the ending. Like how you added that last phrase with good emotion. A hook would've made this even better though, didn't consider it? Nice track all in all, maybe a bit short though...would've loved to hear more.



Jay:

Wooooooo *shakes to the beat* Haha, I love this beat first of all. And you picked like the perfect beat for this topic, good choice Got a great energy on this track, verses were on point for real. I hear the do what you do part in the bridge, good going on that one as well. Stays in the mind, catchy hook, catchy shit as a whole. Feelin this for real, *still shaking* lmao



Aight, got two different tracks right here...got one deep, meaningful one by Cho. His bad aspects were lack of a hook and the length of the track, could've been much better if he added more to the song. Then you got the shake track by Jay, got a great energy on it. Only bad thing is lyrical substance but with a track like this, the only goal is to make chicas shake and you succeeded

So vote: Jay 286, no hate Cho, you had some good shit as well man
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