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09-16-04, 09:01 PM | #1 | ||||
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Elevation Time...
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Okay since I left when I had my elevation class going on the skill-challenged didnt get to elevate...now i will just do sumtin in LL to help yall out...this time im not taking individuals...just gonna explain shit with examples...so Mental sticky this...thanks...
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09-16-04, 09:28 PM | #2 | |||||
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First Lesson....
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Introducing alot n this one and Ill go in depth about it later...Im going to use Feeble Minded's verse against Reckless in this cause its prolly one of the best spits on this site that isnt in a battle thats not closed...I'd use something enygma used recently but it may promote swaying...ok so anyways heres Feebles verse...
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Now here is verse displays awesome witty punches...most of RV doesnt even understand this...and thats why I am doing this... u copy RB vets styles & punches, i'll swallow this head Ok, now the first line gets you intro'd to the punch...you get the point that he is going to make a punch out of this statement... cuz even orders are sick and tired of u following them .. And he delivers it with a clever, witty meta...for the slow people that are still saying "no it sucks ass"...he is talking about a delivery (UPS, FedEx) and you tracking it on the internet...see, i told you it was good! pussy, i'll tell on u for cheatin, but won't get my tattles far Another intro...this doesnt introduce the punch as well as his opener...but it works.. cuz i realized ur names missing the "W" like ur battles are Opponents name = Reckless...usually spelled like Wreckless...witty personal...hitting very hard... im waiting to beat Spul, a must when flowing, fuck.. Intro...he's wording it so his wordplay will work even better in the punch... your hated so much.. u make a-rival just by showing up Awesome wordplay...arrival is changed to a rival (enemy)...see people, it is dope...he makes the wordplay work by saing your hated so much... i`ll wreck some, with no affection - get whored & perish More of a filler intro...just there to make the 2nd bar to rhyme well...this is okay as long as most of your verse doesnt have it... if you could step son, it'd be by a former marriage Decent punch with sum wordplay...for the slow kids...Step Son---Former Marriage...get it?...thought so... and remember that, whats the cost to be reminded? Another one of those filler to rhyme well... ya sig'll go from winning streak to "Loss to feeble minded" A personal...not amazing but decent... don't speak in my presence, faggot, itll end with hatred Good intro to the wordplay and punch...this is a skill u must have to get better... cuz ur room to talk is about to get fucking renovated Tight punch and nice wordplay...kids that dont get it...Room's get renovated...yeah, of course, you knew that all along right?... cuz you've got fans on here man, but confess it they .. anticipating the punch...ahh!! gave me more respect than u when I came here yesterday Witty punch...these hit hard and have people chuckling...everyone needs to learn this attribute... the lesson? sway, cuz u got no style for boastin kid Intro to the punch...notice how he says style in the 1st bar to introduce his punch about his opponents form...getting it now? matter fact, only kinda form u got is the one u posted in Witty personal...hits hard.... its no guess i'll protest, but wont let up the beating Ok...here comes the punch.. i mean.. my fists & ur face should set up a meeting Decent...not amazing though...least fav bar of the verse even Phenom-in-all hates u, nobody bought it though Ok..setting up for the personal by mentioning Phenom in all... till he said 'im out like spuls chance of makin good audio' A personal that delivers a punch...i hope you can get it lol... This should help...seriously...read it...study the styles...try to imitate it...word lets elevate people!
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09-16-04, 09:32 PM | #3 | |||||||
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well i got the punches it was a decent verse but the best i disagree read e looch verse when he beat me or dv8 verse aganist reckless them was dope this is just ok to me now latins verse aganist i daughter that was fucking dope and so wasnt i daughters verse i would like to see this thread though to see what you gotta say
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09-16-04, 09:34 PM | #4 | ||||
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Dont worry...there may be better...but thats the first that came to my mind to evaluate for everyone...plus it had example of meta'spersonals, and wordplay...it was an all around dope verse...just trying to help people elevate so the skill level on this site gets better...
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09-16-04, 09:39 PM | #5 | |||||||
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ok this is a good idea is there anyway i can help?
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09-16-04, 09:42 PM | #6 | ||||
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i dont think so...unless u have sumtin in mind
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09-16-04, 09:49 PM | #7 | |||||||
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yup i do i wanna help the newbees who really suck that noone wants to work with to make them good like sinner would be if anyone bothered to spend time and help him
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09-16-04, 09:55 PM | #8 | ||||
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sure...if anyone who wants help from empire just say so..
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09-16-04, 10:08 PM | #9 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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i want empire to help me aight
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09-16-04, 11:49 PM | #10 | ||||
Straight From Da Lab!
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whos world famous??
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09-17-04, 12:00 AM | #11 | |||||||
Thank You, Come Again
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feeble minded...I can help people topicaly...........
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09-17-04, 12:39 AM | #12 | ||||||
Internet is so beef...
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that was the biggest example of D/r ever. Have you been on original wile you were gone? well anyway if you cant figure out the punches in that battle, then your hopeless at text battles.
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09-17-04, 01:34 AM | #13 | |||||
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rofl
fucka feeble.
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09-17-04, 06:03 AM | #14 | ||||
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Phat Mic...you are an idiot for saying that is D/R...im trying to help people who need to elevate...so shut the fuck up and keep ur faggot thoughts to urself...Mental...sticky this
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09-17-04, 06:05 AM | #15 | |||||||
Bangs like bikini attol
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I think L.I needs some attitude elevation......
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